Facebook Ads Before/After
Example Facebook Ad re-write aimed at bartenders:
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Before:
“I’m struggling to find the career for me” → This is something we hear often.
The problem is most people are approaching work the way their parents did. They think that there’s just one unicorn career, or some kind of quick fix.
But the truth is we’re in a new landscape of work: the gig economy.
It’s an economy that rewards skills, not credentials.
And more importantly, UNIQUE skills.
The more unique skills you have in your toolbelt, the more value you’ll create (no matter where you go) because you’ll have more unique experiences to pull from.
I believe that everyone should see what bartending is like because it will give you a BUNCH of skills that the new landscape of work highly values.
AND it can amplify the unique abilities that you already have.
We made a free guide to show you what these highly valued skills are (whether you get them through bartending, or not).
After Updates:
“I’m struggling to find the career for me” → This is something we hear often.
The problem is most people are approaching work the way their parents did. They think that there’s just one unicorn career, or some kind of quick fix.
But the truth is we’re in a new landscape of work: the gig economy.
- The gig economy rewards skills, not credentials.
- The gig economy rewards UNIQUE skills.
- The more unique skills you have in your toolbelt, the more value you’ll create (no matter where you go) because you’ll have more unique experiences to pull from.
I believe that everyone should see what bartending is like because it will give you a BUNCH of skills that the new landscape of work highly values.
It can amplify the unique abilities that you already have.
We made a free guide to show you what these highly valued skills are (whether you get them through bartending, or not). I highly suggest you download it, and pickup a few valuable traits that will prepare you for the move towards a gig economy.
Example Facebook Ad rewrite for recruitment
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Earn up to $20/hr helping other busy people keep their homes clean!
If you’re looking for a real legit way to earn some money during your spare time, this is it.
We’re a home cleaning platform matching people who want to clean and people who need their homes to be cleaned. Yes, it's just like Uber, except it's for home cleaning.
Get trained by us and be certified to access a wide pool of customers who are willing to pay extra for some extra cleaning help around their houses.
We don’t care if you’re male, female, too old or too young. If you’re willing to work, we’ll help you out in starting your own freelance cleaning business.
Click learn more below to leave your name and mobile number. Our friendly staff will help you start finding clients in no time!
Image for ad : Our cleaner in midst of cleaning up a home for her client.
After:
Earn up to $20/hr helping other busy people keep their homes clean!
If you’re looking for a real legit way to earn some money during your spare time, this is it.
✅ Earn up to $20/hr cleaning homes.
✅ Jobs are under 10 miles to each location.
✅ We train you and then send you gigs.
✅ No previous experience required.
We’re a home cleaning platform matching people who want to clean and people who need their homes to be cleaned. Yes, it's just like Uber, except it's for home cleaning.
Get trained by us and be certified to access a wide pool of customers who are willing to pay extra for some extra cleaning help around their houses.
We don’t care if you’re male, female, too old or too young. If you’re willing to work, we’ll help you out in starting your own freelance cleaning business.
Click learn more below to leave your name and mobile number. Our friendly staff will help you start finding clients in no time!
Image for ad : Our cleaner in midst of cleaning up a home for her client.
Example Facebook Ad for online golf instruction
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Before:
See how XX% of golfers are adding an average of 34.5 yards to their drives with the 20 Minute Distance Fix!!
There's only X number of ways you can add distance to your golf game, and most either rely on:
- Age,
- Flexibility,
- Lots of time,
- Lots of money, or
- Don't work at all
But you've found the one way that doesn't discriminate for age, works no matter how inflexible you may be, can be done in 3 weeks (most see XX yards in the first day!), and doesn't cost an arm and a leg to do!
My guess, is that you're skeptical...
And I understand that, I would be too.
Brandon Singleton was in your shoes. He was just as skeptical, but decided to give the 20 Minute Distance Fix a try...
He didn't even know how well the program was working...
Until the first time he tee'd it up.
I'll let him tell you about it.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ljm_vSwaI9tQCZ46VVKspygjtO0SogzA/view
But this isn't an isolated incident.
Here's a snapshot of what the 20 Minute Distance Fix did for the guys from my pilot class for the course...
| Name | Starting Speed (mph) | Max Speed (mph) | Total Gain (mph) | Potential Yards Gained | |
| 1 | Peter Voss | 83 | 110 | 27 | 70.2 |
| 2 | Richard Long | 96 | 121 | 25 | 65 |
| 3 | Tom Grys | 95 | 118 | 23 | 59.8 |
| 4 | Steven Schneider | 80 | 103 | 23 | 59.8 |
| 5 | Kenneth Hedges | 79 | 101 | 22 | 57.2 |
| 6 | Robert Schleusner | 70 | 92 | 22 | 57.2 |
| 7 | Steven Maroney | 110 | 132 | 22 | 57.2 |
| 8 | Michael Reichert | 95 | 115 | 20 | 52 |
| 9 | Kevin Cameron | 100 | 120 | 20 | 52 |
| 10 | Kip Kramer | 88 | 107 | 19 | 49.4 |
In all there were XX students in the pilot class with every single student that finished the class gaining at least 10 yards with an average of 35 yards gained!
And they're doing this without:
- Spending $500+ on a new driver
- Spending hours in the gym, or yoga studio
- Buying a bunch of different training aids that don't work, or
- Doing anything crazy!
The unique training methods that you'll learn in this class have already proven to add TONS of distance to your game...
...without changing up your current swing!
I've always said that there are no "magic fixes" in golf, but this class is about the closest thing to it that you're going to find!
And the best part is that I'm going to let you try it out for 10 days for just a buck!
After: The ad was great we only re-wrote the first part.
There's only X number of ways you can add distance to your golf game, and most either rely on:
- Age.
- Flexibility.
- Lots of time.
- Lots of money.
But we've found one way that doesn't discriminate for age, works even for inflexible people, and can be done in 3 weeks (most see XX yards in the first day!), and doesn't cost an arm and a leg to do! Here's some results this past month:
✅ Brandon Singleton: Gained 70.2 yards in 22 days.
✅ Peter Voss: Gained 230.2 yards in 37 days.
✅ Fakey McFaker: Gained 30.2 yards in 4 days.
But this isn't an isolated incident. Here's a snapshot of what the 20 Minute Distance Fix did for the guys from my pilot class for the course...
[INSERT CHART AND REST OF THE AD]
Example Facebook Ad For Webinar
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Before:
Does your child (grades 6-9) struggle with writing? Do they need a step-by-step approach to guide them through the writing process?
Would you like your child to be more independent in their writing?
Are you looking for a community of learners and educators that will encourage your child on their way to becoming a confident writer?
If you answered yes to those questions, you'll want to be at this 30-minute webinar on August 6th, at 10:30am MST / 9:30am PST.
- We're going to show you how Summit Writing Academy can help your child learn to write step-by-step.
- You'll see how being part of an online learning community will encourage your child to write more.
- And finally, you'll see how you can meet your reporting requirements with easy one-click access to your child's writing and progress reports.
Click Here to Sign Up
After:
Mission Possible: Get Your Child In a Writing Habit
Does your child (grades 6-9) struggle with writing?
Would you like your child to be more independent in their writing?
Are you looking for a community of learners and educators that will guide your child into becoming a confident writer?
If you answered yes to those questions, you'll want to be at this 30-minute webinar on August 6th, at 10:30am MST / 9:30am PST.
We'll talk about:
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The first key to getting your child in a writing habit (from “5 Keys to Unlocking a Writing Habit” by Marina Gabor)
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Summit Writing Academy's proven, step-by-step training program.
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How our online learning community will encourage your child to write more.
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How to meet your reporting requirements with easy one-click access to your child's writing and progress reports.
BONUS: "5 Keys to Unlocking a Writing Habit" email mini-series
Click Here to Sign Up
Example Facebook Ad for Ebook
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Before:
Trying to create healthy meals for your family can be an exercise in frustration.
Meal planning takes time and it can be challenging to find well-balanced meals that are quick, easy, and can be adapted to satisfy various nutritional needs (ex. gluten-free) and preferences (ex. vegan, vegetarian, or omnivore).
Even more frustrating is having to throw away spoiled produce that you had every intention of cooking but never found the time or the “right” recipe to use it in. Money down the drain!
Enter Buddha Bowls: The Vegetarian Zen Way
Our eBook covers:
- What Buddha bowls are and why they are the PERFECT meal
- How to create your own awesome combinations based on your needs and specific tastes
- Some of our favorite ingredient combinations (recipes) plus ideas for sauces and dressings
After:
Trying to create healthy meals for your family can be incredibly frustrating...
✅ Meal planning and shopping always take longer than you expect.
✅ It's tough to adapt a meal to satisfy different nutritional needs and preferences.
✅ if you change your mind, you'll end up throwing away spoiled produce that you had every intention of cooking but never found the time or the “right” recipe to use it in. Money down the drain!
Enter...... Buddha Bowls: The Vegetarian Zen Way
Our eBook covers:
- What Buddha Bowls are and why they are the PERFECT meal
- How to create your own awesome combinations based on your needs and specific tastes
- Some of our favorite ingredient combinations (recipes) plus ideas for sauces and dressings
Example Real Estate Facebook Ad
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Before:
Attention [Your City]!
Do you know anyone looking to buy a home?
Follow here: https://bit.ly/2G6Xa6n
Follow here: https://bit.ly/2G6Xa6n
[Your Name and Signature]
After:
Attention Houston!
Do you know anyone looking to buy a home? Follow here: https://bit.ly/2G6Xa6n
-$224,453: 1 bedroom 2 bath, 1,600 sqft, on cul-de-sac.
-$120,383: 2 bedroom 2 bath, 1,600 sqft, on the lake.
Follow here for full list: https://bit.ly/2G6Xa6n
Thanks!
Fernando
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