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I want you to hand-copy this ad ⬇

Get a piece of paper and hand-copy this Clixlo Price Comparison Ad:

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Snap a photo of your hand-written Clixlo Ad and post it below.
(...or email it to [email protected] if you're not a member).
 

We promise not to judge your handwriting skills!

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Donny Widjaja Enthusiast

Donny Widjaja

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Neville Grand Master

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This is awesome @Donny Widjaja! I think one important lesson is:

An entire concept can be explained in a small space. 

This ad easily shows a company why they should switch!

Neville Grand Master

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Here's my CopyWork for this Clixio ad:

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Donny Widjaja Enthusiast

Donny Widjaja

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Neville said 2 minutes ago:

This ad easily shows a company why they should switch!

So true.  I noticed the price is missing from my copywork... I think that's because I was sold on the software already. 😅

Nicolette Moore Collaborator

Nicolette Moore

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Stumbled across this with a sleeping baby on me, so instead of waiting for him to wake up so I can get pen + paper, I just went to Canva. I hope it doesn't take away from the exercise...I feel like it was interesting just to build it out in Canva regardless.

Making the font bold vs unbold, the italicized vs not. Even the different font size they used was interesting to consider. 

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Neil Mclaren Newbie

Neil Mclaren

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Not sure what I make of this, the sell is very compelling, but I dislike the term 'softwares' so got a bit hung up on that.

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Neville Grand Master

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Hey @Neil Mclaren good on you for at least doing this, I think it teaches so much to make a comparison like this. 

You could substitute "Softwares" with something else. 

However this images is one of my all time favorites in terms of it shows how much time and money and hassle and complication you can save with a single program!

Neville Grand Master

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Hey @Nicolette Moore you might actually get EXTRA CREDIT for re-creating this digitally, and now you can move around the ad or make it different. 

Love it! Always impressed with your work.

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Neville Grand Master

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This is awesome Deeya, great work!

Guest Anonymous

Anonymous

Thanks for this exercise we hope for more in the future.

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Neville Grand Master

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Thanks Ifeanyi! Hopefully you learned something from this exercise 🙂 

Neville Grand Master

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Great work doing this Evan, I bet it went quick and you learned a cool lesson 😎

Guest Anonymous

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Guest Anonymous

Anonymous

Seems not to be very trustworthy.

 

Neville Grand Master

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Thanks for the feedback Gordon. 

The point of the lesson was not about the company but this specific type of ad. But appreciate it!

Guest Anonymous

Anonymous

Copywork img attached.
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Neville Grand Master

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Good on you for doing this exercise Gurvinder!

Guest Anonymous

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Neville Grand Master

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Great work Mark!

Guest Anonymous

Anonymous

Don't mind my drawing skills.

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Neville Grand Master

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My drawings stinks too Sohaib!

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Guest Anonymous

Anonymous

I know I'm bad at drawing 🙂

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Neville Grand Master

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Good enough! Great work Usman!

carichari othow Contributor

carichari othow

Member

I am not sure about this 😅

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