You're welcome! Can you send me your before/after screenshots of your consults page, would love to see: NevMed@gmail.com

Also I might do a consult page post and show how I handle consults so that I NEVER get that "Lemme pick your brain" crap.

Thanks Skyler! Will checkout the page....although after first glance I have NO clue what the hell you sell :)

Hey Arnaud! The little script-changey thingy was this:

http://lifehacker.com/398139/edit-any-web-page-with-a-bookmarklet

Also, can't you use MailChimp to make a more attractive download button. Something really big and obvious? Your page makes it hard to tell what they're getting or that they should even enter an Email!

Thanks Jake! Do you already get sales on this site?

Thanks Patrick!

The plugin is a little Javascript that you drag&drop onto your bookmarks bar:

http://lifehacker.com/398139/edit-any-web-page-with-a-bookmarklet

http://neurozone.com

Looks like it could be really really cool. But, wtf do they do & what action do they want people to take?

gave changing the copy a lazy go myself using your tool thingy.

http://screencast.com/t/nzH3CqLQ

Yeah we do but no were near the volume that we're after

Yo Nev,

You're the king of kopy, I'm a rookie - But I'm practicing your tactics and slowly getting better!

I'm running a site that is an Appsumo/Groupon for self improvement products (ie. products, services, memberships, and events).

We're still tweaking the copy - but our main focus right now is getting partners interested in us helping sell their stuff!

Since you were a Sumoling for a while, I know you know a lot about how they built that biz. We want to model them + have a sweet marketplace with a focus on the self improvement niche.

Take a look at the site and let me know what you think!

https://www.subsynct.com

Cheers - Matt

Thank you so much for choosing my site, I love all your recommendations :)

I changed the wording on the landing page since u said that, to first time here. Thank you though!

I'm not not completely sold about having the landing page but I kept repeat customers in mind so they don't have to go through of the sales copy everytime they want to buy the product.

I know your busy but if you have time let me know what ur thoughts are on the landing and the sales copy!

Love your work Neville it would be awesome to hear your feedback again!

Skyler

Stimpax.Com

Can you help my copy, it isn't converting well enough. Thank you nev.

Thanks for letting me be the first tear down!

Hi Neville thanks for all your time in producing these entertaining yet highly informative videos and blog posts.

I would very much appreciate if you could 'tear down' my website - http://www.jetvirtual.co.uk

Thanks in advance!

Daniel Gefen

http://www.JetVirtual.co.uk

Awesome :)

I came here now to see if I got a reply, because just I noticed something in the comments form of your new teardown episode.

This is the first time that I see the "Notify me of followup comments via e-mail". I ALWAYS missed that. Even though I always look for a way to get notified when I comment on a blog post.

Maybe if you put it above the "Submit Comment" button you will get more engagement in the comments. What do you think? Seems like a worthy experiment for me :)

P.S. Notify box: CHECKED \o/

Please do expand on consulting stuff, from your AR training it seems you have lots of experience :)

Wow this is is actually the most helpful site about copywriting, thank you for putting out practical teachings! And you are funny too which is a huge bonus! I would love you to tear down my site, I'm sure there is a lot to do differently. I'm in a learning process.

Added to the list.....I honestly have NO clue what they do! Looks very vague.

That was a much better change! At least I now know it's about employee productivity.

Lol! Matt, you GOTTA STOP USING THIS VAGUE-ASS LANGUAGE!!

 

For starters, it doesn't seem you have much traffic, so basic copy changes aren't going to make a huge difference yet.

But you need to describe stuff better. More specific.

Seems like you're trying to do stuff all over the place. Maybe focus on ONE thing per week like AppSumo originally did. Get one kick ass tool for productivity, then promote the hell out of it for a week.

Well that was a waste of a comment :-/

It seems you just need to get in front of more businesses that can use this.

I have a feeling the people benefitting the most from your call service ARE NOT searching on Google for your site and finding you.

Start calling or searching for niches that can benefit.

Maybe present at a dentists meetup or something showing how your service would make them more money. Get the word out first!

Thanks Szilvia, you've been added to the list!

Woohoo!!! Thank you!!!

**SMACKS FACE**

Why does it seem obvious after the fact... Thanks for the tips Nev, it makes perfect sense.

I'll take another go-round at finding our focus and figure that out first. The refresh the copy (and stop being a VAGUE PANSY).

Thanks for the feedback dude!