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    Tone of Voice in Copywriting & Your Brand (w/ Examples)

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    In copywriting it’s super helpful to first find the tone of your voice.

    Why?

    • If you do it right, people will WANT to read your stuff.
    • Everyone who interacts with your writing will react to it’s style. (or worse…NOT react).
    • You have to write like this all day, so it’s best to at least enjoy doing it!

    The good part is, you don’t have to stick with one tone of voice forever.

    There are MANY different tone’s of voice you can use in your writing.

    I don’t care if you run a small blog…..
    I don’t care if you own a dental practice…..
    I don’t care if you are a Fortune 500 Company salesperson…..

     

    The tone you use in your writing is interchangeable for different situations.  

    Take my hand ::eww don’t really touch my hand:: and let’s look at some tone of voice examples together:

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    Omg…..if you’re a SaaS company (Software As A Service), you often have the easiest job of all. Because all you have to do is SHOW YOUR PRODUCT WORKING!!!

    Member Mouse does a fantastic job on their landing page just SHOWING with video the product works:

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    Why bother with tons of text when you can just SHOW something in a quick screen-capture video?

    Another thing they do well is list a bunch of features:

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    Most of the people coming to Member Mouse ALREADY KNOW they are shopping for a membership website plugin…..so they don’t need to extensively explain each feature.

    And they actually have videos in the support section showing the features in action, so there’s not much need to use tons of text here.

    As you’ll notice, they had to have very little “Tone” because people aren’t coming to this site for the “TONE”…..they’re coming for a working piece of SOFTWARE.

    Just show the damn thing in action!

    Also what works well……GIF’s.

    Here’s an example from Gif Cam that shows how easy it is to add text on their software:

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    Why bother WRITING about how great it is….when you can just SHOW it?

    The “SaaS Company” Tone of Voice:

    • Calm and cool.
    • List lots of  benefits.
    • Show the product in action.
       

     

     

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    The “Super Vulnerable” Tone is best deployed for a story that actually feels difficult or “vulnerable” to share.

    For example, in this Prey Project copy from AppSumo I wrote years ago…..

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    It was the first time we’d used “vulnerable” copy on AppSumo and it worked spectacularly.

    I had actually been robbed a few months before…..and the feeling was extremely violating.  I would literally fantasize about what I would do to the bastards that robbed me if I found them.

    …..now that’s kind of messed up thinking right?

    Well I knew I couldn’t be the only one that felt like this.  And to my surprise, I got a bomb-explosion of emails in my inbox that day about that email.  Even from people who are already great copywriters:
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    Like I said in the beginning of this article, you can use all these different styles at different times.

    For that particular deal, telling a hard-hitting-emotional story was the best way I could get people to use Prey.

    The “Super Vulnerable” Tone of Voice:

    • Emotional and heartfelt.
    • The reader should feel your pain.
    • It should be slightly uncomfortable to publish.

     

     

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    Want to find out the kinds of tone your industry likes??  JUST STEAL IT!!!

    It’s super easy to figure out what kind of tone gets the broadest range of people:

    1. Just go to Amazon.com/books and enter your industry or keyword.
    2. Sort by “Most Relevant”.
    3. Either buy the top 10 books and read them.  Or read the free previews.  Or read the top comments on the books.

    You’ll very quickly get a sense of how people are writing in this industry!

    Now…..this “Steal It” method is dangerous, because generally people who just try to copy everyone else without any uniqueness tend to fade into the background.  However, it can give you some seriously-amazing insight into the broad mindset of your audience.

    Here’s some examples:

    Let’s say you wanna figure out what your Tone of Voice should be for a dog training website.

    Well, just follow 3 steps above….

    Here’s the results for the Top 10 “Dog Training” books on Amazon:

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    Notice just from their covers and titles everything is “Happy” and “Natural” and “Friendly” and “Best Friendy.”

    So naturally we can see people like this “Friendly and Happy” tone of voice.

    So if I came in with a crazy book title and tone…..while it could POSSIBLY draw a lot of attention, it doesn’t seem like the type of book that most people are actually paying money for.

    So I wouldn’t hit the dog training market with a CRAZY AND WILD title like this:
     

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    That title isn’t very consistent with what the paying public is buying.
     
    Now let’s do another “Steal It” experiment….this time on:  Stock Analysis

    What should the tone be if we want to write about Stock Analysis?

     Well here’s the top 10 books on Amazon:
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    Notice the covers and titles are pretty serious.

    There’s a lot of language like “security analysis” and “guide to financial markets” and “technical analysis” talk.  You don’t see a bunch of wacky or super-casual style copy in these best sellers eh?

    So if we wanted to write a Stock Analysis site, it seems the best respected books are more serious.  This means I WOULD NOT write super goofy and wacky like this:

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    As hilarious as this might be (and who knows, it might even work!)……we can ascertain from looking at all the top sellers that the tone of voice for this Stock Analysis niche is going to be more “professional.

    This is likely a function of:

    • The people in the industry are relatively professional.
    • The people who write these kind of books are quite professional.
    • The people buying these books want to learn from a “professional” source.

    So if I were to write “Stock Analysis” articles, I would adopt the tone of the most popular material.  That doesn’t mean I’d strip out all personality, it just means I probably would want to avoid looking crazy and goofy.
     

     

     

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    The B2B Copywriting Tone of Voice is the most confusing for people.  Most people in the B2B (Business To Business) sales industry think they have to be SUPER FORMAL which in their mind means “boring”….but it’s not totally true.

    • You don’t have to act formal, you jut have to be “Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding.”
    • Just write like you talk in the office or in a sales meeting.
    • Don’t sound like a robot because you think it’s “more professional.”  This hurts the chances of your email being read.
    • Do NOT “just pitch them.”  You need to offer some value to the other person.

    When I tell people these rules for B2B emails, they always end up saying this:
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    No.  They.  Do Not.  

    No one wants to read boring-ass emails!!  Especially when they get 100+ of them everyday!

    They want emails that either:

    • Show them something awesome.
    • –or–
    • Show them something that can make their lives better/easier.

    Let’s look at an example.  Checkout these B2B email copywriting templates from Yelp:

    Here’s a sample of a “Boring Formal B2B” email they would send to businesses:

    Yelp Template B2B Email Results (Boring Formal Sounding):
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    Here are the results from this “Boring Formal” email:
    50 Sent
    33 Opened
    1 Response
    3.33% response rate 😞


    This email is too boring and formal, and business owners get requests like this emails by the hundreds.

    The important thing is to either be REALLY HELPFUL, or STAND OUT to get people’s attention.  Even a little personality can go an extremely long way.

    Yelp “Personality Injected” B2B Email Results (Professional Yet Human Sounding):
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    Notice how this email is still professional, yet speaks like a HUMAN, not a boring robot.  It also offers the person some real VALUE.  Not just a sales pitch.

    Here are the result of this “Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding” email:
    50 Sent
    35 Opened
    4 Responses back
    11.43 % response rate 🙂

    So……what do you think now?

    Imagine sending 1,000 emails over the course of a month.  At the response rates above, you would get:

    • Boring Formal Email: 33 responses.  
    • Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding Email: 114 responses!

    For the same amount of work Alicia is now getting more than 3x the responses by using a “Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding” tone of voice.  

    Maybe try to inject just a little value and a little personality into your B2B emails.  It can make a huge improvement.

    The “B2B Company” Tone of Voice:

    • Informative and helpful.
    • Write words like you talk.
    • Try not to sound so formal that you turn into a Boring Robot.

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    The Fatass Sumo Tone is a tone of voice I developed when we were in the big growth phase of AppSumo and I was writing all the copy.  Here he is:

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    Since there was already this great Sumo logo, I decided to give him a personality.  And since he is fictitious, I felt like I could get away with waaaayyyy more that I usually could.

    So the Fatass Sumo character is like this:

    • He’s brash.
    • He’s super fat (512 lbs ….because “512” is the Austin area code)
    • He’s kinda sexist sometimes.
    • He’s kinda racist sometimes.
    • He eats a lot.
    • He “kidnaps” people to convince them to give a better deal to the “Sumo-lings”.
    • Here’s some (super old) examples of “The Fatass Sumo Tone”:  Kernest, Hiring,  Sumo Business Blueprint,  Blueprint 2

    This made for some HILARIOUS pieces of copy that would get away with crazy amounts of Asian jokes, fat jokes, “you throw like a woman” jokes.

    I could also make totally outrageous selling points that other wise wouldn’t fly like:

    “I currently have Drew Houston of Dropbox tied up in the trunk of my car…..and won’t let him out till he gives the Sumo-lings 85% off a year subscription to DropBox.”

    “This Fatass Sumo needs to get my daily 40 burritos for lunch, so I need money fast.  That’s why I’m willing to let this deal go for only $29/piece.”

    Were these kind lines stupid?  Probably.

    But did a certain percentage of people pay attention and buy? YES!

    The “Fatass Sumo” Tone of Voice:

    • Adopt the persona of the character.
    • You get extra leeway to be “crazier” with this tone.
    • First keep the emails informational, then you can insert some humor.
       

     

     

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    Are you super funny?   Then write funny!  Other funny people will like it!

    Are you boring as hell??  Then write boring!  Other boring people will like it!

    Hi.  I’m Neville.  I’m sort of cheesy.  I’m kinda informal.  And that’s totally ok.  

    • Look at my drawings on my What Is Copywriting page, they’re cheesy.
    • Look at my style of writing throughout this blog, or my videos, or my personal blog.
    • Scroll to the bottom of this blog post, even my “All Rights Reserved” is kinda cheesy.

    I’m cheesy and so that’s how I should try to write my personal content.  

    It’s the unique thing my writing brings to this industry.

    The biggest mistake in copywriting is trying to write for the middle of the road.

    Think about how these people got famous:

    • Howard Stern.
    • Rush Limbaugh.
    • Kanye West.
    • Donald Trump.
    • Marilyn Manson.
    • Dr. Dre.
    • Paris Hilton.

    They are all polarizing. Kind of like Kim Kardashian:

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    There will be a certain group of people who hate her.

    There will be a certain group of people who love her.

    People like this make you agree, or vehemently disagree.  The thing about them is:

    They keep the crowd awake.

    So don’t try to be so middle-of-the-road just because one weirdo says he doesn’t like your writing style.

    The “Write Like You Act” Tone of Voice:

    • Writing like YOU is the easiest person to write as.
    • Sometime’s you’re sad.  So write in a sad tone.
    • Sometime’s you’re happy.  So write in a happy tone.
    • Sometime’s you’re angry about a subject.  So write in an angry tone.
    • Being YOU is easy.
       

     

     

     

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    You see, I think I’m hilarious.  I know it’s not true as I’d like it to be…..but it’s what I go for.  In the end, writing like MYSELF is the easiest thing in the world to do.

    But since I can remember, I’ve enjoyed reading stuff that’s informative yet has a “unique flair” to it.  Gary Halbert or Felix Dennis are both examples who have hilariously funny copy, yet backed with super-informative material.

    It’s almost like this combination of “informative and funny” is the best of both worlds:

    • Laughter
    • &
    • Learning

    So this is the type of copy I prefer to write.  Other people who like Informative-Yet-Kinda-Funny articles will like me. People who are staunchy and not funny…..won’t.

     
    “Ok Neville, I have a super boring life AND boring writing….am I doomed to failure??”

    You’re at a disadvantage for sure.  If you’re not very interesting or have new ideas, it’s hard to get a large audience to follow you.

    BUT…..you can (possibly) make up for it in other ways like this:

    Having really insider information:

    • No one thinks Ben Bernanke is a wild-n-crazy guy…..but when he sets the interest rates that govern all the worlds banks……that makes him REALLY interesting and important to listen to.

    Being damn good with math and numbers and analyzing the results:

    • I follow this guy Max Roser on Twitter.  It’s not because he’s “such a hoot” to follow……but he creates graphs from data he scrapes, and the results are SUPER interesting, often times I’ve never seen that information presented anywhere but his graphs.

    Doing unbelievable work:  

    • You may be dry writer on your graphics design website, but if you’re work is just STUNNING then people will pay attention to that.

    Don’t shy away from your boringness:

    • If you have a boring tone…..then other boring people may enjoy your boring tone!  It’s best to write like yourself, and not try to be someone else.  It nearly always comes through as phony.

     

     

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    My favorite test when reading copy is “The Caveman Test.”

    It’s basically where you use a Caveman voice to determine if something sucks or not.

    You act and talk like a dumb caveman, and instantly things become clearer.  Like with this boring copy on the left, and the caveman’s instant reaction:

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    If The Caveman reads a sentence and don’t INSTANTLY know what it means……You have failed.

    This is a deviously simple-yet-effective way to tell if your copy is boring people, or keeping them glued to the page.

    The Caveman Test:

    • Pretend you’re a dumb and short-attention-span caveman.
    • Start reading the copy and if it loses your attention, the copy sucks.
    • Re-write or totally remove sentences/paragraphs that lose your attention.

     

    Some quick tips to find your own Copywriting Tone of Voice:

    • Stay caffeinated.  That always puts your brain in a playful mood.
    • Make sure you’re not tired or grumpy when writing (unless that’s the tone you’re going for).
    • Have a SINGLE purpose of the copy.  (example: Get them to click the buy button).
    • Use some of the “angles” from the Problem Solving Checklist to re-look at your copy.
    • Signup to my newsletter to get more tips directly to your inbox.

    Hope your learned something about the Tone of Voice to use in your copywriting today.

     

    Please share with friends if you enjoyed. Thank you!
     

     

    Copywriting Tips (103 Quick-Hit Copywriting Tips for Motivation and Ideas)

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    Here's 103 copywriting tips. Scroll through and one may "jump out at you" and trigger a great idea!

    #1.) Work backwards - What’s the goal?

    Before you write about something, you’ve got to know exactly what your page / piece is supposed to accomplish. Whether it’s email replies, product sales, or something else, your job as a copywriter is to support that goal.

    #2.) What is your success metric?

    Once you know what you’re trying to achieve, you’ve got to be able to measure it. Whether it’s hard stats (like conversion rates) or softer measures like comments and happy email responses….track what you’re doing.

    #3.) Focus on ONE metric?

    Pretty much everything is trackable these days - but that doesn’t mean you should focus on everything. Choose one metric to focus on and you’ll quickly know whether your copy is hitting home or not.

    #4.) Who’s your target audience?

    Avatars are great reference tools, but nothing beats the real thing! Get up, get out, and interview the people who make up your audience. You’ll learn more from a single “real” conversation than any avatar-based thinking session.

    #5.) Send your list surveys?

    Want to dig into your audience’s psychology? Live interviews are great for 1-on-1 sessions, but there’s a better way to mine a big group of people (like an email list)...online surveys! Surveys can wind up generating ridiculous ROI - it’s like having a roadmap for your copy and content strategies

    #6.) What would ___ do?

    Looking for inspiration with a tough problem? Well, how would an industry thought leader approach it?

    #7.) What would Warren Buffet do?

    Financial issue? Trying to break down “value”? How would Warren Buffet approach it?

    #8.) What would David Ogilvy do?

    If you’re staring at a blank page and don’t know how to start….think about a few of the great copywriters. Pretend you’re that person and step into their shoes (or keyboard?). Ogilvy’s ads, Kern’s sales letters, Walker’s VSL’s should blast you right through any writer’s block.

    #9.) Freewrite

    Speaking of writer’s block, have you tried freewriting? Sit down, set a timer for 10 minutes, and start writing. It’ll probably be a terrible draft, but perfection isn’t the point. It’ll get you out of your head and kickstart the writing process.

    #10.) Brainstorm with structure

    Brainstorming is usually a pretty chaotic activity - sort of like freewriting. If you start the brainstorming session with a little bit of structure, you’ll channel that energy into something that’s actually productive and on point. Outlines, boxes, and other visual tools can help organize the ideas as they come tumbling out of your brain.

    #11.) Create a swipe file for inspiration

    See a great example of copy / design / UX? Take a screenshot and file that baby away! You’ll thank yourself later. Instead of trying to reinvent the wheel with every project, you can cherry pick elements you love from real world examples and adapt them to your work.

    #12.) Create a regular reading schedule

    As a copywriter, you’ve got to stay in touch with your industry. If you set aside 20-60 minutes a day to read relevant news, blogs, and newsletters, you’ll be in much better shape than someone trying to “catch up” once in a while.

    #13.) Use Google Alerts to stay on top of trends

    Want to automate all that staying in touch? Use Google Alerts or other notification services. You can filter for exactly what’s relevant and valuable to you.

    #14.) Create a database of articles for research

    Think of this like a swipe file for deeper citation. Where a swipe file is fantastic for inspiration and planning, a well-organized database of articles will allow you to quickly and efficiently cite your research. This’ll cut down on research and writing time.

    #15.) Read what your audience reads

    Taking on a project outside of your regular niche / focus? The best way to get a feel for what an audience is thinking and feeling is to read the top publications in their field. Where do they hang out online? Which YouTubers do they follow? Start consuming the same content and you’ll be able to think more effectively.

    #16.) Read what your audience reads

    Taking on a project outside of your regular niche / focus? The best way to get a feel for what an audience is thinking and feeling is to read the top publications in their field. Where do they hang out online? Which YouTubers do they follow? Start consuming the same content and you’ll be able to think more effectively.

    #17.) Use Google suggestions

    Your early research probably involves a whole bunch of Googling. You can expand and adapt your searches by scrolling down to the bottom of the results page and - voila! Google suggests a list of relevant searches you might want to check out.

    #18.) Accountability groups are great for ideas

    Staying on top of your industry’s content is great - but it’s a one-way street. It’s also valuable to bounce ideas around with other copywriters or industry pros. Join (or create) an accountability group - it’s like organized, scheduled brainstorming!

    #19.) Keep a pocket notebook (or use a note app)

    Inspiration strikes at the weirdest times. If you don’t actively capture a great idea, though, it may be lost forever. That’s why it’s a great idea to keep a pocket notebook handy - or just use a note-taking app on your phone (I love Google Keep).

    #20.) Save your brainstorming notes to a dedicated folder (or notebook)

    Most people treat a brainstorming session like a one-off activity. You come up with 20 ideas, choose one to write about, and then toss the other 19 aside. That’s a waste! If you organize your brainstorming notes in one place (like a dedicated Google Drive folder), you’ll have a great database of ideas to work from.

    #21.) Draw it out

    Ever start building out a piece and then realize you’ve drifted away from your original argument or purpose? To keep yourself in check, try drawing out what you’re trying to say. It’ll simplify and organize your thinking, making your writing easier and more compelling.

    #22.) Think about your piece….then get out! Take a walk!

    Creativity is a funny thing - sometimes trying just makes it harder to come up with the right words. If you stop trying and start doing other things, it’ll give your subconscious a chance to play around with your problem. A walk can be a great chance to stretch your legs - and your mind!

    #23.) Talk out ideas with your editor

    Some writers only let editors in during the final stages of a piece. This is a huge mistake! A brief chat with your editor will put you both on the same page, set clear expectations, and probably generate some great ideas to write about.

    #24.) What’s the value you’re adding with your piece?

    Why are you writing this piece? If you’re just repeating the same thing as a dozen major blogs or sites, are you really helping anyone? If you want your writing to stand out and connect with people, you’ve got to know exactly what you’re adding the wider conversation.

    #25.) Where does your piece fit with what’s already out there?

    Sometimes finding a unique angle is easier if you know what’s already out there. Position your piece to complement or oppose existing content and you’ll immediately join a conversation, instead of having to start one from scratch.

    #26.) Use prompts

    Stuck? Use short prompts to nudge your brain into action. Questions are great ways to focus your mind, get specific, and start producing. Who’s this piece for? Why should they care? What if ____?

    #27.) How can I make this SUPER SIMPLE instead of complicated?

    K.I.S.S.; simple and direct always trumps complicated and ambiguous. You can do this by simplifying your language, cutting down on extra words, and generally getting to your point more efficiently.

    #28.) What if I remove 2 steps from this process?

    Adding steps to a process is easy. Removing them, though, is a lot tougher. Keep stripping down the number of jumps you’re making until you’re left with a bare-bones outline. That’s the core concept to build your piece around.

    #29.) What if I only have 2 options?

    Analysis paralysis is a real thing. Give your readers too many options and it’s like giving them nothing. If you cut things down to binary choices, though, a reader can clearly and confidently follow your thinking.

    #30.) What’s the STUPIDEST way to solve this problem?

    The best answer is also usually the simplest. If you’re trying to get a reader from A to B….take them on a direct journey, not a winding route.

    #31.) Write like you speak

    Want to connect with your readers? Write conversationally, break some grammar rules, and you’ll immediately create more engaging copy.

     

     

    Writing Tips:

    #32.) Try reading short pieces out loud

    What does your writing “sound” like in your readers’ heads? Is it too choppy? Does it flow smoothly? If you’re trying to be funny….is it working? Try reading short pieces out loud. Some style issues are easier heard than seen.

    #33.) Try voice-to-text dictation

    Have you ever tried dictating your draft? Voice-to-text apps let you “write” from anywhere - even while you’re out for a walk. They’re especially great for early drafts when you just need to get ideas out of your head.

    #34.) Active voice vs passive voice

    Want to make your writing punchy and engaging? Here’s a general rule of thumb - use active voice. It’s closer to the way we speak, making it more appropriate for conversational, “natural” writing.

    #35.) Don’t justify yourself needlessly

    If you’re trying to make a point….just make it! Some writers write like they’re prepping a debate team, trying to preempt opposing arguments and using super technical jargon. There is no debate team. There’s just your reader, who wants you to get to the point clearly and directly.

    #36.) Use a pomodoro timer for productivity

    Creative work like writing is best done in a series of short sprints rather than one long marathon. Pomodoro timers are built for that - 25 minute work sessions spaced out by short (5 minute) and long (10 minute) breaks. You’ll stay fresh - and so will your writing.

    #37.) Use earplugs for focus

    Alright, I stole this one directly for Neville. Pop in a pair of earplugs and you’ll be surprised how effectively the total silence will hone your focus.

    #38.) Try writing from different locations

    If you’re feeling stuck, try writing from a different place in your house. Even better, get out of the house entirely and try writing from a cafe or a coworking space. Different atmospheres will trigger your creativity - and sometimes having strangers who can see what you’re doing will keep you from browsing the web instead of working.

    #39.) Don’t be afraid to change your routines

    Schedules and consistency are great. But routines can also get stale. If you’re feeling stuck, change things up and try a different writing time. Just make it a planned thing, not a random action.

    #40.) Use a writers group for accountability check-ins

    The quickest way to develop as a writer is to surround yourself with other writers who are able and willing to give you constructive feedback. But instead of a one-off conversation or a sporadic relationship, try joining (or creating) a writers group. A weekly conversation with a structured agenda will create big results.

    #41.) Create “writing time” with other writers

    Working around other people working can be motivating and incredibly productive. Try rounding up your writers group just to write. No chit chat, just work!

    #42.) Share your work with other writers

    Some people are shy about sharing their work - don’t be one of them! The more eyes - especially professional eyes - you can get on your writing, the better. Ask for constructive feedback and take it on board.

    #43.) Break down tough pieces into drafts

    Complex topics and big projects can feel overwhelming. The best way to get past that feeling is to break everything down into smaller, more achievable drafts. Give yourself deadlines for those small goals and you’ll find yourself blasting through obstacles with ease.

    #44.) Clarity > Cleverness

    Ever read something that’s meant to be funny, but just falls flat? It’s awkward and very distracting. If you start by building a clean, clear core of an idea, you can always add cute little add ons later - but you can’t do the reverse.

    #45.) Quality > Quantity

    Every SEO professional out there knows that search engines reward quality, not quantity. Google number one priority is to find content that effectively answers user queries. Are you doing that for your audience?

    #46.) Benefits, not features!

    Features are easy to list and boring to read. Why should I care about this brand’s products? Benefits, on the other hand, are much more engaging because they explain what a user will get out of a product.

    #47.) Use your editor

    Editors are great at every stage of the writing process. If you’re stuck with an idea or you want to talk out an argument, get in touch with your editor. You’ll probably get more out of a focused 10 minute talk with your editor than you would in a couple hours banging your head against the wall, alone.

    #48.) Create a consistent writing schedule

    Writing and thinking about writing is sort of like a muscle. The more you practice, the easier the process becomes. Set aside a dedicated time each day to write and work out that muscle.

    #49.) Write for scannability

    We’re surrounded by distractions. If you want to get your point across to your reader, you’ve got to make your writing interesting and easy to read. Use short paragraphs and clearly organized headers. If you want to draw attention to specific points, use highlights and bold font.

    #50.) Follow your outline’s structure, but don’t go more than 2 bullets deep

    Nested bullet points are great for outlining. You can organize ideas within ideas within ideas - but that structure doesn’t transfer well to long form content. The more sub-steps you have, the more difficult the reading experience. Keep things simple and limit your headers to H2’s and H3’s at most.

    #51.) Get away from the computer (again) -- after it’s written, let it sit before you edit

    Breaks are great for productivity at every stage of the writing process. Once you’re done with a draft, get away from it for a day or two. When you come back to it, you’ll be able to read it with a fresh perspective.

    #52.) Keep layout + format in mind while writing

    Copy isn’t just a bunch of words on a page, especially when it comes to short attention spans online. You’ve got to understand white space, readability, and basic UX design to really maximize a reader’s experience.

    #53.) Use templates for reliable structure / layout

    Presentation can be just as important as writing style. When you’re studying great copy (or looking through your swipe file), try and absorb how the text is presented.

    #54.) Use wireframes for layouts (pro move)

    If you really want to level up, try drawing out your favorite pages as wireframe diagrams. This’ll help you learn how to structure your copy, how to stack your arguments, and write powerfully.

    #55.) Use images to improve text

    Images are a great way to attract attention, break up long boring blocks of text, and keep your copy fresh and engaging. You can use images to entertain, educate, or just hammer home a point you want to make. Here's why images are better than text.

    #56.) Use images to replace text

    Can you use an image instead of text here? Instead of just complementing your words, images can also just replace them. This’ll help strip down your text, making stronger and more efficient messaging.

    #57.) Use visual / emotive language

    Get in your readers’ heads with stories, especially ones in which they can picture themselves. Don’t just talk about things - make your readers imagine what it’d feel like to use your products.

    #58.) Match your audience’s language + self-identifiers

    All the style and structure in the world goes out the window if you use the wrong words. You’ve got to speak your readers’ language, use their terms, and show that you’re in on their inside jokes. Use their tone of voice.

    #59.) Try out apps like Grammarly and Hemmingway

    Writing apps go way beyond just spell checking. Grammarly and Hemmingway are two popular tools that can help analyze your style and suggest specific nuances to improve your writing.

    #60.) Make your writing engaging...literally.

    Transform your readers into action-takers. Use quizzes, calculators, and other engagement tools to encourage your readers to apply the concepts they’re reading about.

    #61.) Update old content

    Keep your content up to date by regularly overhauling old articles. It’s a relatively easy step that will keep you relevant and Google happy.

    #62.) Upgrade existing content with….content upgrades

    You can also upgrade old articles with add ons like content upgrades. For example, create a download that complements a specific article and add it to the piece.

    #63.) Write with a different voice

    Writers can get stuck in their ways. If you want to stay flexible, get out of your comfort zone. Try writing as someone totally different - can you do it effectively? This’ll come in handy anytime you’re writing to a new audience and need to adapt.

    #64.) Write an opposing opinion

    If you think style’s tough, try writing from an opposing point of view. You might hate it, but it’ll force you to focus on structure, message, and all the fundamental elements of a strong point of view.

    #65.) What if I just remove 50% of the words?

    Anyone can write for length - but nobody really cares about how many words you can stuff into an article. Be ruthless when you’re editing and remove as much non-essential text as possible. It’ll strengthen your message and create a stronger, more memorable connection with readers.

     

     

    Become a better writer:

    #66.) Use a swipe file...but don’t just copy, analyze

    We mentioned swipe files earlier in this list. If you want to get to the next level, set aside time to really study the material you’ve saved. Why do you like it? What caught your eye? Don’t just use your swipe file for inspiration - use it for learning. Here's a free & public swipe file.

    #67.) Set big goals…

    What are you trying to achieve as a writer? What are a few of the crazy big goals you want to reach? If you’re struggling through a tough project or questioning your path, review your goals and re-energize yourself.

    #68.) ...and break them down into small wins

    Huge goals are great for motivation….but they can be meaningless in the short term. If you have a big goal you want to achieve in 10 years, work backwards and set milestone targets. If you goal is to write for a major publication, what are the stepping stone projects that will get you there?

    #69.) Create a monthly check in on your small wins

    Monthly reviews are a great way to gauge your development. Are you on track with your small goals? Do you need to adapt your strategy or reach out to bigger clients? Reviews keep you focused and productive while still allowing you to pursue the big dream.

    #70.) Keep a database of your weak points...and fix them.

    What are your weak points? Identify them, then attack them one by one. Get specific and measure yourself.

    #71.) Regularly analyze why you like certain writers

    Who are the writers that get the most emotion out of you? The type that have you laughing out loud or welling up with tears. Break down how they do it. Can you apply similar techniques in your copy? Do "Copy Work" for inspiration from other writers.

    #72.) How can I make this one page instead of more

    If you had to, could you distill your argument into a single page? This is a great exercise to cut down on needless fluff and focus on your core message.

    #73.) Reach out to other writers

    The more you connect with other writers, the more you’ll learn about writing, editing, project management, and career growth. Writing can feel like a lonely profession, but you should make it a priority to surround yourself with other professional writers.

    #74.) Edit other writers’ pieces

    Editing is a great chance to learn. You’ll get to see other writers’ style, approach, and thought process. If you edit others’ writing regularly, you’ll quickly see positive effects on your own writing.

    #75.) Am I spending way too damn long on this?

    Every stage of the writing process can throw up a unique set of problems. Whatever it is you’re facing, though, you can’t let it eat up your precious time. Get it done, get it out, and then worry about improving it later.

    “If you’re not embarrassed by your first version, you spent too long on it.” -Reid Hoffman

    #76.) Dig into your audience’s business

    Copywriters need to understand exactly how their clients’ businesses operate. The more you learn about your target audience’s industry, the more effectively you’ll write about the challenges your clients face.

    #77.) Review your past work for style and growth

    Regularly read your past work to get an idea of how you’ve developed. How would you improve an article from last year? How about homepage copy from a few years ago?

    #78.) Review your past work for readership stats

    Are you reaching the right people? Are you growing your audience? The only way to tell is to track and analyze your site’s analytics. What are your most popular articles? This should give you a barometer for your performance and also guide your content strategy.

    #79.) Ask for access to analytics

    If you’re working for a client, ask for access to their analytics. Copywriting is a results-based craft, and it’s important to get your hands on the data that measure those results.

    #80.) How did your project do? Ask for feedback

    Your job isn’t done when a final draft is handed in. Ask your client for feedback, testimonials, and even a case study when appropriate. This will give you a chance to make concrete improvements and connect more deeply with the client.

    #81.) Can you turn a project into more value?

    Treat every new project like a potential foot-in-the-door. Where else can you help the client? How can you connect your current project to one in the future?

    #82.) Become a full stack writer

    Copywriting is so much more than just text. Nowadays copywriters need to understand UX concepts, design, and SEO. The more complementary skills you can add to your arsenal, the more effective your writing will become. Become a full stack writer.

    #83.) Make 3 versions: Crappy, Good, Excellent

    Give yourself three drafts to produce great work. Make the first one crappy, the next one good, and the final one excellent. This’ll keep your writing efficient and clear, and you won’t get lost in a series of random drafts.

    #84.) Make 3 versions: Short, Medium, Long

    What’s the most effective way to make your point? What sort of format do your readers connect with the most? Playing around with length is a way to ask these questions while producing content.

    #85.) How can I make this more fun?

    Is your writing really that engaging? How can you spice things up and make the reader’s experience more fun? Play around with your style, break some grammar rules, use GIFs, and maybe even try swearing a little. Get loose and experiment!

    #86.) How can I make this more hilarious?

    Writing funny isn’t easy. If you can figure it out, though, you’ll create attention-grabbing content people will eat up. Study your favorite funny writers from other genres - what can you adapt and apply to your writing?

    #87.) Constraints Create Creativity

    Limits can be great for productivity and creativity. Instead of writing generalist blog posts whenever you feel like it, give yourself structure to think and create.

    #88.) Constrain the amount of TIME you have

    Imagine you only have one hour to write this piece. How will you get it done? How much quicker will you dive into your writing? What will it do for your focus?

    #89.) Constrain the amount of SPACE you have

    Imagine you only have one page to write on. What will you say? What can you drop?

    #90.) Constrain the amount of WORDS you have

    What would happen if you cut your word count in half? Could you still get your point across? Could you replace text with images where needed?

    #91.) Constrain the amount of SCREEN you have

    Imagine finding out your audience was reading your material almost exclusively from small mobile devices. How would that affect your layout and format? Would you structure your message any differently?

    #92.) Constrain the amount of READ TIME you have

    Imagine your reader only has 30 seconds to skim your content. What would you highlight? How would you direct attention to specific points?

     

     

    (extras -- freelancers and consultants):

    #93.) Niche down

    The more you can specialize by field or by service (or both), the quicker you’ll build authority and attract better clients.

    #94.) Productize your service(s)

    Let prospective clients know what you can do for them. By offering packages and productized services, you can simultaneously control what you offer and give your clients options to choose from.

    #95.) Showcase your work - write your own case studies

    Past projects are often your best selling points for future work. Follow up with clients after a project is done and ask for concrete feedback and change metrics. They’ll appreciate your concern, you’ll get powerful marketing material, and maybe even more work with the client. Make your own case study.

    #96.) Translate your work into measurable value for clients’ businesses

    Do you know how much you’re worth to a client? If you want to be paid $1,000, you’d better be able to prove that the client will make a return on their investment in you.

    #97.) Teardowns are great for content

    Want to build authority and demonstrate expertise? If you don’t have an impressive portfolio (yet), run through a mock project and write about it. Take screenshots and explain exactly how and why you’d change certain things. Practical teardowns are much more effective than writing about general theory.

    #98.) Plug into your clients’ community + use their language

    Are you hanging out where your customers hangout online? Do you understand industry jargon and common practices? A great way to sell clients, is to be able to understand their needs and talk like them.

    #99.) Translate everything into specific business benefits

    If you’re offering a service, how will it affect a client’s business? Sales? Leads? Better conversion rates? Whatever it is, get specific and give examples that clients can relate to and actually want.

    #100.) Create an outreach schedule

    How often are you pitching jobs or connecting with other writers? Outreach is the most important element of a new writer’s business. Prioritize it and create a schedule for your outbound marketing. You can even make a Command Center for this.

    #101.) Use a CRM to manage your contacts and leads

    If you reach out to a couple dozen people each week, how are you going to keep tabs on each conversation? CRMs are great because they help organize your contacts and track developments.

    #102.) Create a regular job listing search

    Trawling through job boards can be frustrating. Instead of randomly searching different boards, use a service like Feedbin to aggregate RSS feeds and create a single source of relevant listings.

    #103.) Become a great interviewer

    Great copywriters tend to be strong interviewers. In order to create compelling copy, you’ve got to understand your audience, their issues, and their deep dark feelings. The best way to uncover all that is through interviews.

     

    Hope you find these copywriting tips helpful!
    Sincerely,

    Copywriting Course, Neville Medhora, Dan McDermott

    Copywriting Exercises: Best Ways To Get Better At Copywriting

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    Learning copywriting is like building muscle...you have to do lots of reps and exercises. This post will give you "copywriting workout sets" to try throughout your day. 

    This will help take your copywriting to the next level.

    Let's get started! 

    #1.) Write like you're talking to your best friend

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    It's common to think that we need to speak differently in certain settings. But it’s not true.

    Whether you are speaking to a prospect, colleague, or friend - just be yourself.

    Write how you normally talk, and your copy will be more easy to understand!

     

     

    #2.) Watch this Copywriting Exercises video

    While reading through this article you can also watch/listen to this accompanying video:

     

     

    #3.) Mental Ad Re-Writing

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    This is mental exercise where you see ANY ad, and think to yourself: "How can I make this ad better?"

    So if you're walking by a billboard, you think in your head what ways you can get people to crave that burger even more.

    So you would think in your head:

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    Just as practice you'd come up with different angles like this:

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    Or maybe you'd try to make people crave that Big Mac:

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    Or maybe you'd go with a stupid pun:

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    #4.) Whenever you see a sign, re-write it in your head

    Watch this video to do the "Mental Ad Re-Writing" exercise when you're out in the wild:

     

     

     

    #5.) Keep your own "Swipe File"

    A "Swipe File" is just a folder you keep cool advertisements or cool pieces of copy in.

    Your Swipe File can be physical or digital.

    My Physical swipe file....it's a plain folder I keep in my reading room.

    My Digital Swipe file.....it's a folder I keep on my Mac desktop. Whenever I see something interesting, I do [COMMAND + SHIFT + 4] and do a crop-screenshot of the thing I'm trying to save.  I then drag that screenshot into the Swipe File folder:

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    (yes....Boo The Dog is my laptop wallpaper)

     

    You should save all sorts of stuff in your swipe file that you think is awesome, or that made you take an action.  An ad, a webpage layout, a specific choice of words.....anything to to that effect.

    Here's a general rule of thumb for your own Swipe File:

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    The purpose of your Swipe File is to frequently flip through it for inspiration.

    For example, I'm thinking about pricing techniques for a client of mine right now......and a quick dip in my digital swipe file popped up this cool example of how it's done:

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    I must've briefly seen this sales page and thought, "Hmmmm.....that's a really nice pricing layout!" and done a quick [COMMAND + SHIFT + 4] and grabbed a screenshot of the layout.  Thanks to this one addition to my swipe file, I can now implement a similar strategy on my clients site.

    That's the benefit of having a solid swipe file laying around!

    Since mobile web browsing is fast becoming the norm, I also see a ton of stuff I want to save on my phone.  For this reason I created a specific folder in my iPhone and made a Phone Swipe File too!

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    Do this on your own phone.  It'll be a nice place to store screenshots when mobile browsing and you see something that grabs your attention.

    So I would highly suggest you start creating your own swipe file, but if you don't want the hassle of maintaining one, I've create a full Swipe File for any marketer to use right here:

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    #6.) State the benefits, not features

    Whenever people try to explain what their company does (especially engineers), they tend to brag about the FEATURES of a product.

    This sounds like:

    Feature:
    "Our software can handle multiple core structures of data at the same time which means during increased load times the server will be stable."

     

    This is a FEATURE description.  However customers are generally more interested in what the feature is AND it's result.

    This would sound more like:

    Benefit:
    "Even if your site gets featured on the front page of CNN and brings in 300,000 visits per hour......your site won't go down."  

     

    You need to show the feature, but also explain WHY it helps the customers (because sometimes it's not so obvious to them).

    Here's an example of Southwest Airlines promoting their membership program.  If you signup to their mileage credit card, you get 50,000 points.  That's great....but what does 50,000 points TRANSLATE INTO?copywriting-features-vs-benefits.png

    You see how the "Benefits" side also explains what the customer will actually get with those 50,000 points?  That's a good example of explaining the BENEFITS rather than features.

    Make sure to practice stating the benefits of what you're selling, not just features.  

     

     

    #7.) Trim Trim Trim to make everything shorter.

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    Kind of like cramming in words to a Tweet.  I show a 3-step formula for this in my how to create a tagline article.

    This is the art of making something long into something small.

    What is the shortest amount of space you can take to transfer a complete thought into someone else's brain?

    It's by Trim Trim Trimming......
    Good copywriting is about sending information from one brain to another in the most efficient manner.  

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    A lot of people hear things like, "Long copy sells better!!!!" Well it's true to a degree.  The rule of thumb is:

    • Long copy is ok.
    • Longwinded copy is NOT ok.

    Taking longwinded copy and making it more concise is a GREAT copywriting exercise! For example:

    Longwinded version:
    We have higher expectations for ourselves and would like to introduce you to our offering which contain a variety of tools and service for the aviation industry.  Our primary purpose is to use computer solutions to make aviation more comfortable and safe for the commanding pilots of aviation vehicles.

    Trimmed down version: Our primary purpose is to use computer solutions to make flying safer and more comfortable for every passenger of an airplane.

    Trimmed down and concise version: We make software that automatically flies planes.

    You can see how much easier the trimmed-down and concise versions of this page are.

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    Make sure you mentally do this whenever you see longwinded copy.    

     

     

    #8.) Do "CopyWork" by hand-copying famous pieces of copy

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    To get a "feel" of what it's like to write good copy, you can just COPY good pieces of copy!!

    If you want some interesting pieces to start, try some of these on our CopyWork Examples page.

    I would also encourage you to write out ads that YOU think are good. Perhaps even from products you've bought in the past.  

     

     

    #9.) Push The Boundaries (a bit)

    Now listen up chump.....I'm not telling you to purposely agitate people with your copy. What I AM saying is you should not always play it so damn safe.

    For example, there's two variations of a piece of copy trying to explain "how to make your ads stand out." Both of these versions try to explain the same thing. But look which one does a much better job:

    VERSION 1:  Boring Tone

    "In marketing you need to convey your point across to the desired target.  You need to ensure your message is targeted and differentiated from the rest of the crowd.  This can be accomplished by analyzing the competition in your industry and being different.

    We encourage you to make this differentiation in your own marketing."

     

    That was super plain, and did a very bad job getting the reader excited to try this on their own. Let's see how we can "push the boundaries" a bit to make it better:

    VERSION 2:  Sexed-Up

    "If your advertisements are the exact same as all of your boring-as-hell competition, something is wrong.  Let's change this up for you:

    In the pickup artist industry there's a term known as "Peacocking."  It means when going out in public, the person wears one article of clothing or accessory that's slightly odd or attention-getting.  Since the man is wearing something very conversation-worthy, it makes it easier for a woman to approach him about it and strike up a conversation.

    About 20% of your ads should use this "peacocking" advice.  If all the ads you're competing with look the same, you should experiment with mixing it up. For example, if the ads for a game look professional like this:

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    ...then perhaps making an ad that's completely the opposite can work as well.  For example, this terrible-looking ad got a 2.5x higher response than the more professional versions:

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    Make sure to use some "peacocking" in your own ads, you might be shocked at the results. You can do this just by making 10% of your ads completely the opposite of what you're used to."

     

    Did you see how different the two pieces of copy were.....and how much better the "Sexed-Up" version did at transmitting the information?

    It's not only because the copy included ads, it was because the copy took risks like talking about something juicy like "pickup artists" and such.

    Now I'm not saying this is appropriate in every environment (checkout how to find the proper tone of voice for your copy here)......but what I AM SAYING is the "sexed-up" version definitely gets the point across better!

    And remember what I said before.....

    "Good copywriting is about sending information from one brain to another in the most efficient manner."

    I'd say at least 10-20% of your writing should attempt to gently push the boundaries you're accustomed to.

     

     

    #10.) Read your copy out loud

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    Step 1: Read your copy out loud to make sure it sounds conversational.

    Step 2: Realize how ridiculous what you wrote just sounds....then change it up.

    This is the most shockingly simple AND shockingly most effective way to kill long-winded copy. Great copywriting often sounds extremely conversational, as if the person is reading a personal message from you.

    You'll frequently hear someone say, "I can describe it over the phone really easily.....but when I write it doesn't sound the same."  That's because they're not writing conversationally!

    The practice here is to read your copy out loud to yourself or others.  You can even record your voice on your phone, then play it back for yourself to ensure it's conversational and doesn't sound like a boring robot wrote it.    

     

     

    #11.) Wear ear plugs

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    I know this sounds a little silly, but wearing ear plugs when writing is one of my most-used tricks for writing great copy! It's literally like having a superpower, because I can put ear plugs in, and instantly "be in my own little world."

     

     

    #12.) Become a triple threat

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    Now that we've gone over all these copywriting exercises, I want to talk about something even more important.....becoming dangerous at MULTIPLE THINGS in copywriting.

    For example, if you know only one thing, you're  "single threat" person.  Your value is relatively low in the world because you only know one thing, and are confined to the knowledge of that specific industry.

    • Single Threat = Knows a skill.  Value =  $

    • Double Threat = Knows a skill + another useful skill.  Value =  $$

    • Triple Threat = Knows a skill+ another useful skill + ANOTHER useful skill.  Value = $$$$$$

    For example, let's say someone selling a high-priced product in the financial industry is trying to find a copywriter.  Which one do you think would be the most in demand?

     

    Obviously the Triple Threat is going to have a greater advantage, ESPECIALLY if the client is trying to sell financial products. Triple Threat guy will be able to bring a variety of experience (client work, psychology, financial industry) into his writing.

    Our poor Single Threat Guy only has one trick up his sleeve, and is therefore inherently less valuable than the Triple Threat Guy.

    Read more about becoming a Triple Threat here.

     

     

    #13.) Use "The Caveman Voice" when editing

    Simplifying copy is not about “dumbing down” your copy, it’s about making it easy to read.....so easy a caveman can do it!

    Some of the smartest people in history are famous for using extremely simple language and explanations that a caveman could understand:

    So remember, when editing and reviewing your copy, make sure to put on your “Caveman Voice!”

     

     

    #14.) The "Yawn" Test

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    If you ever get an urge to yawn while reading something then treat that as a gift. 

    If it bores you to read it, you aren’t alone. Don’t write it!

     
     
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    P.S.  Leave a comment below with the different copywriting exercises & examples you've found helpful.  One's you've tried in the past, or one's you're currently doing. It'll help us all get better!
     
     
     
     

    Copywriting Examples and Case Studies: Companies Doing Copywriting Right

     Copywriting is often the fastest way to get the most results for the least amount of effort.
     
    Simply changing the copy on a product can completely change the outcome!

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    Great copywriting is the underlying tool that can transform bad marketing into good marketing, so let's jump into some examples of good copywriting across several different industries:

     

    #1.) The Best Way to Support Your Customer

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    Before: The Best Way to Support Your Customer
    This could mean anything at any stage of a customer engagement. 

    After: Automate Your Customer Service
    It clearly states that this is an automation tool. Also, customer service is more specific than “support your customer”. 

    #2.) Accept customer data from anywhere in the universe.

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    Before: “Accept customer data anywhere in the universe. It’s clever, but isn’t the main benefit.

    After: Import customer data mistake-free, in one click. We deleted the line about the universe and replaced it with a more specific benefit (“mistake-free”). This just makes it easier to understand, and also adds more benefits into that one sentence. 

    #3.) Engage your customers, everywhere. From one place.

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    Before: “Engage your customers, everywhere. From one place”. It’s not clear what an “engagement” is. “Everywhere” is too broad, and it’s not clear what their “from one place” looks like. 

    After: “Analyze all your messaging channels in one dashboard”. We rewrote it to focus on one clear benefit (analyze all your messaging) and one clear feature (one dashboard). 

    #4.) Shift design to a new dimension

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    Before: “Shift design” and “new dimension” were quite confusing.

    After: We showed a real-world use to describe the software.
     

    #5.) One work platform with endless possibilities

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    Before: “Endless possibilities” didn’t describe anything, and those words didn’t earn their pixels to be on the page.


    After: We used a more specific benefit (“collaborate with your team”) and even threw in “no-code” for a strong sentence that describes the product.

    #6.) Software Differently

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    Before: “Software boldly/differently/joyfully” wasn’t very clear.


    After: We described the product in one sentence so a new visitor can quickly understand what the company does.

    #7.) Note taking on a whole new level

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    Before: The phrase “a whole new level” was vague about what it’s talking about.

    After: We showed the main benefit of “Keep your notes organized” front and center.

    #8.) Everything you need for your website

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    Before: “Everything you need” is very vague. What does that really mean?

    After: We wrote that you can “design and publish” your website, and even do it with no code. That small change really helps. 

    #9.) Headline of Rolls Royce Ad

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    This ad shows a cool car plus the headline:

    “At 60 miles an hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock.”

    It’s powerful, letting the eye naturally flow from image to headline to copy.

    It’s the basis of most digital content (like blog posts).

    It laid the groundwork for digital ads (most Facebook Ads have a similar structure).

    #10.) Classic Car Ads (“Ogilvy Layout”)

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    VW’s “Think Small” campaign was built by Julian Koenig and Helmut Krone, but it follows a familiar format often used by David Ogilvy (including on the Rolls Royce ad above):

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    Krone even referred to this format as the “Ogilvy layout”.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s powerful, letting the eye naturally flow from image to headline to copy.
    2. It’s the basis of most digital content (like blog posts).
    3. It laid the groundwork for digital ads (most Facebook Ads have a similar structure).

    #11.) Making "Warning Labels" Easier With Bullet Points:

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    Sometimes good copywriting can be life-saving, like in this example where complex instructions become easy through bullet points.

    What Was Changed:

    1.) The instructions were divided up by "Children" and "Adults" so people don't confuse them.

    2.) The instructions were put into bullet points for easy understanding of the effects of drinking lead. These small changes drastically increased the readability!

    #12.) 1953 Revere Ware Ad

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    This is a simple and effective print ad showcasing the entire lineup of a cookware brand, and it gives an image and quick description of each product.

    #13.) Removing "Excess Words" For Easier Reading

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    A critical issue in many pieces of writing is lots of extra words than don't need to be in the copy!

    Unless the copy is mission critical, you can often ditch it:

    What Was Changed:
    You can notice the "Before" text is almost completely unnecessary. 70% of that text could simply be removed to convey a simple message, and then if more details are needed people can click the link.

    #14.) AirSign Social Media Campaign

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    SwipeFile.com

    It’s kind of weird and grabbing

    #15.) "Bullet-ize" Anything That Can Fit Into A List:

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    Whenever you can, spare people lots of reading by simply "Bullet-izing" items:

    What Was Changed:
    A big (and boring) block of copy was trimmed down to an intro sentence, and then list items were put into a bullet list. This makes comprehension MUCH higher, and takes LESS work on our part asa copywriter!

    #16.) How To Create Advertising That Sells by David Ogilvy

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    SwipeFile.com

    This was an advertising campaign written by David Ogilvy for his agency where they just gave out all their secret sauce. 

    Because this was such a “juicy” piece of content, people would clip it out of magazines and save it. 

    Ironically “giving away” all their secrets brought in $1.8billion worth of business (in 1960’s money) 😬

    #17.) Kernest email

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    AppSumo.com

    This was the first email I wrote to the AppSumo email list, and it was the first email to break $10k in profit. 

    #18.) TheHustle Boss Email

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    TheHustle.com

    “Hands down the easiest way to get a free ticket to Hustle Con”

    …is how this page starts.

    It then gives a user an email template to mail their boss asking for time off and a few hundred bucks to attend the conference. 

    Worked so well!

    #19.) Bose Black Friday Email

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    SwipeFile.com

    This is an example of an email where the product images are more showcased than the copy.

    If you have a product to SHOW, you don’t need to describe it a ton.

    #20.) MixPanel Account Upgrade

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    SwipeFile.com

    This email designed to upgrade customer to a paid tier. They copywriter was clever and made a win win situation even if the client didn’t upgrade.

    They obviously need more space. If they don’t want to pay, the solution is to let MixPanel advertise on there website.

    #21.) AIDA Formula for email

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    This is the classic AIDA formula designed to get someone from catching their interest, making them read all the way through, and then take an action. 

    #22.) Weekly Newsletter Example

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    This is an email called “The STUPID Email” by me!

    If you’re a semi-regular poster on social media, you can make a “Templated Newsletter” like this. 

    STUPID stands for:

    • Swipe
    • Thought
    • Uplifting
    • Picture
    • Interesting
    • Drawing

    You can learn more about how to create a weekly newsletter here:

    https://copywritingcourse.com/blogs/20-how-to-build-a-weekly-newsletter/

     

    #23.) Daily Newsletter Example

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    This is a daily newsletter than goes out from TheHustle. 

     

    #24.) Website Copywriting Improvement:

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    DataStories.com

    They are a hardcore data analytics company run by engineers, which is great.  However the original case studies were coming off very dry and unappealing.  Too much technical data and no simplification of it caused this.

    The basic principle DataStories changed:
    People prefer something that's enjoyable and easy to read.  Even if it's super technical information, you can break it up to be nice and digestible.  On the internet you can use text, images, video, interactive graphs.....so use them if they help convey information better!

    #25.) B2B Sales Email Improvements:

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    Yelp Business Outreach Emails

    The basic principle these Yelp emails changed:
    You know what people hate?  Someone just trying to sell them something out of the blue. You know what people love?  When you send them legitimate ways to increase their business. The new Yelp emails sounded way more personal, AND offered way more great information for the business owner.  A double-win.

    #26.) Brick-n-Mortar Store Street Sign Advertising:

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    Austin Shoe Hospital

    The basic principle these street signs changed:
    Not everyone knows what a shoe hospital does, or all the services they perform.  So why not just tell people......better yet, why not just SHOW them?  In a small amount of space, these signs educate potential customers they could have these services done to their shoes.

    See this full Street Advertising Case Study ➞

    #27.) Long-form Website Copy Example:

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    AppSumo

    The basic principle AppSumo changed:
    A certain amount of people will know exactly what a piece of software does, and buy it on the spot. However a HUGE amount of people probably don't know what it does, and would like to know how it could help them. In this case, long-form copy that went into reasonable-depth of how to use the product drastically helped.

     

    #28.) Service Business Copywriting Example:

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    Powerwashing Business Flyers

    The basic principle these powerwashing flyers changed:
    These flyers broke out of the generic-looking and non-informative marketing box. They look and sound very personal, and offer an irresistible deal!

    See this full Powerwashing Flyers Case Study ➞

    #29.) The Hustle Funny "Four Loko" Giveaway (Email):

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    A free giveaway is mildly exciting, so why not spice up your promotion with a little humor? The Hustle did a great job of this with this giveaway over email:

    What Was Great About It:

    1.) A fun intro to the email gets people hooked.

    2.) Super clear numbers show how many people you need to refer for each corresponding prize. These small touches made this a very successful email! Full email.

    #30.) The Hustle Funny "Four Loko" Giveaway (Email):

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    Who says great copywriting needs to be long and complex? These insanely simple Amazon Alexa ads did everything they needed to, with less than 10 words total:

    Smaller Square Version of ad:

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    What Was Great About These:
    1.) These ads actually EDUCATE people that you can do such things as turn on a fan through Alexa. Many people may not know that's possible, so this gets them interested enough to click.

    2.) They are so brief and explanatory with few words and simple image, they don't need much else. Great copywriting is about transmitting information from one brain to another brain in the most efficient way possible, and these are great examples!

    These simple ads worked brilliantly! See original Alexa ads.

    #31.) Ramit Sethi’s Survey Request (Email):

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    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s relevant (it was delivered a week after the sale)
    2. It’s short, direct, and polite.
    3. It tells you how much time it’ll take (1-2 minutes).

    All that makes it easy to say “yes”.

    #32.) BarkBox’s “How this works” section

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    BarkBox offers subscription boxes for your pet dog. Their homepage lays out exactly how to order, what pricing is like, and what to expect.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. The images make the section eye-catching, engaging, and fun.
    2. The copy tells you everything you need to know (price, schedule, what to expect).
    3. It’s simple and leads to an easy CTA.

    #33.) Ecommerce Stores email marketing

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    MeUndies and Bucketfeet are two ecommerce stores with a heavy emphasis on email marketing. They put their email opt-ins front-and-center with a pop-up and a 15% discount for new buyers.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. They’re direct and not gimmicky. It’s really easy to give them your email.
    2. If you don’t want to opt in, it’s just as easy to say No.

    #34.) Noom’s Pricing Page

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    Noom is a weight loss app with personalized coaching programs. They offer a discounted trial for users to get their feet wet - but they don’t just name a price, they get you to select one of four price options.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. They push you towards a $10 selection by calling it their “most popular choice” and highlighting it with an orange box.
    2. They claim your trial costs them $18 - a price anchor that makes all the options look like great deals.

    #35.) The Glute Guy’s Diet Chart

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    What Was Great About It:

    1. It breaks down a complicated question (What diet should I choose??) into a simple point (“just create a caloric deficit”).
    2. It’s easy to remember and share.
    3. It’s well-organized.

    #36.) Dom, Domino’s Chatbot

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    Domino’s Pizza is the leading pizza chain in North America, thanks in large part to its online tools. Their chatbot is their latest addition, and it’s one of the best bots out there.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s clear and efficient
    2. It remembers your recent orders
    3. It speeds up the ordering process (this order took less than 30 seconds)

    #37.) Swet Tailor’s Facebook Ad (with Callouts)

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    Instead of writing a complicated ad trying to describe something, Swet Tailor used a basic (but attractive) image with callouts highlighting the selling points of these pants.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s easy to read.
    2. The photo is simple and highlights the pants effectively.
    3. It’s funny.

    #38.) The 4 Hour Chef Sales Page

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    Tim Ferriss’ is known for taking complex ideas and breaking them down into simple, tactical steps - which is exactly how he designed the sales page for his book, The 4 Hour Chef.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. Highly relevant benefits laid out like pages of a book.
    2. Explainer images that do just enough to get you curious
    3. A 5-step “journey” that outlines a reasonable path to Ferriss’ big promises.

    #39.) Tuft and Needle Sales Page (12 Reasons Why…)

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    Here’s the full page: 12 Reasons Why You Haven't Bought From Us (Yet)

    What Was Great About It:

    1. The page deconstructs 12 common objections to buying from Tuft and Needle.
    2. It uses clever images to hammer home each point (like the fact that they have 5-10X more reviews than their competitors.)
    3. It layers in testimonials and buy buttons throughout the page, without taking away from the sales points.

    #40.) Apartment Follow Up Email

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    Most apartment management companies don’t follow up with potential tenants who come visit their buildings. Vista View is one of the few that does follow up. They send out this gentle reminder to apply (with a small discount on the application fee) a few days after a prospective tenant’s visit.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s really simple and direct.
    2. It’s time-relevant.
    3. It’s got attractive pictures of the model apartments
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