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Live Copywriting w/ Sam Parr, CEO of TheHustle


Neville

 

Our ideas on how to make the page better:

  • Show more results. 

  • Show previous successes. 
  • Show quotes from members. 
  • Personalized touch?? Any?
  • See what others are doing. 
  • Community aspect. 
  • Social proof stuff.
  • Emphasize your backgrounds and accolades way more. 
  • What you’ve built. 
  • Video of an “ah ha” moment?
  • Perhaps state a goal.
  • Good idea vs Bad idea example.
  • Emphasize the chance to ask questions + get feedback.
  • Highlight the process that most people follow vs a better approach to ideate, test, etc. (maybe as a visual).
  • How many other people are participating / have participated? ← Show the ballers. 
  • Is there a screenshot or a video snippet you can share from a lecture? Give people an idea of what the inside actually looks like.
  • 2% conversion. Made in ClickFunnels.
  • Add a FAQ page.

 

Some background on the previous Ideation Bootcamp:

  • Started with a story:

  • Creating a company is like writing a hit song.
  • 2% conversion. Made in ClickFunnels.
  • Have 500 pieces of feedback in a doc. 
  • Someone started a company that did a million in sales from it.
  • "Our Goal is to save 10 years of heartache and time."

 

What people will get out of this bootcamp:

  • You will come away with a framework for judging if ideas are worthy. 

  • If you have a great idea, this will help you execute it faster. 
  • If you have a crap idea, this will help you kill it faster and move on. 
  • Our Goal is to save 10 years of heartache and time. 
  • You’ll come away with a community of friends (seriously, this is one of the best parts of the entire thing).
  • Myself and employees are in the group all day on FB. 
  • Learn a framework to identify opportunities and design scalable products. 
  • You’ll use real numbers, not theory and vague ideas. Get clarity you can actually test.

 

Some titles and value proposition ideas:

  • Do you have an idea and want to run it by Sam? 

  • For  $___ we will ____ by ____.
  • For [PRICE] we will [VALUE] by [DATE].
  • You will come away with a framework for judging if ideas are worthy. 
  • If you have a great idea, this will help you execute it faster. 
  • If you have a crap idea, this will help you kill it faster and move on. 
  • Goal: Our goal is get you to a place where you can quickly tell if an idea has legs or not.
  • Find your audience. Test your idea. Get feedback from successful founders.
  • Learn a framework to identify opportunities and design scalable products. 
  • GOAL: Our Goal is to save 10 years of heartache and time.

 

Ideas for a FAQ page:

  • How long is this course?

  • What will I learn by the end?
  • How long do I get access to the community?
  • How much access to The Hustle staff do I get?
  • What dates are the bootcamp?

 

Here's some sections we think can be added to the page:

 

This is an example of a testimonial that can be added:

 

This is another testimonial that actually shows she STOPPED her current business and pivoted, saving possibly years of effort:

 

Goal for Ideation Bootcamp:

 

This is a section that describes the awesome community:

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Google Doc Notes: [link]

- Full Livestream Video:

- The Ideation Bootcamp: [link]

- The Original Sales Page: [link]

Sincerely,

Neville Medhora

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