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    Copy Teardown - Episode 1

    Watch as we teardown this landing page step-by-step:

     

    This is a quick teardown of a site called YalaMarketing. 

    Poor guy running it is trying to sell consulting services from this, but this page is terrible at conveying WHAT THE HELL IS BEING SOLD!

    Here’s what we cover in this quick teardown:

    Step 1.) What is the goal of the page?

    Step 2.) Does it pass The Caveman Test?

    Step 3.) Get rid of all the vague and fluffy language.

    Step 4.) Use testimonials that prove results.

     

     

    Leave a comment if you’d like your site reviewed, and what specifically you’d want help with.  Good teardowns will be shared with 15,000+ people.

    Please share this with friends/colleagues who have similar websites as the one in the video.  


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    Hi Neville!

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