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    MS is adding her experience in this course in her book.

    We provided H.D. with writing idea and rewrites.

    "Thank you, Dan, for your help!"
    — H.D.

    We helped H.N. rewrite a cold email.

    "That's great feedback, Susana. I appreciate your help rewriting it with me!"
    — H.N.

    "I appreciate all the help and feedback in 2020. It's paid off big time. I'll be posting more "help" Cold Emails soon."
    — H.J.

    We helped M.T. revise her website.

    "Thanks guys! You're the best!"
    — M.T.

    We helped A.H. rewrite a cold email.

    "Thank you for the feedback, Dan and Susana! This sounds so much better!"
    — A.H.

    We helped M.P. rewrite a sales letter.

    "Dan thank you! This is much better."
    — M.P.

    We helped B.E. rewrite a lead magnet.

    "Thanks for the great feedback guys!"
    — B.E.

    We helped M.R. with a newsletter email:

    "Thank you Dan and Susana, these are great ideas that capture the essence of what I'm trying to say. I'm going to try variations of all three of them out over the next few weeks."
    — M.R.

    We helped M.D. improve his sales page.

    "Wow, thanks so much for this, Neville and Dan. Fantastic - thanks so much! Really appreciate your help!"
    — M.D.

    We helped S.D. rewrite and reposition the message on his landing page.

    "Thanks for your advice and decisive edits, Susana – they’ve helped me a lot. I feel the text has much more imperative now. 😀"
    — S.D.

    We provided marketing guidance and a rewrite for N.T.'s prospecting campaign.

    "Thank you very much Johnny and Susana. Not only great comments but also great work on the rewrites 👍"
    — N.T.

     

    We helped D.W. tighten up the copy for a cold email.

    "Hey Susana, thanks a lot for the tips! It makes total sense to be more specific. It reads so much better now."
    — D.W.

    We helped G.M. with some edits on her newsletter.

    "Thanks for all the help on this one. 🙂"
    — G.M.

    We helped D. M. rewrite an Instagram post.

    "Neville, NOW we know why you're El Jefe! This TOTALLY hits the mark.🎯 One of my specialties is actually numerology! So BINGO, and grazie!🙏"
    — D. M.

    We helped M.V. tighten up some copy on her website.

    "Susana, once again, YOU ROCK THE HOUSE with your vibrant finishing touches...🎶"
    — M. V.

    We helped G.J. with a rewrite for his cold email.

    "Thanks Dan. I like the warmer feel. Much better than my version."
    — G.J.

    We gave M.V. some guidance in rewording her website to make it more engaging and user-friendly,

    "I so appreciate all your edits. It's so much better now! Thank you."
    — M.V.

    We helped BC tighten up his cold email.

    "I really appreciate the quick response, and the thorough review. Your polish on the email copy is so good, it read so much better. Thank you."
    — BC

    We provided editing ideas on one of BV's blogs. 

    "You are such a wonderful teacher, Susana. I so appreciate the fact that you always explain the "why" not just provide the "how"...it means a lot!"
    — BV

    We helped WC rewrite a follow-up email.

    "Thank you for your detailed help!  You guys are the best."
    — WC

    We helped SB with his articles for Medium.

    "Thank you for your valuable advice. Let me go back to drawing board and structure my articles. 

    Once again I appreciate your help and input making my learning experience better every-time!"
    — SB

    We helped MP fine tune one of his follow up emails.

    "Thank you Dan and Susana, I'm getting a lot more responses now! And some customers."
    — MP

    GM and so many others appreciate and use our feedback.

    "Susana, thank you for the feedback. I'll make the changes. 🙂"
    — GM

    We helped MV with a rewrite on her website.

    "Oh, Susana, what would I do without your amazing insight? As always, brilliantly reviewed/organized and written so mmmmmuch better."
    — MV

    "I very much enjoyed the Office Hours! it was fun to see Neville rebuild folks stuff by asking questions, pulling out their own words, and organizing them into a cohesive message. Also the interaction and suggestions that ping back and forth. All nicely supportive, too. I like to see work improved in a way that the original writer gets to feel good about it. 

    Thumbs up!"
    — TA

    On our advice, JK took a not-so-great presentation, spent $30 to get it revised on Fiverr, and it came back ultra professional!

    JJ got his first blog up and is posting content already. 

    We gave BD suggestions for improving his website.

    "Thanks again Susana — another update here with your recommendations and trying to incorporate what Neville suggested.

    It feels like the tweaking could be endless but I'm learning so much in the process. Really love all the guidance on this thread - thankyouthankyouthankyou 😊"
    — BD

    We gave GJ some feedback and suggestions for his brochure.

    "Great feedback thanks!"
    — GJ

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