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    Copywriting Exercises: Best Ways To Get Better At Copywriting

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    Learning copywriting is like building muscle...you have to do lots of reps and exercises. This post will give you "copywriting workout sets" to try throughout your day. 

    This will help take your copywriting to the next level.

    Let's get started! 

    #1.) Write like you're talking to your best friend

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    It's common to think that we need to speak differently in certain settings. But it’s not true.

    Whether you are speaking to a prospect, colleague, or friend - just be yourself.

    Write how you normally talk, and your copy will be more easy to understand!

     

     

    #2.) Watch this Copywriting Exercises video

    While reading through this article you can also watch/listen to this accompanying video:

     

     

    #3.) Mental Ad Re-Writing

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    This is mental exercise where you see ANY ad, and think to yourself: "How can I make this ad better?"

    So if you're walking by a billboard, you think in your head what ways you can get people to crave that burger even more.

    So you would think in your head:

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    Just as practice you'd come up with different angles like this:

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    Or maybe you'd try to make people crave that Big Mac:

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    Or maybe you'd go with a stupid pun:

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    #4.) Whenever you see a sign, re-write it in your head

    Watch this video to do the "Mental Ad Re-Writing" exercise when you're out in the wild:

     

     

     

    #5.) Keep your own "Swipe File"

    A "Swipe File" is just a folder you keep cool advertisements or cool pieces of copy in.

    Your Swipe File can be physical or digital.

    My Physical swipe file....it's a plain folder I keep in my reading room.

    My Digital Swipe file.....it's a folder I keep on my Mac desktop. Whenever I see something interesting, I do [COMMAND + SHIFT + 4] and do a crop-screenshot of the thing I'm trying to save.  I then drag that screenshot into the Swipe File folder:

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    (yes....Boo The Dog is my laptop wallpaper)

     

    You should save all sorts of stuff in your swipe file that you think is awesome, or that made you take an action.  An ad, a webpage layout, a specific choice of words.....anything to to that effect.

    Here's a general rule of thumb for your own Swipe File:

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    The purpose of your Swipe File is to frequently flip through it for inspiration.

    For example, I'm thinking about pricing techniques for a client of mine right now......and a quick dip in my digital swipe file popped up this cool example of how it's done:

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    I must've briefly seen this sales page and thought, "Hmmmm.....that's a really nice pricing layout!" and done a quick [COMMAND + SHIFT + 4] and grabbed a screenshot of the layout.  Thanks to this one addition to my swipe file, I can now implement a similar strategy on my clients site.

    That's the benefit of having a solid swipe file laying around!

    Since mobile web browsing is fast becoming the norm, I also see a ton of stuff I want to save on my phone.  For this reason I created a specific folder in my iPhone and made a Phone Swipe File too!

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    Do this on your own phone.  It'll be a nice place to store screenshots when mobile browsing and you see something that grabs your attention.

    So I would highly suggest you start creating your own swipe file, but if you don't want the hassle of maintaining one, I've create a full Swipe File for any marketer to use right here:

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    #6.) State the benefits, not features

    Whenever people try to explain what their company does (especially engineers), they tend to brag about the FEATURES of a product.

    This sounds like:

    Feature:
    "Our software can handle multiple core structures of data at the same time which means during increased load times the server will be stable."

     

    This is a FEATURE description.  However customers are generally more interested in what the feature is AND it's result.

    This would sound more like:

    Benefit:
    "Even if your site gets featured on the front page of CNN and brings in 300,000 visits per hour......your site won't go down."  

     

    You need to show the feature, but also explain WHY it helps the customers (because sometimes it's not so obvious to them).

    Here's an example of Southwest Airlines promoting their membership program.  If you signup to their mileage credit card, you get 50,000 points.  That's great....but what does 50,000 points TRANSLATE INTO?copywriting-features-vs-benefits.png

    You see how the "Benefits" side also explains what the customer will actually get with those 50,000 points?  That's a good example of explaining the BENEFITS rather than features.

    Make sure to practice stating the benefits of what you're selling, not just features.  

     

     

    #7.) Trim Trim Trim to make everything shorter.

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    Kind of like cramming in words to a Tweet.  I show a 3-step formula for this in my how to create a tagline article.

    This is the art of making something long into something small.

    What is the shortest amount of space you can take to transfer a complete thought into someone else's brain?

    It's by Trim Trim Trimming......
    Good copywriting is about sending information from one brain to another in the most efficient manner.  

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    A lot of people hear things like, "Long copy sells better!!!!" Well it's true to a degree.  The rule of thumb is:

    • Long copy is ok.
    • Longwinded copy is NOT ok.

    Taking longwinded copy and making it more concise is a GREAT copywriting exercise! For example:

    Longwinded version:
    We have higher expectations for ourselves and would like to introduce you to our offering which contain a variety of tools and service for the aviation industry.  Our primary purpose is to use computer solutions to make aviation more comfortable and safe for the commanding pilots of aviation vehicles.

    Trimmed down version: Our primary purpose is to use computer solutions to make flying safer and more comfortable for every passenger of an airplane.

    Trimmed down and concise version: We make software that automatically flies planes.

    You can see how much easier the trimmed-down and concise versions of this page are.

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    Make sure you mentally do this whenever you see longwinded copy.    

     

     

    #8.) Do "CopyWork" by hand-copying famous pieces of copy

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    To get a "feel" of what it's like to write good copy, you can just COPY good pieces of copy!!

    If you want some interesting pieces to start, try some of these on our CopyWork Examples page.

    I would also encourage you to write out ads that YOU think are good. Perhaps even from products you've bought in the past.  

     

     

    #9.) Push The Boundaries (a bit)

    Now listen up chump.....I'm not telling you to purposely agitate people with your copy. What I AM saying is you should not always play it so damn safe.

    For example, there's two variations of a piece of copy trying to explain "how to make your ads stand out." Both of these versions try to explain the same thing. But look which one does a much better job:

    VERSION 1:  Boring Tone

    "In marketing you need to convey your point across to the desired target.  You need to ensure your message is targeted and differentiated from the rest of the crowd.  This can be accomplished by analyzing the competition in your industry and being different.

    We encourage you to make this differentiation in your own marketing."

     

    That was super plain, and did a very bad job getting the reader excited to try this on their own. Let's see how we can "push the boundaries" a bit to make it better:

    VERSION 2:  Sexed-Up

    "If your advertisements are the exact same as all of your boring-as-hell competition, something is wrong.  Let's change this up for you:

    In the pickup artist industry there's a term known as "Peacocking."  It means when going out in public, the person wears one article of clothing or accessory that's slightly odd or attention-getting.  Since the man is wearing something very conversation-worthy, it makes it easier for a woman to approach him about it and strike up a conversation.

    About 20% of your ads should use this "peacocking" advice.  If all the ads you're competing with look the same, you should experiment with mixing it up. For example, if the ads for a game look professional like this:

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    ...then perhaps making an ad that's completely the opposite can work as well.  For example, this terrible-looking ad got a 2.5x higher response than the more professional versions:

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    Make sure to use some "peacocking" in your own ads, you might be shocked at the results. You can do this just by making 10% of your ads completely the opposite of what you're used to."

     

    Did you see how different the two pieces of copy were.....and how much better the "Sexed-Up" version did at transmitting the information?

    It's not only because the copy included ads, it was because the copy took risks like talking about something juicy like "pickup artists" and such.

    Now I'm not saying this is appropriate in every environment (checkout how to find the proper tone of voice for your copy here)......but what I AM SAYING is the "sexed-up" version definitely gets the point across better!

    And remember what I said before.....

    "Good copywriting is about sending information from one brain to another in the most efficient manner."

    I'd say at least 10-20% of your writing should attempt to gently push the boundaries you're accustomed to.

     

     

    #10.) Read your copy out loud

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    Step 1: Read your copy out loud to make sure it sounds conversational.

    Step 2: Realize how ridiculous what you wrote just sounds....then change it up.

    This is the most shockingly simple AND shockingly most effective way to kill long-winded copy. Great copywriting often sounds extremely conversational, as if the person is reading a personal message from you.

    You'll frequently hear someone say, "I can describe it over the phone really easily.....but when I write it doesn't sound the same."  That's because they're not writing conversationally!

    The practice here is to read your copy out loud to yourself or others.  You can even record your voice on your phone, then play it back for yourself to ensure it's conversational and doesn't sound like a boring robot wrote it.    

     

     

    #11.) Wear ear plugs

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    I know this sounds a little silly, but wearing ear plugs when writing is one of my most-used tricks for writing great copy! It's literally like having a superpower, because I can put ear plugs in, and instantly "be in my own little world."

     

     

    #12.) Become a triple threat

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    Now that we've gone over all these copywriting exercises, I want to talk about something even more important.....becoming dangerous at MULTIPLE THINGS in copywriting.

    For example, if you know only one thing, you're  "single threat" person.  Your value is relatively low in the world because you only know one thing, and are confined to the knowledge of that specific industry.

    • Single Threat = Knows a skill.  Value =  $

    • Double Threat = Knows a skill + another useful skill.  Value =  $$

    • Triple Threat = Knows a skill+ another useful skill + ANOTHER useful skill.  Value = $$$$$$

    For example, let's say someone selling a high-priced product in the financial industry is trying to find a copywriter.  Which one do you think would be the most in demand?

     

    Obviously the Triple Threat is going to have a greater advantage, ESPECIALLY if the client is trying to sell financial products. Triple Threat guy will be able to bring a variety of experience (client work, psychology, financial industry) into his writing.

    Our poor Single Threat Guy only has one trick up his sleeve, and is therefore inherently less valuable than the Triple Threat Guy.

    Read more about becoming a Triple Threat here.

     

     

    #13.) Use "The Caveman Voice" when editing

    Simplifying copy is not about “dumbing down” your copy, it’s about making it easy to read.....so easy a caveman can do it!

    Some of the smartest people in history are famous for using extremely simple language and explanations that a caveman could understand:

    So remember, when editing and reviewing your copy, make sure to put on your “Caveman Voice!”

     

     

    #14.) The "Yawn" Test

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    If you ever get an urge to yawn while reading something then treat that as a gift. 

    If it bores you to read it, you aren’t alone. Don’t write it!

     
     
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    P.S.  Leave a comment below with the different copywriting exercises & examples you've found helpful.  One's you've tried in the past, or one's you're currently doing. It'll help us all get better!
     
     
     
     

    Meeting Request Email Templates (Schedule A Call Using These Emails)

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    Let's say you need to schedule a call with someone. These are templates you can use to get a meeting scheduled. They are geared towards getting meetings with potential clients.  

    #1.) The Standard Meeting Template:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Schedule a meeting?
    Subject 2: Meeting tomorrow?
    Subject 3: [Company] + [Their Company] Meeting
    Subject 4: You + Me = Meet?

    Dear Marketing Manager,

    Our company, [Name], would like to request a meeting with you to discuss the services that we can offer you.

    [Details Of Service]

    Please contact me with an opening in your schedule so that we can arrange a meeting.

    Sincerely,
    [Name] - [Email]

    #2.) Flattery Then Schedule A Meeting:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Love your work!
    Subject 2: You're a legend.
    Subject 3: Quick call (with a legend)?
    Subject 4: You are legendary in the [Industry] community

    It's great to finally connect with a sales legend!

    Hi [First Name],

    I have to say this right off the bat: I really admire the work you've done at [Company] and how you've improved [What They've Done]. I would love to pick your brain on [Their Specific Skill].

    I think you can continue to increase those sales with [Your Services] time is precious but I wouldn't ask if there wasn't some substantial benefit for you -- can steal you away for a 15 minute phone call tomorrow at 10AM EST?

    Thanks,
    [Name]

    #3.) Casual And Informative Meeting Invitation:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Call tomorrow?
    Subject 2: 3 things to cover tomorrow
    Subject 3: Tuesday at 4pm - 4:15pm sound good?
    Subject 4: Touching base tomorrow

    Hey [Name]!

    Mind if we hop on a (strictly timed) 15 minute call tomorrow?
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    I'd love to:
    -- Show you what our top clients is doing to get more emails.
    -- Show you where you site is lacking conversions.
    -- See if I can improve your conversions on the spot.

    Does 4pm - 4:15pm on Tuesday sound good?

    Talk soon,
    [NAME]

    #4.) Traditional Meeting Template (Kind Of Boring And Generic):

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Availability tomorrow?
    Subject 2: Let's schedule a call
    Subject 3: [Company] can use our help
    Subject 4: [Product] + [Their Company] = Amazing!

    Hey [First Name],

    I hope you're doing well! I wanted to reach out because [Explain How You Got Their Content Info From A Trusted Colleague Or Recommendation].

    [Name Of Company] has a new platform that will help: [Your Team At] [Their Company Name] [One Sentence Pitch Of Benefits].

    I know that [Our Product] will be able to help [Name Of Your Company] [Insert High Level Benefit]. Are you available for a quick call [Time Options]?

    Cheers,
    [NAME]

    #5.) Personalized Industry Meeting Email:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: [Insert Company Action] lately?
    Subject 2: Saw the news about [Insert Company Action]
    Subject 3: Saw you in the press recently
    Subject 4: [Impressive Customer] uses us, would you like to also?

    [First Name],

    Because I work so much with [Your Targeted Industry], I constantly follow industry news. Recently I noticed you’ve [Insert Company Action].

    Usually when that happens, [Insert Business Issue] becomes a priority. That’s why I thought you might be infestered in finding out how we helped [Impressive Customers] get going quickly in their new direction - without any of the typical glitches.

    If you’d like to learn more, let’s set up a quick call. How does [Time Options] look on your calendar?

    -[Name]

    P.S. If you’re not the right person to speak with, who do you recommend I talk to?

    #6.) Brag A Little Bit:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: [Your Company] + [Their Company] = ❤️❤️❤️
    Subject 2: Quick chat about [Field] tomorrow? (we're near the top)
    Subject 3: [Impressive Customer] loves us
    Subject 4: Top 15 companies in [Industry] use us

    Hi [First Name],

    My name is [Name] and I’m with [Company Name], a [What You Do]. We’ve worked with venture backed startups to Fortune 500 companies like [Impressive Customers].

    We take a different approach to growing companies and aren’t like other [Companies In Your Niche]. We move quickly and if we don’t think we can kick butt for you, we’ll be upfront about it.

    Are you free for a chat [Time Options] about [Field]?

    -[Name]

    #7.) Offer Demo Of The Product:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Quick demo of [Product]?
    Subject 2: Respond faster to customers
    Subject 3: Faster support for [Their Company]
    Subject 4: Does [Their Company] have painfully slow support?

    Hi,

    I've seen from your website that you're getting repetitive support requests.

    I'm the [Title] of Gorgias, we help support teams treat all customer support in one screen. This way, the support team can respond faster to customers.

    Do you think it could help [Company]? If so, happy to tell you how (here's my calendar) / show you a demo (we're in SF too).

    [Name]
    Gorgias.io

    #8.) Casual Meeting Request After Meeting Someone In Person:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Great to meet you!
    Subject 2: Had a fun time yesterday!
    Subject 3: Met at [Host]'s party
    Subject 4: Great meeting, let's keep it going...

    Hey [Name]!

    We met at Lesley’s party yesterday.

    Sounds like you were interested in some of the copywriting services we offer.

    Wanna setup a quick meeting this week to see what we can do? Schedule a time here.

    Sincerely,
    [Name]

    P.S. When I say 15 minutes, I actually mean 15 minutes. I totally respect your time 🙂

    #9.) Cold Website Help Meeting Request:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Issue with your site
    Subject 2: [Issue] with site?
    Subject 3: Can I fix your [Issue] bug?
    Subject 4: [Industry] professional at your service

    Hi [Name],

    I noticed [Issue] on your site, when I was using it for [Use Case].

    I’m a [Position] and I’ve fixed this for other [Industry] professional, and I think I could help. I have some free time coming up next week - here’s a link to my scheduler: [Scheduler Link]

    Best,
    [Name] [
    Scheduler Link] / [Website]

    #10.) The "Brutal Honesty" Strategy:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: [Pain Point] bothering you? I can help
    Subject 2: I do [Solution] for [Industry] people like you
    Subject 3: Quick call (15 min strict limit)
    Subject 4: 15 min call scheduled for tomorrow?

    Hey [First Name],

    [Name] here. You don’t know me, but thanks to some stealthy internet stalking, I know that you [Pain Point].

    It turns out, I can [Solution]. One of my clients even [Result].

    Would you be interested in hopping on a quick 15-minute call to learn more? If so, click here to schedule a call.

    If not, no worries. Just reply with "Scram, buddy. I'm not interested." Looking forward to your response!

    Mitch Glass
    P.S. - To sweeten the deal, here’s a picture of a cute dog:
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    #11.) LucidChart Meeting Schedule Template:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Make diagramming more exciting
    Subject 2: Most diagrams suck, not ours
    Subject 3: LucidChart wants you to diagram better
    Subject 4: Diagram Demo Day???

    Hi [First Name],

    You guys are doing some pretty great things in the professional design space.

    I'm reaching out because we've been able to help companies in similar situations drive increased visibility, collaboration, and efficiency as you diagram processes using Lucidchart. We offer integrations with G suite and can automate AWS network mapping.

    With over 10 million users, Lucidchart is the #1 alternative to Microsoft Visio.

    I'd love to learn more about your business, and see if Lucidchart would be a good fit. Do you have 5 minutes this week to talk?

    Regards,
    [Name]
    Business Development,
    Lucid Software
    www.lucidchart.com

    #12.) UpCounsel "10 Minute Demo" Scheduling Request:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Legal for [Company Name]
    Subject 2: Can we show you UpCounsel insider numbers?
    Subject 3: Handling your day-to-day legal work
    Subject 4: we just do all your legal work?

    Hi [First Name],

    I'm [NAME] from UpCounsel: A tech-enabled legal solutions provider & Menlo-backed company.

    Companies like Airbnb, HotelTonight and Stripe rely on us everyday to handle their day-to-day legal work – while saving 60% on their legal bills, this includes: contracts, intellectual property, employment, etc.

    We're offering 10 minute demos, would you like to schedule one?

    [Name] | UpCounsel
    Business Legal Solutions

    Try It – See Our Rates & Attorneys!

    #13.) Optimonk Specific Outreach To Shopify Vendors:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Appointment request
    Subject 2: Just 15 min?
    Subject 3: More Leads. Less Effort. Better Shopify.
    Subject 4: Demo of beta-test Shopify product.

    Hi [First Name],

    I’m [Name] marketing manager at OptiMonk. We provide the most popular onsite retargeting tool for Shopify, which you can check here: https://apps.shopify.com/optimonk.

    We have an award-winning strategy for increasing the number of leads, by spending less time, effort, risks, however more potential. It is something we’ve been working on in our marketing department and I would love to share it with you.

    I’ve checked [Company Name] and I believe we have the same target market which is Shopify, so I thought this cooperation can be beneficial for both of us.

    I would really appreciate a 15 minute call with you to share further details. I believe it will be huge for both of us.

    Thanks,
    [Name]
    OPTIMONK
    www.optimonk.com
    Try it: Free trial for 14 days

     

    #14.) Zenefits Testimonial Included Meeting Request:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Something of interest for [Company Name]
    Subject 2: [Impressive Customer] uses Zenefits, you on board?
    Subject 3: "We can compete with bigger companies bc of Zenefits"
    Subject 4: Onboard 45 associates in 6 weeks or less

    Hi [First Name],

    As a Co-founder in your industry, I wanted to reach out to you about Zenefits.

    We save companies countless hours (and dollars) by automating the manual data entry typically associated with HR. We do this by giving you a single place to manage your HR administration, compliance, benefits, and payroll - making it easy for systems to sync and share information.

    Why Our Customers Love Us: “Having a system like Zenefits means we’re able to compete with bigger companies that have a staff with so many HR people doing all this work.” - BioPoint, who relied on Zenefits to help them onboard 45 associates in 6 weeks.

    I’d love to show you how Zenefits can be [Company Name]'s solution and partner in HR. Do you have some time this week for a quick chat?

    Best,
    [Name] | Zenefits | 250 Brannan St, San Francisco, CA

    #15.) Yodel Question-Based Meeting Schedule Email:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Hello [First Name], I have a question about your Slack integrations
    Subject 2: Slack integrations??
    Subject 3: Customer service time down to 20 minute responses
    Subject 4: Slack + Magic = Yodel 😎

    Hi [First Name],

    Are you and your team avid Slack users? Are there some integrations that you wish you had? How would you like to get rid of your old phone system and run all your calls through Slack? Sweet right...we thought so too.

    I am [Name] from Yodel, the first fully integrated phone system for Slack. We give you the ability to ditch your old phone system and give you your very own virtual receptionist, through Slack, that automatically routes phone calls to the right team member.

    This makes incoming calls and customer service a synch.

    Does this sound like something you’d like to try for free? I’d be happy to show you how it works or simply give you and your team access. If so, here is my calendar to book a time this week or next.

    Sincerely,
    [Name]
    YodelTalk, Inc | www.yodel.io
    2443 Fillmore St, San Francisco, CA 94115

     

    #16.) Book a meeting with a CTO:

    Ranking: ️️
    Subject 1: Quick question about (company name)
    Subject 2: Here is a new monetization idea for (company name)
    Subject 3: Open to a new business tool?
    Subject 4: (my company) + (your company)

    Hi (first name),

    I checked out your site today. And was impressed with the simple and engaging user experience!

    Curious if (company name) would ever consider a custom ad platform? Because it is a great way to drive new revenue without compromising the user in any way.

    (my company) has helped launch ad platforms for (company x, y, and z). These brands have used our APIs to create promotions that have increased their revenue by millions.

    It would be great to chat to see how our APIs and SDKs could maximize your revenue and save you time and money.

    Feel free to arrange a call with us by clicking on this link.

    Best regards,
    (your name)

    #17.) Acknowledging how busy they are:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: New revenue generation
    Subject 2: Quick question for (first name)
    Subject 3: Looking for a new revenue stream?
    Subject 4: Quick question (I promise it will actually be quick)

    Hi (first name)

    I am sure you receive hundreds of messages a day. But I wanted to reach out because I think we can help (company name) own a new revenue stream. With a custom ad platform.

    I would love to share how our (specific tools) could save time and earn more money. Just like (client x and client y) are.

    Do you have a few minutes to chat next week?

    Cheers,
    (your name)

    #18.) The anti-”I look forward to hearing back from you” close:

    Ranking: 
    Subject 1: Exploratory chat?
    Subject 2: Would love to connect next week
    Subject 3: Really impressed with your recent growth
    Subject 4: Next Tuesday at 10:00am?

    Hey (first name),

    I just researched (company name) and was really impressed with (specific thing you liked)!

    I was curious if you are exploring new revenue streams at the moment? If so, would love to connect.

    (My company) has helped brands like (company x, y, and z) quickly start generating new revenue. With (your service/product). 

    Do you have an opening in your calendar next week to connect for a brief chat? It would be great to see if we could help (company name) do something similar.

    If not, no response needed.

    All the best,
    (your name)

    Meeting request email templates tips:

    My job is to get meetings booked with C-level executives at 500+ employee tech companies (like Afterpay, Expedia, and Shutterstock). I typically send out 50 emails per day. Here are some tips I have learned along the way.

    Every great “meeting request” email typically has 4 main sections:
    • Relevant subject line
    • Intro with personalization
    • Reason for reaching out
    • Call To Action (CTA)

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    RELEVANT SUBJECT LINE:
    The subject line has to be relevant to what you are looking for. But you also want to get them to be curious enough to open it.

    Good: Hey (name) are you open to chatting next week?
    Bad: Hey I saw a squirrel

    EX 1: quick question for you
    EX 2: open to chatting tomorrow?
    EX 3: I was born to work with you

     

    INTRO WITH PERSONALIZATION:
    You must personalize the beginning of the email. These people are receiving hundreds of messages a day. And they will be able to instantly tell whether you have taken time to do some homework. Or if you are just mass spamming then your email will be deleted immediately. It is easier than you may think thanks to the internet. Spend 5 minutes doing a quick google search on them. Find one interesting fact about them or their company and mention it in the first line of the email.

    Good: I have been following you for 2.5 years now and love what you are building over at (company x)!
    Bad: Gotcha! No squirrels over here actually. But now that I have your attention…

    EX 1: Have been following you for a few years now and love what you do.
    EX 2: I just saw your tweet about (x) and totally agree. I think the industry is headed in a great direction.
    EX 3: I noticed on Linkedin that you just got promoted to Chief Revenue Officer. Congrats! I am sure you are going to provide tons of valuable in this new role.

     

    REASON FOR REACHING OUT:
    You have to get to the point quickly. Let them know why you have shown up in their inbox. And be respectful of their time. This part is key. Ask them a question about the problem you hope to solve for them. Then provide some social proof to give you some credibility.

    Good: Curious if you are experiencing (specific pain point that you can solve)? Because I think (my company) can help you with that. (my company) has helped some of the biggest brands in (their industry) like (company x, y, and z). They quickly got the results they were hoping for.

    Bad: I was wondering if you are having any problems in your business? I am not sure if we could fix any of those, but I would love if you could give us a chance!

    EX 1: I am reaching out because I have noticed that companies like (their company) are struggling in this (specific area). And I don’t want that to be the case for you.

    EX 2: We are currently helping (company x, y, and z) with this. And they have seen an immediate improvement in (x).

    EX 3: We already help (competitor of yours) and I think we could do something similar for you.

     

    CALL TO ACTION (CTA):
    This is where you actually ask for what you want. Which is to hop on a call. Make this part as clear as possible. And super easy for them to do. No ambiguity on what you are asking for.

    Good: I would love to hop on a quick call to share how we could help. Are you available next week?
    Bad: So what do ya say? Want to meet up and see if I could maybe be of some help?

    EX 1: Do you think this could be useful to you? If so, would love to connect. How about next Tuesday at 10:00am?

    EX 2: I would love to share a few specific ideas I have for (company name). Are you open to hopping on a call tomorrow at 3:00pm?

    EX 3: It would be great to share a quick demo of how exactly we could help. Do you have an opening Monday at 2:00pm? Or Wednesday at 11:00am?

     

     

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    Copywriting Examples and Case Studies: Companies Doing Copywriting Right

     Copywriting is often the fastest way to get the most results for the least amount of effort.
     
    Simply changing the copy on a product can completely change the outcome!

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    Great copywriting is the underlying tool that can transform bad marketing into good marketing, so let's jump into some examples of good copywriting across several different industries:

     

    #1.) The Best Way to Support Your Customer

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    Before: The Best Way to Support Your Customer
    This could mean anything at any stage of a customer engagement. 

    After: Automate Your Customer Service
    It clearly states that this is an automation tool. Also, customer service is more specific than “support your customer”. 

    #2.) Accept customer data from anywhere in the universe.

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    Before: “Accept customer data anywhere in the universe. It’s clever, but isn’t the main benefit.

    After: Import customer data mistake-free, in one click. We deleted the line about the universe and replaced it with a more specific benefit (“mistake-free”). This just makes it easier to understand, and also adds more benefits into that one sentence. 

    #3.) Engage your customers, everywhere. From one place.

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    Before: “Engage your customers, everywhere. From one place”. It’s not clear what an “engagement” is. “Everywhere” is too broad, and it’s not clear what their “from one place” looks like. 

    After: “Analyze all your messaging channels in one dashboard”. We rewrote it to focus on one clear benefit (analyze all your messaging) and one clear feature (one dashboard). 

    #4.) Shift design to a new dimension

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    Before: “Shift design” and “new dimension” were quite confusing.

    After: We showed a real-world use to describe the software.
     

    #5.) One work platform with endless possibilities

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    Before: “Endless possibilities” didn’t describe anything, and those words didn’t earn their pixels to be on the page.


    After: We used a more specific benefit (“collaborate with your team”) and even threw in “no-code” for a strong sentence that describes the product.

    #6.) Software Differently

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    Before: “Software boldly/differently/joyfully” wasn’t very clear.


    After: We described the product in one sentence so a new visitor can quickly understand what the company does.

    #7.) Note taking on a whole new level

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    Before: The phrase “a whole new level” was vague about what it’s talking about.

    After: We showed the main benefit of “Keep your notes organized” front and center.

    #8.) Everything you need for your website

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    Before: “Everything you need” is very vague. What does that really mean?

    After: We wrote that you can “design and publish” your website, and even do it with no code. That small change really helps. 

    #9.) Headline of Rolls Royce Ad

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    This ad shows a cool car plus the headline:

    “At 60 miles an hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock.”

    It’s powerful, letting the eye naturally flow from image to headline to copy.

    It’s the basis of most digital content (like blog posts).

    It laid the groundwork for digital ads (most Facebook Ads have a similar structure).

    #10.) Classic Car Ads (“Ogilvy Layout”)

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    VW’s “Think Small” campaign was built by Julian Koenig and Helmut Krone, but it follows a familiar format often used by David Ogilvy (including on the Rolls Royce ad above):

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    Krone even referred to this format as the “Ogilvy layout”.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s powerful, letting the eye naturally flow from image to headline to copy.
    2. It’s the basis of most digital content (like blog posts).
    3. It laid the groundwork for digital ads (most Facebook Ads have a similar structure).

    #11.) Making "Warning Labels" Easier With Bullet Points:

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    Sometimes good copywriting can be life-saving, like in this example where complex instructions become easy through bullet points.

    What Was Changed:

    1.) The instructions were divided up by "Children" and "Adults" so people don't confuse them.

    2.) The instructions were put into bullet points for easy understanding of the effects of drinking lead. These small changes drastically increased the readability!

    #12.) 1953 Revere Ware Ad

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    This is a simple and effective print ad showcasing the entire lineup of a cookware brand, and it gives an image and quick description of each product.

    #13.) Removing "Excess Words" For Easier Reading

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    A critical issue in many pieces of writing is lots of extra words than don't need to be in the copy!

    Unless the copy is mission critical, you can often ditch it:

    What Was Changed:
    You can notice the "Before" text is almost completely unnecessary. 70% of that text could simply be removed to convey a simple message, and then if more details are needed people can click the link.

    #14.) AirSign Social Media Campaign

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    It’s kind of weird and grabbing

    #15.) "Bullet-ize" Anything That Can Fit Into A List:

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    Whenever you can, spare people lots of reading by simply "Bullet-izing" items:

    What Was Changed:
    A big (and boring) block of copy was trimmed down to an intro sentence, and then list items were put into a bullet list. This makes comprehension MUCH higher, and takes LESS work on our part asa copywriter!

    #16.) How To Create Advertising That Sells by David Ogilvy

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    This was an advertising campaign written by David Ogilvy for his agency where they just gave out all their secret sauce. 

    Because this was such a “juicy” piece of content, people would clip it out of magazines and save it. 

    Ironically “giving away” all their secrets brought in $1.8billion worth of business (in 1960’s money) 😬

    #17.) Kernest email

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    AppSumo.com

    This was the first email I wrote to the AppSumo email list, and it was the first email to break $10k in profit. 

    #18.) TheHustle Boss Email

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    TheHustle.com

    “Hands down the easiest way to get a free ticket to Hustle Con”

    …is how this page starts.

    It then gives a user an email template to mail their boss asking for time off and a few hundred bucks to attend the conference. 

    Worked so well!

    #19.) Bose Black Friday Email

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    This is an example of an email where the product images are more showcased than the copy.

    If you have a product to SHOW, you don’t need to describe it a ton.

    #20.) MixPanel Account Upgrade

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    This email designed to upgrade customer to a paid tier. They copywriter was clever and made a win win situation even if the client didn’t upgrade.

    They obviously need more space. If they don’t want to pay, the solution is to let MixPanel advertise on there website.

    #21.) AIDA Formula for email

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    This is the classic AIDA formula designed to get someone from catching their interest, making them read all the way through, and then take an action. 

    #22.) Weekly Newsletter Example

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    This is an email called “The STUPID Email” by me!

    If you’re a semi-regular poster on social media, you can make a “Templated Newsletter” like this. 

    STUPID stands for:

    • Swipe
    • Thought
    • Uplifting
    • Picture
    • Interesting
    • Drawing

    You can learn more about how to create a weekly newsletter here:

    https://copywritingcourse.com/blogs/20-how-to-build-a-weekly-newsletter/

     

    #23.) Daily Newsletter Example

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    This is a daily newsletter than goes out from TheHustle. 

     

    #24.) Website Copywriting Improvement:

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    DataStories.com

    They are a hardcore data analytics company run by engineers, which is great.  However the original case studies were coming off very dry and unappealing.  Too much technical data and no simplification of it caused this.

    The basic principle DataStories changed:
    People prefer something that's enjoyable and easy to read.  Even if it's super technical information, you can break it up to be nice and digestible.  On the internet you can use text, images, video, interactive graphs.....so use them if they help convey information better!

    #25.) B2B Sales Email Improvements:

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    Yelp Business Outreach Emails

    The basic principle these Yelp emails changed:
    You know what people hate?  Someone just trying to sell them something out of the blue. You know what people love?  When you send them legitimate ways to increase their business. The new Yelp emails sounded way more personal, AND offered way more great information for the business owner.  A double-win.

    #26.) Brick-n-Mortar Store Street Sign Advertising:

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    Austin Shoe Hospital

    The basic principle these street signs changed:
    Not everyone knows what a shoe hospital does, or all the services they perform.  So why not just tell people......better yet, why not just SHOW them?  In a small amount of space, these signs educate potential customers they could have these services done to their shoes.

    See this full Street Advertising Case Study ➞

    #27.) Long-form Website Copy Example:

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    AppSumo

    The basic principle AppSumo changed:
    A certain amount of people will know exactly what a piece of software does, and buy it on the spot. However a HUGE amount of people probably don't know what it does, and would like to know how it could help them. In this case, long-form copy that went into reasonable-depth of how to use the product drastically helped.

     

    #28.) Service Business Copywriting Example:

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    Powerwashing Business Flyers

    The basic principle these powerwashing flyers changed:
    These flyers broke out of the generic-looking and non-informative marketing box. They look and sound very personal, and offer an irresistible deal!

    See this full Powerwashing Flyers Case Study ➞

    #29.) The Hustle Funny "Four Loko" Giveaway (Email):

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    A free giveaway is mildly exciting, so why not spice up your promotion with a little humor? The Hustle did a great job of this with this giveaway over email:

    What Was Great About It:

    1.) A fun intro to the email gets people hooked.

    2.) Super clear numbers show how many people you need to refer for each corresponding prize. These small touches made this a very successful email! Full email.

    #30.) The Hustle Funny "Four Loko" Giveaway (Email):

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    Who says great copywriting needs to be long and complex? These insanely simple Amazon Alexa ads did everything they needed to, with less than 10 words total:

    Smaller Square Version of ad:

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    What Was Great About These:
    1.) These ads actually EDUCATE people that you can do such things as turn on a fan through Alexa. Many people may not know that's possible, so this gets them interested enough to click.

    2.) They are so brief and explanatory with few words and simple image, they don't need much else. Great copywriting is about transmitting information from one brain to another brain in the most efficient way possible, and these are great examples!

    These simple ads worked brilliantly! See original Alexa ads.

    #31.) Ramit Sethi’s Survey Request (Email):

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    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s relevant (it was delivered a week after the sale)
    2. It’s short, direct, and polite.
    3. It tells you how much time it’ll take (1-2 minutes).

    All that makes it easy to say “yes”.

    #32.) BarkBox’s “How this works” section

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    BarkBox offers subscription boxes for your pet dog. Their homepage lays out exactly how to order, what pricing is like, and what to expect.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. The images make the section eye-catching, engaging, and fun.
    2. The copy tells you everything you need to know (price, schedule, what to expect).
    3. It’s simple and leads to an easy CTA.

    #33.) Ecommerce Stores email marketing

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    MeUndies and Bucketfeet are two ecommerce stores with a heavy emphasis on email marketing. They put their email opt-ins front-and-center with a pop-up and a 15% discount for new buyers.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. They’re direct and not gimmicky. It’s really easy to give them your email.
    2. If you don’t want to opt in, it’s just as easy to say No.

    #34.) Noom’s Pricing Page

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    Noom is a weight loss app with personalized coaching programs. They offer a discounted trial for users to get their feet wet - but they don’t just name a price, they get you to select one of four price options.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. They push you towards a $10 selection by calling it their “most popular choice” and highlighting it with an orange box.
    2. They claim your trial costs them $18 - a price anchor that makes all the options look like great deals.

    #35.) The Glute Guy’s Diet Chart

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    What Was Great About It:

    1. It breaks down a complicated question (What diet should I choose??) into a simple point (“just create a caloric deficit”).
    2. It’s easy to remember and share.
    3. It’s well-organized.

    #36.) Dom, Domino’s Chatbot

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    Domino’s Pizza is the leading pizza chain in North America, thanks in large part to its online tools. Their chatbot is their latest addition, and it’s one of the best bots out there.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s clear and efficient
    2. It remembers your recent orders
    3. It speeds up the ordering process (this order took less than 30 seconds)

    #37.) Swet Tailor’s Facebook Ad (with Callouts)

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    Instead of writing a complicated ad trying to describe something, Swet Tailor used a basic (but attractive) image with callouts highlighting the selling points of these pants.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s easy to read.
    2. The photo is simple and highlights the pants effectively.
    3. It’s funny.

    #38.) The 4 Hour Chef Sales Page

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    Tim Ferriss’ is known for taking complex ideas and breaking them down into simple, tactical steps - which is exactly how he designed the sales page for his book, The 4 Hour Chef.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. Highly relevant benefits laid out like pages of a book.
    2. Explainer images that do just enough to get you curious
    3. A 5-step “journey” that outlines a reasonable path to Ferriss’ big promises.

    #39.) Tuft and Needle Sales Page (12 Reasons Why…)

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    Here’s the full page: 12 Reasons Why You Haven't Bought From Us (Yet)

    What Was Great About It:

    1. The page deconstructs 12 common objections to buying from Tuft and Needle.
    2. It uses clever images to hammer home each point (like the fact that they have 5-10X more reviews than their competitors.)
    3. It layers in testimonials and buy buttons throughout the page, without taking away from the sales points.

    #40.) Apartment Follow Up Email

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    Most apartment management companies don’t follow up with potential tenants who come visit their buildings. Vista View is one of the few that does follow up. They send out this gentle reminder to apply (with a small discount on the application fee) a few days after a prospective tenant’s visit.

    What Was Great About It:

    1. It’s really simple and direct.
    2. It’s time-relevant.
    3. It’s got attractive pictures of the model apartments

    Business Slogans List from the Fortune 500

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    Company Slogan Length Slider:

     
    23 companies have 8 words in their slogan.
    • Bard (C.R.) Inc.: Advancing Lives and the Delivery of Health Care
    • Celgene Corp.: Committed to improving the lives of patients worldwide
    • Chevron Corp.: Finding newer, cleaner ways to power the world.
    • Discovery Communications-A: Let's All Discover, Why No Myth Is Safe
    • Ecolab Inc.: The Global Leader in Commercial and Sanitizing Solutions
    • Equity Residential: A place people are proud to call home
    • Essex Property Trust Inc: Every Story is Unique. Every Home is Different.
    • FMC Corporation: We put you first. And keep you ahead.
    • FMC Technologies Inc.: We keep you first. And keep you ahead.
    • General Growth Properties Inc.: Fully integrated, self managed and self administered REIT
    • Hanesbrands Inc: Look who we've got our Hanes on now
    • Harley-Davidson: Define your world in a whole new way.
    • HCA Holdings: It's you, it's me, it's all of us
    • Lockheed Martin Corp.: We Never Forget Who We Are Working For
    • Mead Johnson: Makers of the fluoride-vitamin supplements doctors prescribe most.
    • Westrock Co: A world class packaging team, built for you
    • Medtronic plc: Alleviating Pain • Restoring Health • Extending Life
    • The Mosaic Company: Helping the World Grow the Food it Needs
    • PPL Corp.: We'll Be There When The Light Goes On
    • Transocean: Because 70% of Earth is covered by water
    • United Rentals, Inc.: You're building the future. We're here to help.™
    • Universal Health Services, Inc.: The Health Care you need. Close to Home.
    • Western Union Co: The fastest way to send money – worldwide

         

     

    Slogans and Word Count of every company in the S&P 500:

    We painstakingly scoured the internet to find all 500 of the slogans. 25% were easy to find. 60% took some website digging and Google searching. 15% involved having to go through company financial statements. For the first time on the internet, here is every company slogan from the Fortune 500 Index:

    COMPANY SLOGAN WORDS
    3M Company Science. Applied to life. 4
    Abbott Laboratories Life. To the fullest. 4
    AbbVie People. Passion. Possibilities. 3
    Accenture plc High performance. Delivered. 3
    Activision Blizzard We make Great Games 4
    Adobe Systems Inc A new experience in user experience. 6
    ADT Corp Always There. 2
    Advance Auto Parts We're Ready in Advance. 4
    AES Corp The Power of being Global 5
    Aetna Inc We want you to know. 5
    AFLAC Inc Ask about it at work. 5
    Affiliated Managers Group Inc A global asset under management 5
    Agilent Technologies Inc The world’s premier measurement company. 5
    AGL Resources Inc. Providing Tomorrow's Energy. 3
    Air Products & Chemicals Inc We are Air Products 4
    Airgas Inc You'll find it with us. 5
    Akamai Technologies Inc In a faster forward world, innovation doesn't wait for technology 10
    Alcoa Inc Inventing the future since 1888 5
    Allergan plc Our pursuit, Life’s potential 4
    Alexion Pharmaceuticals Transforming patients' lives through innovation. 5
    Allegion Pioneering safety around the world. 5
    Alliance Data Systems All for Good. Good for All. 6
    Allstate Corp You're in good hands. 4
    Alphabet Inc Class A Don't Be Evil. 3
    Alphabet Inc Class C Don't Be Evil. 3
    Altria Group Inc We're A Company Moving Forward 5
    Amazon.com Inc Work Hard. Have Fun. Make History. 6
    Ameren Corp Focused Energy. For Life 4
    American Airlines Group Going for great. 3
    American Electric Power AEP, America's Energy Partner… 4
    American Express Co Don't Leave Home Without It 5
    American International Group, Inc. We know money. 3
    American Tower Corp A Where you want to be. 5
    American Water Works Company Inc The Authoritative Resource on Safe Water 6
    Ameriprise Financial Be Brilliant 2
    AmerisourceBergen Corp Because It's All Right Here. 5
    Ametek A Leading Global Manufacturer of Electronic Instruments and Electromechanical Devices 10
    Amgen Inc To Serve Patients. 3
    Amphenol Corp A Connecting tomorrow. 2
    Anadarko Petroleum Corp Bringing Excellence to the Surface. 5
    Analog Devices, Inc. World leader in high performance signalprocessing. 7
    Aon plc Insure your vision. 3
    Apache Corporation Energy to Grow 3
    Apartment Investment & Mgmt America Comes Home to Aimco 5
    Apple Inc. Think Different. 2
    Applied Materials Inc Apply it. 2
    Archer-Daniels-Midland Co Resourceful by nature 3
    Assurant Inc Assurant. On your terms. 4
    AT&T Inc Your world. Delivered. 3
    Autodesk Inc Design your world. 3
    Automatic Data Processing The Business behind business. 4
    AutoNation Inc Driven to be the best 5
    AutoZone Inc Get in the Zone 4
    Avago Technologies Your Imagination, Our innovation 4
    AvalonBay Communities, Inc. Appreciating value 2
    Avery Dennison Corp Inspired Brands, Intelligent World 4
    Baker Hughes Inc Enabling safe, affordable energy, improving people's lives 7
    Ball Corp Products that reflect an innovation mindset. 6
    Bank of America Corp Think what we can do for you 7
    The Bank of New York Mellon Corp. The Investments Company for the World 6
    Bard (C.R.) Inc. Advancing Lives and the Delivery of Health Care 8
    Baxalta Your Life, Our Inspiration 4
    Baxter International Inc. Making a meaningful difference in patients’ lives 7
    BB&T Corporation More than writing checks or making deposits… 7
    Becton Dickinson Helping all people live healthy lives 6
    Bed Bath & Beyond Everything to Entertain 3
    Berkshire Hathaway The Customer Is Always Right! 5
    Best Buy Co. Inc. Expert Service. Unbeatable Price. 4
    BIOGEN IDEC Inc. Transforming discovery into care. 4
    BlackRock Opportunity favors the prepared mind 5
    Block H&R You got people. 3
    Boeing Company Forever New Frontiers 3
    BorgWarner Feel good about driving 4
    Boston Properties Experienced leadership. 2
    Boston Scientific Delivering what's next. 3
    Bristol-Myers Squibb extending and enhancing human life 5
    Brown-Forman Corporation We enrich the experience of life. 6
    C. H. Robinson Worldwide Get You There Faster. 4
    CA, Inc. Agility made possible 3
    Cablevision Systems Corp. Reach Out and Touch Someone. 5
    Cabot Oil & Gas Clean Energy, Stronger Communities 4
    Cameron International Corp. Raising Performance. Together. 3
    Campbell Soup It's Amazing What Soup Can Do! 6
    Capital One Financial What's in your wallet? 4
    Cardinal Health Inc. Essential to care 3
    Henry Schein We will help you get there 6
    Carmax Inc The Way Car Buying Should Be 6
    Carnival Corp. Fun For All. All For Fun 6
    Caterpillar Inc. Earthmoving solutions for today's challenges. 5
    CBRE Group Local Real Estate. Worldwide 4
    CBS Corp. Only CBS 2
    Celgene Corp. Committed to improving the lives of patients worldwide 8
    Centene Corporation Better health outcomes at lower costs 6
    CenterPoint Energy Always there. 2
    CenturyLink Inc Stronger Connected 2
    Cerner Anticipate Innovate Accelerate 3
    CF Industries Holdings Inc Where chemistry grows 3
    Charles Schwab Corporation Helping investors help themselves 4
    Chesapeake Energy Natural Gas Wins the Day 5
    Chevron Corp. Finding newer, cleaner ways to power the world. 8
    Chipotle Mexican Grill Food with integrity 3
    Chubb Limited Chubb. Insured. 2
    Church & Dwight The Standard of Purity 4
    CIGNA Corp. A Business of Caring 4
    Cimarex Energy Stronger for Good Time and Bad 6
    Cincinnati Financial Everything Insurance Should Be 4
    Cintas Corporation Ready for the Workday 4
    Cisco Systems Welcome To The Human Network 5
    Citigroup Inc. Your Citi never sleeps" and "Where money lives 8
    Citrix Systems Simplicity is power 3
    The Clorox Company We make everyday life better, every day 7
    CME Group Inc. How The World Advances 4
    CMS Energy Count on Us. 3
    Coach Inc. Give her Coach 3
    The Coca Cola Company Things go better with Coke. 5
    Coca-Cola Enterprises Things go better with Coke. 5
    Cognizant Technology Solutions Keep Challenging 2
    Colgate-Palmolive "World of Care" 3
    Columbia Pipeline Group Inc Significant Scale, Unparalleled Footprint 4
    Comcast A Corp Ready to work. 3
    Comerica Inc. Committed to Business 3
    ConAgra Foods Inc. ConAgra. The right kind of food company 7
    Concho Resources Great Place To Work 4
    ConocoPhillips Energy for tomorrow. 3
    Consolidated Edison Energy, efficiency, expertise 3
    Constellation Brands Tastes for life 3
    Corning Inc. Discovering Beyond Imagination 3
    Costco Co. Simplifying home and life 4
    Crown Castle International Corp. Providing Wireless Infrastructure in Prime Locations 6
    CSRA Inc. Enduring Values. Inspired Performance. 4
    CSX Corp. How tomorrow moves. 3
    Cummins Inc. Making people’s lives better by unleashing the power of Cummins. 10
    CVS Caremark Corp. Health is everything 3
    D. R. Horton America's Builder 2
    Danaher Corp. Invent. 1
    Darden Restaurants To nourish and delight everyone we serve 7
    DaVita Inc. Bringing quality to life 4
    Deere & Co. Nothing runs like a Deere. 5
    Delphi Automotive Partner of Choice. 3
    Delta Air Lines Keep Climbing. 2
    Dentsply Sirona For better dentistry. 3
    Devon Energy Corp. Commitment runs deep. 3
    Diamond Offshore Drilling Hooked On Safety 3
    Discover Financial Services There’s always something more to Discover 6
    Discovery Communications-A Let's All Discover, Why No Myth Is Safe 8
    Discovery Communications-C Let's All Discover, Why No Myth Is Safe 8
    Dollar General Save Time, Save Money, Everyday. 5
    Dollar Tree Everything’s $1 2
    Dominion Resources What we do everyday Powers you everyday 7
    Dover Corp. Taste the difference 3
    Dow Chemical Living. Improved Daily. 3
    Dr Pepper Snapple Group We do things with flavor 5
    DTE Energy Co. For all the energy you'll ever need. 7
    Du Pont (E.I.) The Miracles of Science 4
    Duke Energy Powering and empowering our communities 5
    Dun & Bradstreet committed to your success. 4
    E*Trade Get high rates without the risks. 6
    Eastman Chemical Where Chemistry and Innovation come together. 6
    Eaton Corporation Powering Business Worldwide 3
    eBay Inc. "Buy it, sell it, love it" 6
    Ecolab Inc. The Global Leader in Commercial and Sanitizing Solutions 8
    Edison Int'l Leading the way in electricity. 5
    Edwards Lifesciences Global Leader in the Science of Heart Valves and Hemodynamic Monitoring 11
    Electronic Arts If it's in the game. It's in the game. 9
    EMC Corp. Where information lives. 3
    Emerson Electric Company Consider it solved. 3
    Endo International Serving for the health of the people 7
    Entergy Corp. The Power of People. 4
    EOG Resources When you think energy, think EOG 6
    EQT Corporation Where energy means innovation 4
    Equifax Inc. Inform. Enrich. Empower. 3
    Equinix Where Opportunity Connects 3
    Equity Residential A place people are proud to call home 8
    Essex Property Trust Inc Every Story is Unique. Every Home is Different. 8
    Estee Lauder Cos. Bringing the best to everyone we touch. 7
    Eversource Energy Take only pictures, leave only footprints 6
    Exelon Corp. Sustainable Advantage 2
    Expedia Inc. Where you book matters 4
    Expeditors Int'l You'd be surprised how far we'll go for you. 9
    Express Scripts Serving the prescription needs of more than 50 million Americans. 10
    Extra Space Storage Real storage expert 3
    Exxon Mobil Corp. Taking on the world's toughest energy challenges. 7
    F5 Networks IT agility. Your way. 4
    Facebook Be Connected. Be Discovered. Be on Facebook. 7
    Fastenal Co Growth through customer service 4
    Federal Realty Investment Trust We make home possible 4
    FedEx Corporation Relax, it’s FedEx; The world on time 7
    Fidelity National Information Services 160 years of Experience 4
    Fifth Third Bancorp The things we do for dreams. 6
    First Solar Inc Lowering The Cost of Solar Electricity 6
    FirstEnergy Corp Our energy is working for you. 6
    Fiserv Inc Source. Capture. Optimization. 3
    FLIR Systems The world's sixth sense. 4
    Flowserve Corporation Experience in motion. 3
    Fluor Corp. How the world is built. 5
    FMC Corporation We put you first. And keep you ahead. 8
    FMC Technologies Inc. We keep you first. And keep you ahead. 8
    Ford Motor Built for the road ahead. 5
    Franklin Resources Gain from our perspective 4
    Freeport-McMoran Cp & Gld Connecting the Future 3
    Frontier Communications "Welcome to the New Frontier." 5
    GameStop Corp. Power to the Players 4
    Gap (The) "For every generation there's a Gap." 6
    Garmin Ltd. We'll Take You There 4
    General Dynamics Strength on your side 4
    General Electric We bring good things to life. 6
    General Growth Properties Inc. Fully integrated, self managed and self administered REIT 8
    General Mills Nourishing Lives. 2
    General Motors People in motion. 3
    Genuine Parts Get the good stuff. 4
    Gilead Sciences Advancing therapeutics. Improving lives. 4
    Goldman Sachs Group Our client's intrests always come first. 6
    Goodyear Tire & Rubber More Driven 2
    Grainger (W.W.) Inc. For the ones who get it done. 7
    Halliburton Co. Unleash the energy 3
    Hanesbrands Inc Look who we've got our Hanes on now 8
    Harley-Davidson Define your world in a whole new way. 8
    Harman Int'l Industries Expect Brilliance 2
    Harris Corporation Assured communications. Anywhere. Anytime 4
    Hartford Financial Svc.Gp. Always Thinking Ahead. 3
    Hasbro Inc. Boy Oh Boy! It's A Hasbro Toy! 7
    HCA Holdings It's you, it's me, it's all of us 8
    HCP Inc. Strategy. Execution. Results. 3
    Helmerich & Payne Integrity. Respect.Teamwork. Creativity. 3
    Hess Corporation Energy on the move 4
    Hewlett Packard Enterprise Accelerating Next 2
    Hologic The Science of Sure 4
    Home Depot More Saving. More Doing. 4
    Honeywell Int'l Inc. If we say it, we'll do it 7
    Hormel Foods Corp. Life Better Served 3
    Host Hotels & Resorts We bring the city to life 6
    HP Inc. Keep reinventing. 2
    Humana Inc. Guidance when you need it most. 6
    Huntington Bancshares A bank invested in people. 5
    Illinois Tool Works When customers depend on us... We're there. 7
    Illumina Inc New thinking. 2
    Ingersoll-Rand PLC Inspiring progress 2
    Intel Corp. Experience What's Inside. 3
    Intercontinental Exchange Trade the world. 3
    International Bus. Machines Let's build a smarter planet 5
    International Paper We Will Not Fail Our Customers!! 6
    Interpublic Group A global leader in modern marketing solutions 7
    Intl Flavors & Fragrances Engaging The Senses. 3
    Intuit Inc. Small Business, rejoice 3
    Intuitive Surgical Inc. Improving patient outcomes 3
    Invesco Ltd. Explore intentional investing with Invesco 5
    Iron Mountain Incorporated The Leader in Records & Information Management 7
    Jacobs Engineering Group People are our greatest asset 5
    J. B. Hunt Transport Services The Transportation Logistics Company 4
    Johnson & Johnson Your Druggist is More Than a Merchant 7
    Johnson Controls Ingenuity Welcome. 2
    JPMorgan Chase & Co. The right relationship is everything 5
    Juniper Networks The New Network Is Here 5
    Kansas City Southern The shortest route from Kansas City to salt water. 9
    Kellogg Co. See You at Breakfast 4
    KeyCorp Achieve anything. 2
    Kimberly-Clark It feels good to feel. 5
    Kimco Realty Integrity, Creativity, Stability. 3
    Kinder Morgan A different kind of energy company 6
    KLA-Tencor Corp. Accelerating Yield 2
    Kohl's Corp. "Expect Great Things" 3
    Kraft Heinz Co A little taste of heaven. 5
    Kroger Co. Right Store, Right Price 4
    L Brands Inc. Straight from the heartland 4
    L-3 Communications Holdings From Vision To Reality 4
    Laboratory Corp. of America Holding Innovation. Quality. Convenience. 3
    Lam Research Changing the value equation 4
    Legg Mason Global Asset Management 3
    Leggett & Platt Enhancing people's lives for over 130 years. 7
    Lennar Corp. Everything's Included. 2
    Level 3 Communications Building a Better Future 4
    Leucadia National Corp. Clients First-Always 2
    Lilly (Eli) & Co. Innovation is personal 3
    Lincoln National Hello Future 2
    Linear Technology Corp. Enabling an Intelligent Planet 4
    Lockheed Martin Corp. We Never Forget Who We Are Working For 8
    Loews Corp. EXPERIENCED, FORWARD, THINKING 3
    Lowe's Cos. Love Where You Live 4
    LyondellBasell Fuelling the power to within 5
    M&T Bank Corp. Understanding what's important 3
    Macerich We create shopping experiences. 4
    Macy's Inc. Way to shop! 3
    Mallinckrodt Plc Our source. Your supply. 4
    Marathon Oil Corp. Going further. Doing more. 4
    Marathon Petroleum Going further. Doing more. 4
    Marriott Int'l. Live Like a Local 4
    Marsh & McLennan Get there faster 3
    Martin Marietta Materials It's not just what we make. It's what we make possible. 11
    Masco Corp. Building Supplies 2
    Mastercard Inc. Heart of Commerce 3
    Mattel Inc. The World's Mattel 3
    McCormick & Co. McCormick Brings Passion to Flavor™ 5
    McDonald's Corp. I'm Lovin' It 3
    McGraw Hill Financial Open markets. Open minds. 4
    McKesson Corp. Empowering Healthcare. 2
    Mead Johnson Makers of the fluoride-vitamin supplements doctors prescribe most. 8
    Westrock Co A world class packaging team, built for you 8
    Medtronic plc Alleviating Pain • Restoring Health • Extending Life 8
    Merck & Co. Committed to making a difference. 5
    MetLife Inc. It's at times like this that Metlife sets itself apart. 10
    Michael Kors Holdings A chic, luxurious, sexy fragrance for women. 7
    Microchip Technology anything that revolves, anything that moves 6
    Micron Technology Performance. Power. Reliability 3
    Microsoft Corp. Your Potential. Our Passion. 4
    Mohawk Industries It's more than a floor. 5
    Molson Coors Brewing Company The Banquet Beer. 3
    Mondelez International Make today delicious 3
    Monsanto Co. Growth for a Better World. 5
    Monster Beverage Fuel Your Fire 3
    Moody's Corp Small Business, Credit Index 4
    Morgan Stanley World Wise. 2
    The Mosaic Company Helping the World Grow the Food it Needs 8
    Motorola Solutions Inc. Helping customers be their best in the moments that matter 10
    Murphy Oil Exploration Driven. Delivery focused 4
    Mylan N.V. Seeing is believing 3
    NASDAQ OMX Group Trade up. 2
    National Oilwell Varco Inc. One Company Unlimited Solutions 4
    Navient Solutions for your success 4
    NetApp “Go further faster” 3
    Netflix Inc. It just might bring everyone together 6
    Newell Rubbermaid Co. "Brands That Matter" 3
    Newfield Exploration Co Balance of Exploration and Acquisitions 5
    Newmont Mining Corp. (Hldg. Co.) The Gold Company. 3
    News Corp. Class A Fair & Balanced. 3
    News Corp. Class B Fair & Balanced. 3
    NextEra Energy We Heard You 3
    Nielsen Holdings What People Watch, Listen To and Buy 7
    Nike Just Do It 3
    NiSource Inc. Premier Safety, Reliability and Service. 5
    Noble Energy Inc Energizing the World, Bettering People's Lives 6
    Nordstrom Reinvent Yourself 2
    Norfolk Southern Corp. The Thoroughbred 2
    Northern Trust Corp. You know your destination. You need a wise, caring advisor alongside you. 12
    Northrop Grumman Corp. Defining the future. 3
    NRG Energy We generate power. 3
    Nucor Corp. It's Our Nature 3
    Nvidia Corporation The Way It's Meant to be Played 7
    O'Reilly Automotive Professional Part People 3
    Occidental Petroleum Develop energy resources safely, profitably and responsibly. 7
    Omnicom Group The only we can.The media agencies. 6
    ONEOK The ONE in energy 4
    Oracle Corp. Oracle is THE information company 5
    Owens-Illinois Inc Packaging Solutions everywhere, everyday 4
    PACCAR Inc. The World's Best 3
    Parker-Hannifin Engineering YOUR success 3
    Patterson Companies Building Connections For Healthier Communities 5
    Paychex Inc. Payroll. HR. Retirement. Insurance 4
    PayPal The safer way to pay online 6
    Pentair Ltd. Pentair water. 2
    People's United Financial Everything Starts With You 4
    PepsiCo Inc. Pepsi. It's the cola. 4
    PerkinElmer For the Better 3
    Perrigo Quality Affordable Healthcare Products 4
    Pfizer Inc. Pfizer Quality. 2
    PG&E Corp. Climate Smart 2
    Philip Morris International Looks To The Future 4
    Phillips 66 Proud To Be Here 4
    Pinnacle West Capital The choice for digital video. 5
    Pioneer Natural Resources Creativity Beyond Imagination 3
    Pitney-Bowes Powering the transactions that drive commerce. 6
    PNC Financial Services Leading the Way. 3
    Polo Ralph Lauren Corp. World of Ralph Lauren 4
    PPG Industries We protect and beautify the world 6
    PPL Corp. We'll Be There When The Light Goes On 8
    Praxair Inc. MAKING OUR PLANET MORE PRODUCTIVE 5
    Citizens Financial Group Good Banking Is Good Citizenship 5
    Priceline.com Inc Name your price 3
    Principal Financial Group We'll Give You an Edge. 5
    Procter & Gamble Touching lives, improving life 4
    Progressive Corp. It's about you, and it's about time. 7
    Prologis The strategic partner for Global trade 6
    Prudential Financial Bring Your Challenges 3
    Public Serv. Enterprise Inc. We make things work for you 6
    Public Storage Real storage expert. 3
    Pulte Homes Inc. It’s our philosophy. It’s the way we do business 9
    PVH Corp. The Way Forward: Evolve Everyday 5
    Qorvo "All Around You" 3
    Quanta Services Inc. Leadership in Performance and Safety 5
    QUALCOMM Inc. Enabling the Wireless Industry 4
    Quest Diagnostics The patient comes first 4
    Range Resources Corp. Drilling is just the beginning. 5
    Raytheon Co. Customer Success is our mission 5
    Realty Income Corporation The Monthly Dividend Company 4
    Red Hat Inc. We're stronger together 3
    Regeneron Science to medicine. 3
    Regions Financial Corp. You can expect more stability. 5
    Republic Services Inc Think Green 2
    Reynolds American Inc. Make it easy. 3
    Robert Half International Innovation and Excellence in consulting and staffing 7
    Rockwell Automation Inc. Listen. Think. Solve. 3
    Rockwell Collins Building trust everyday 3
    Roper Industries Simple Ideas. Powerful Results. 4
    Ross Stores Dress for Less. 3
    Royal Caribbean Cruises Ltd Get Out There 3
    Ryder System We promise to deliver. 4
    Salesforce.com Success on Demand 3
    SanDisk Corporation “NO action is too fast!” 5
    SCANA Corp Power for Living 3
    Schlumberger Ltd. Excellence in Execution 3
    Scripps Networks Interactive Inc. Stay Connected. 2
    Seagate Technology “We turn on ideas” 4
    Sealed Air Corp.(New) Our Products protect your Products 5
    Sempra Energy For every day life 4
    Sherwin-Williams Ask Sherwin-Williams 2
    Signet Jewelers Every kiss begins with Kay 5
    Simon Property Group Inc Self administered and self managed real estate investment trust 9
    Skyworks Solutions Breakthrough Simplicity 2
    SL Green Realty Demanding Quality. Delivering Value. 4
    Smucker (J.M.) With a name like Smucker's, it has to be good 10
    Snap-On Inc. Being a Pro Matters 4
    Southern Co. Smart Energy. Smart Grid. Smart Choices. 6
    Southwest Airlines Stop Searching. Start Traveling 4
    Southwestern Energy We are Energy 3
    Spectra Energy Corp. Energy for life 3
    St Jude Medical More Control. Less Risk 4
    Stanley Black & Decker Performance in Action 3
    Staples Inc. Make More Happen 3
    Starbucks Corp. Romancing the bean 3
    Starwood Hotels & Resorts Who's taking care of you 5
    State Street Corp. Passionate about our client's success. 5
    Stericycle Inc Protecting People. Reducing Risk. 4
    Stryker Corp. We make a difference 4
    SunTrust Banks Live Solid. Bank Solid. SunTrust. 5
    Symantec Corp. Confidence in a connected world. 5
    Synchrony Financial Engage With Us 3
    Sysco Corp. Good things come from Sysco 5
    T. Rowe Price Group Invest With Confidence 3
    Target Corp. Expect More. Pay Less. 4
    TE Connectivity Ltd. Every Connection Counts 3
    TECO Energy More reliability to you 4
    Tegna It's all within reach. 4
    Tenet Healthcare Corp. Passion, Commitment and Leadership in health care. 7
    Teradata Corp. Raising Intelligence 2
    Tesoro Petroleum Co. Fueling the Future 3
    Texas Instruments Technology for Innovators 3
    Textron Inc. Reaching new heights. 3
    The Hershey Company The Sweetest Taste on Earth 5
    The Travelers Companies Inc. Insurance for your auto, home and business 7
    Thermo Fisher Scientific The world leader in serving science 6
    Tiffany & Co. True love grows 3
    Time Warner Inc. The Power of You 4
    Time Warner Cable Inc. Enjoy Better 2
    TJX Companies Inc. Get the max for the minimum. 6
    Torchmark Corp. For "middle income" Americans 4
    Total System Services People-Centered Payments® 2
    Tractor Supply Company For Life Out Here 4
    Transocean Because 70% of Earth is covered by water 8
    TripAdvisor Plan and book your perfect trip 6
    Twenty-First Century Fox Class A HOME ENTERTAINMENT 2
    Twenty-First Century Fox Class B HOME ENTERTAINMENT 2
    Tyson Foods Powered by Tyson. 3
    Tyco International A vital part of your world 6
    UDR Inc Opening Doors To The Future 5
    U.S. Bancorp All of US serving you. 5
    Under Armour Protect This House 3
    Union Pacific Building America. 2
    United Continental Holdings Let's fly together 3
    United Health Group Inc. Helping People Live Healthier Lives. 5
    United Parcel Service We run the tightest ship in the shipping business. 9
    United Rentals, Inc. You're building the future. We're here to help.™ 8
    United Technologies You can see everything from here 6
    Universal Health Services, Inc. The Health Care you need. Close to Home. 8
    Unum Group Better Benefits at Work. 4
    Urban Outfitters Pay money to look like homeless 6
    V.F. Corp. We Fit Your Life 4
    Valero Energy Investing in Excellence. 3
    Varian Medical Systems A partner for life 4
    Ventas Inc Reliable Capital, Delivering value 4
    Verisign Inc. Powered by Verisign 3
    Verisk Analytics Serve. Add Value. Innovate 4
    Verizon Communications Rule the Air 3
    Vertex Pharmaceuticals Inc The Science of Possibility 4
    Viacom Inc. I want My MTV 4
    Visa Inc. Go with Visa 3
    Vornado Realty Trust Fully-integrated real estate investment trust 5
    Vulcan Materials Think Safety 2
    Wal-Mart Stores Save Money. Live Better. 4
    Walgreens Boots Alliance The Pharmacy America trusts. 4
    The Walt Disney Company I'm going to Disney World! 5
    Waste Management Inc. Think green 2
    Waters Corporation The science of what’s possible 5
    Anthem Inc. Together, we are transforming health care with trusted and caring solutions 11
    Wells Fargo Together we'll go far. 4
    Welltower Inc. Humane Capital Help Desk 4
    Western Digital Designed to protect your data. 5
    Western Union Co The fastest way to send money – worldwide 8
    Weyerhaeuser Corp. Growing a truly great company. 5
    Whirlpool Corp. Work Globally, Act Locally 4
    Whole Foods Market Whole Foods, Whole People, Whole Planet. 6
    Williams Cos. We make energy happen. 4
    Willis Towers Watson Family of Companies 3
    Wisconsin Energy Corporation Energy you can depend on 5
    Wyndham Worldwide Be well. 2
    Wynn Resorts Ltd Wynn Las Vegas 3
    Xcel Energy Inc Responsible by Nature 3
    Xerox Corp. Work can work better 4
    Xilinx Inc All Programmable 2
    XL Capital Make Your World Go 4
    Xylem Inc. Let's Solve Water 3
    Yahoo Inc. Do you Yahoo? 3
    Yum! Brands Inc Alone we're delicious...together we're Yum! 5
    Zimmer Biomet Holdings Personal fit. Renewed life 4
    Zions Bancorp A collection of Great banks 5
    Zoetis For Animals, For Health. For You 6

     

     

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    Copy Work: Get Better At Copywriting By Handwriting Famous Pieces Of Work!

    What is Copy Work?

    "Copy Work" is when you hand copy famous ads in order to "learn" how that person wrote it.For example, the first copywriter I ever learned about was Gary Halbert. He had a very specific style (that while semi-scammy) was extremely engaging to read.I would hand-write out famous ads of his, like this Coat of Arms sales letter that made him a millionaire at age 32:

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    By simply handwriting out the exact ad he made, I was able to "get in his head" and learn indirectly from Gary Halbert on my own time. I started noticing small details like:

    • How he indents his paragraphs.
    • How he uses extremely simple words.
    • How he asks for the sale "without" really asking.
    • How he uses punctuation.
    • How he starts his letters with an address and phone number.
    • How he finishes his sales letters with a P.S.
    • How long it takes to simply write out one letter.
    • ....and much much more....
       

    Copy Work Exercises You Can Do:
    Want to learn to write like a famous copywriter? We've included 30+ ads you can copy by hand in this post:

     

    #1.) The man in the Hathaway shirt

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    Why this is great: Easy to read layout. Talks about the style, and the details of the fabric. Has good CTA at the end.

    #2.) Hathaway’s Aertex Club - a damnably smart leisure shirt

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    Why this is great: Easy to read, familiar layout, familiar character (the Hathaway shirt man). It also pulls the reader in with “987,693 tiny windows”.

    #3.) “At 60 miles an hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock”

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    Why this is great: Clever headline matched with an authority-building subheadline. The body copy lays out 13 clear reasons why it’s a great car.

    #4.) Lemon

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    Why this is great: Great layout and image. The headline plays on a negative word, which grabs your attention. The body copy extends the “lemon” idea by showing you how VW actually does not let lemons leave their factories.

    #5.) New Bodies for Old!

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    Why this is great: “Proof” photo paired with eye contact and finger pointing. The subheadlines do a great job building desire.

    #6.) Honestly now, did you spend your youth dreaming about someday owning a Nissan or a Mitsubishi?

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    Why this is great: Clever headline plays on the thought in most of our heads. Body copy connects the dream with reality because now it’s “very affordable for you to drive one”.

    #7.) Tred 2 makes the difference

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    Why this is great: Eye-catching before-and-after image. The body copy outlines a great offer: instead of buying new shoes, send yours in and get them fixed for just $13.95.

    #8.) They’re not cheap.

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    Why this is great: Great image and eye-catching color. The formatting is really easy to read from top to bottom.
     

    #9.) There isn’t much room on a sledge. Wally Herbert’s Rolex had to earn its place.

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    Why this is great: It makes the watch part of the adventure story while highlighting quality and playing to manliness.

    #10.) What could have started in the park just ended with that little itch.

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    Why this is great: It sets up a potentially romantic story…gone wrong. Great storytelling that positions the shampoo as the magic bullet.

    #11.) Beautiful Bouncin’ And Behavin’ Hair!

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    Why this is great: The images show the “bouncing and behaving” in action - it’s great proof! 

    #12.) See how Ray-Ban G-15 Sun Glasses open your eyes to safer driving!

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    Why this is great: It shows a familiar before-and-after. Many of us have dealt with glaring sun while we’re driving. The body copy twists the knife on the left and plays up the benefits and features on the right.

    #13.) The World’s Only Sun Glasses that Flex to Fit Your Face!

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    Why this is great: The images show off the “flex” in several ways, on several people. 

    #14.) The Burfron: Burberry Weatherproof for Naval Officers

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    Why this is great: It sets up the coat as military-grade quality that solves a specific “fatal” problem - water seeping in. 

    #15.) The New Balance 420 Was Designed To Protect Runners 6 Days Out Of 7

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    Why this is great: The headline makes you wonder…why only 6 out of 7 days? The body copy explains the technical reason behind the headline, softly sells another shoe, and includes a great diagram “proving” why you should care about arch support.

    #16.) Stop Bad Breath With Colgate While You Fight Tooth Decay All Day!

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    Why this is great: Great layout and colors that make the toothpaste and headline stand out. The headline pairs two benefits (fight bad breath and tooth decay) and positions Colgate as the best in the industry.

    #17.) Delta is an airline run by professionals

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    Why this is great: This is a great trust builder. It shows the mechanic at work and lists all his qualifications.

    #18.) TWA’s widebody 1011. It’s built for comfort.

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    Why this is great: The headline starts with one broad claim (it’s built for comfort) and then the body copy backs it up with several specific examples of comfort and luxury.

    #19.) Why Copy On A Floppy?

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    Why this is great: The ad sets up the status quo (using floppy disks) vs a new alternative (a bigger/better hard drive), and lists all the reasons why the NCR PC6 is a better choice.

    #20.) The guy on the left doesn’t stand a chance.

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    Why this is great: The headline pulls your eye back to the image because it’s not immediately obvious that there is a difference. Then, the copy explains that the guy on the left is carrying a normal briefcase with a bunch of papers…and the guy on the right has an entire computer built into his briefcase. 

    #21.) Officers and Enlisted Men Prefer Parker Safety-Sealed Fountain Pens

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    Why this is great: The ad is built around a couple of attractive features/benefits - ink can’t escape and bleed onto your clothes, and the pens can be refilled with the press of a button. Plus, it’s the official pen of the Army and Navy. 

    #22.) General Electric’s new 6-speaker coffee table…for people who like stereo

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    Why this is great: It shows off the table in both “modes”. The layout and images are great, and the body copy lists a lot of additional attractive features.

    #23.) For Those On The Go…It’s Helmet-Hat By Buco

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    Why this is great: The images range from technical drawings to product shots to action shots - it’s a great way to present the helmet. The text is simple and direct.

    #24.) There’s Something About A Greyhound That Makes It The Friendly Way To Travel

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    Why this is great: Great artwork, interesting layout, and specific benefits about the driver, service, scenery, and savings. 

    #25.) “I want the best workout my body ever had…I want Jazzercise!”

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    Why this is great: The imagery is impossible to ignore and the text highlights 5 great bullets that are easy to understand and make signing up an easy decision. 

    #26.) The Fuji Sports 10.

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    Why this is great: Great layout that makes the bike look like it’s physically sitting on the text. 

    #27.) “Shave Yourself”

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    Why this is great: It sets up the (at the time) new idea of shaving at home as a better idea that’s clean, affordable, and a growing trend. 

    #28.) Wrangler thinks Americans spend too much for clothes.

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    Why this is great: It lays out a philosophy that you deserve quality for your money. This copy was popular and used with several different sets of images. 

    #29.) Jox Introduces a Running Sock With Arch Support Built-In

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    Why this is great: Great layout that draws the eye to the new product feature - the built-in arch support. The subheadline builds authority and the body copy adds extra benefits. 

    #30.) Special Christmas Offers to Readers of The Ladies’ Home Journal

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    Why this is great: This 120+ year old ad should be tough to read, but the layout, text sizing, and images do a great job drawing your eye down the page. All the formatting tricks used here still work today.

    #31.) They Laughed When I Sat Down At the Piano

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    Why this is great: The headline is a fantastic storytelling hook, and the rest of the ad goes on to tell the story. It makes you want to relive the situation yourself - winning over a crowd and impressing everyone.

    I hope you take some time and do some Copy Work with these ads!
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    Powerwashing Flyers that took business from zero to $13,202 per month

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    I’m posting this guest post because I LOVE IT when people get their hands dirty in order to make money.

    I think there’s more lessons to be learned by getting out there and doing small jobs than any amount of reading blog posts. 

    Using some basic copywriting principles in his marketing, Peter went from making $0 with his powerwashing service...to doing $13,202 per month!

    So here’s Peter showing the exact business flyers he used to “automate his marketing” instead of going door-to-door.  

    Watch for the subtle psychological things happening with each flyer:

     

    ————PETER STARTS TALKING NOW————
    ————PETER STARTS TALKING NOW————
    ————PETER STARTS TALKING NOW————
     

    There was no way in hell I was ever doing that again…..

    I had just gotten back from going door-to-door trying to sell power washing after hearing from my Dad that it was “a good business to get your feet wet.”

    After 2 or 3 anxiety-filled hours of stuttering my way through a pitiful little sales pitch and getting zero results, I gave up.

    I don’t know if you’ve ever gone door-to-door before, but for me, especially at the time, it honestly felt like I could have been offering FREE money and people still would have said no.

    I felt like a pest!

    If you’re at all introverted (like me), or you’re not the smoothest on your feet, then you gotta knock on like 100 doors before you find someone….and it’s absolute agony the whole time.

    So, unless you’re trying to get over your fear of rejection, don’t try powerwashing this way.  

    I’m going to show you exactly how I went from $0 to over $10,000 a month without ever knocking on a door or making a cold call.

    The First (lame) Attempt at Marketing:

    After deciding I was never going to go door-to-door ever again, I designed a beautiful flyer, that looked something like this…

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    It was so pretty and nice….

    ….but it absolutely BOMBED!

    I got my friend to deliver a couple hundred of them and I didn’t get a single phone call.

    I was shocked… (what an idiot I was).

    Now if you’ve been following Neville for any period of time, you’re probably a lot smarter than I was at the time.  

    You know why this flyer is sooo bad and you probably know how to write at least basic KOPY… like telling people WHAT’S IN IT FOR THEM and offering some bloody benefits…

    But I was stressing because I had no idea what benefits I could show.  

    I started thinking what it was going to look like I was going to have to get a job unless I figured out this whole marketing thing QUICK!

    I had a little bit of money left after my backpacking trip in South East Asia got cut short due to a motorcycle accident… but not much…

    So, I went to my Dad, hat-in-hand, with my “beautiful”, terrible little flyer and asked him what I was doing wrong…

    He laughed, handed me an old Dan Kennedy book on direct response marketing and a few chapters later, I threw away my first “beautiful” attempt.

    I started again from scratch.  This time I didn’t care if the flyer was “beautiful” or “professional looking.”  I realized that didn’t matter.    

    The Second Attempt At Marketing

    Here’s what I came up with my second time around:

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    I printed out 100 of these new flyers on my little inkjet and got my friend to deliver them to a local neighborhood.

    100 flyers printed.  Total Cost = $20 

    But I was still scared, because after my first failure, I remember thinking, “there’s no way I’m going to get calls…”

    But the phone rang…..it rang 4 times!!!

    I didn’t even know what to say when I answered… I hadn’t really thought that part through!

    But it didn’t really matter… my new customers did most of the talking (you’ll find people LOVE to tell you all about their situation).

    Within a day, I got 4 new customers and which ended up turning into around $600 dollars in business. 

    It blew my mind!

    I thought, “Hey there’s a lot more neighborhoods…..and if I just send out more of these flyers….I should get a bunch more customers… this is so much better than knocking on doors!”

    How to Turn a $69 Driveway Job Into $200+ Worth of Work:

    When I met with the first customer, I didn’t suddenly learn how to become a sales star or even a smooth talker, or even know what the concept of an “upsell” was.  But I found out quickly.

    Usually when people call you to powerwash their driveway, they like to walk around with you tell you their life story and while they’re at it, also show you what they want cleaned…

    And usually, there’s a bunch of other dirty stuff right beside the thing they want cleaned.

    So there was one thing I would say that worked really well with making more money. It honestly just seemed natural to ask it.

    I would just ask:

    “Would you like _____ cleaned too?”

    People go… “Yea, geez… hmm yea. I didn’t think about that but now that you mention it can you clean that to?”

    And you get 80%+ of people saying yes.

    I feel like an idiot when I don’t ask… which is a little too often.

    Hiring a Roller Blader and Going From $600 to $6,292:

    So I quickly learned that I just needed to send out more flyers to get more customers.  

    I bought a bigger printer and I hired my friend to go out on his rollerblades and deliver 1,600 flyers each week at $0.18 cents per flyer. (At the time I didn’t know about Every Door Direct Mail in the U.S. or Unadressed Admail in Canada… which is what I do now and actually cheaper and more reliable than my friend).

    And like clockwork, I would get at least 15 jobs… enough to keep me fully booked for the whole week.

    It would cost me on average $25 to get a customer… and I’d bring in on average $200 from each customer right away… that’s 8x my money, which is pretty awesome math.

    That’s like having a machine that I throw $100 into, and it throws $800 right back at me.  

    And as long as these flyers kept being profitable… I kept sending them out. 

    Mailing 16x to One Neighborhood and Still Getting New Customers:

    It was amazing how I could tweak the flyer a tiny bit and send it to the SAME neighborhoods every other week and I would still get more and more people calling in!

    One neighborhood in particular, I sent flyers to them 16x one summer and it was still profitable in bringing new people in:

    • People would have family coming over to visit and needed to get the home nice and clean…
    • Or they were getting their home ready to sell…
    • Or they’d see I cleaned their neighbors driveway and realize they wanted theirs done too…

    People’s circumstances change and you’ve got to be there when they do.

    By hyper focusing on neighbourhoods, you can quickly become the dominate player and can quickly end up cleaning 20% or more of the homes in an area.

    Besides mailing a bunch I found these 3 things worked really well and would take one customer and turn it into 2 or 3 more…

    Getting Neighbors as Customers Without Door Knocking:

    For a service business like this… you make a lot more money by not wasting time and gas traveling long distances between jobs.

    A lot of these powerwashing guys are driving all over the place because they’re not doing targeted marketing…

    I’ve been able to stay busy in a small town with 5,000 homes and not have to venture out to any of the surrounding areas by doing three things:

    The first thing I did this was mailing a letter like this before I was going to do a job…

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    The second thing was by having a sign and wearing high visible reflective gear:

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    I was such an idiot in the beginning and went without a sign for a long time!  As a result people didn’t realize I was for hire.  

    The first day I got a sign, I had a lady come up and end up hiring me for $2,000 worth of work… that alone turned out to be a pretty good ROI on my $40 signs!


    The third thing is to send a letter like this to the neighbors afterwards…

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    The Free Driveway Experiment:

    Would you spend $90 and work for free for a week… if you knew it would make you $21,000+?

    I hope you would.

    Because that’s how I got 45 out of 90 homes in a neighborhood to become customers, which has so far resulted in more than $21,000 in business.

    Let me explain…

    After cleaning a few driveways I started to notice something very interesting:

    As soon as I cleaned someone’s driveway and they were able to see what a difference it made and how awesome it was to save 5 hours of back breaking, clothes soaking, mud splashing labour… it was like a switch had been flipped…

    It was like suddenly they were the kind of people who clean their home and pay someone to do it for them.

    They’d inevitably ask me if I could clean a bunch of other stuff for them and it would result in each customer being worth anywhere from $200 to as much as $2,000.

    And it really got me thinking…

    If I can just get someone started and committed to taking that little baby step, then the rest becomes really easy…

    So, I picked a gated community of 90 homes, where I had already done some work and I sent out this letter for a free driveway cleaning:

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    I ended up getting 42 of them to become customers and it has resulted in over $21,000 in business!

    From $6,202 to $13,000

    The key to scaling up from the $6,202 was to make sure I kept the “customer getting system” up and continuously working.

    If you rest on your laurels and get lazy (which happened to me more than once), the business starts to dry up.  

    At first I was going door-to-door myself trying to get business.  This didn’t work at all….not to mention it was extremely stress-inducing for me.  

    However when I started using copywriting principles to automate my marketing through flyers, it effectively got me from $50 an hour to being able to make $150/hr or more.

    Sincerely,

    Peter Van Straaten

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    Hey, it’s Neville again: 

    Isn’t it pretty sweet how he found out that:

    • Knocking On Doors = Slow and ineffective.
    • Sending Out Flyers = Easy and profitable (with the right flyer).

    Essentially the flyers were automating the job Peter was manually doing.

    With concepts learned in The Copywriting Course it’s easy to see why this “pretty” flyer failed:

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    The flyers that did really well look ugly…..but they seem personal, genuine, and offer a real benefit to the reader!

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    Some valuable lessons here 🙂

    If you’d like to know more about the psychology behind flyers like these and how to write your own copy that sells, checkout The Copywriting Course.

    Sincerely,

    Neville Medhora


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    Copywriting Tips (103 Quick-Hit Copywriting Tips for Motivation and Ideas)

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    Here's 103 copywriting tips. Scroll through and one may "jump out at you" and trigger a great idea!

    #1.) Work backwards - What’s the goal?

    Before you write about something, you’ve got to know exactly what your page / piece is supposed to accomplish. Whether it’s email replies, product sales, or something else, your job as a copywriter is to support that goal.

    #2.) What is your success metric?

    Once you know what you’re trying to achieve, you’ve got to be able to measure it. Whether it’s hard stats (like conversion rates) or softer measures like comments and happy email responses….track what you’re doing.

    #3.) Focus on ONE metric?

    Pretty much everything is trackable these days - but that doesn’t mean you should focus on everything. Choose one metric to focus on and you’ll quickly know whether your copy is hitting home or not.

    #4.) Who’s your target audience?

    Avatars are great reference tools, but nothing beats the real thing! Get up, get out, and interview the people who make up your audience. You’ll learn more from a single “real” conversation than any avatar-based thinking session.

    #5.) Send your list surveys?

    Want to dig into your audience’s psychology? Live interviews are great for 1-on-1 sessions, but there’s a better way to mine a big group of people (like an email list)...online surveys! Surveys can wind up generating ridiculous ROI - it’s like having a roadmap for your copy and content strategies

    #6.) What would ___ do?

    Looking for inspiration with a tough problem? Well, how would an industry thought leader approach it?

    #7.) What would Warren Buffet do?

    Financial issue? Trying to break down “value”? How would Warren Buffet approach it?

    #8.) What would David Ogilvy do?

    If you’re staring at a blank page and don’t know how to start….think about a few of the great copywriters. Pretend you’re that person and step into their shoes (or keyboard?). Ogilvy’s ads, Kern’s sales letters, Walker’s VSL’s should blast you right through any writer’s block.

    #9.) Freewrite

    Speaking of writer’s block, have you tried freewriting? Sit down, set a timer for 10 minutes, and start writing. It’ll probably be a terrible draft, but perfection isn’t the point. It’ll get you out of your head and kickstart the writing process.

    #10.) Brainstorm with structure

    Brainstorming is usually a pretty chaotic activity - sort of like freewriting. If you start the brainstorming session with a little bit of structure, you’ll channel that energy into something that’s actually productive and on point. Outlines, boxes, and other visual tools can help organize the ideas as they come tumbling out of your brain.

    #11.) Create a swipe file for inspiration

    See a great example of copy / design / UX? Take a screenshot and file that baby away! You’ll thank yourself later. Instead of trying to reinvent the wheel with every project, you can cherry pick elements you love from real world examples and adapt them to your work.

    #12.) Create a regular reading schedule

    As a copywriter, you’ve got to stay in touch with your industry. If you set aside 20-60 minutes a day to read relevant news, blogs, and newsletters, you’ll be in much better shape than someone trying to “catch up” once in a while.

    #13.) Use Google Alerts to stay on top of trends

    Want to automate all that staying in touch? Use Google Alerts or other notification services. You can filter for exactly what’s relevant and valuable to you.

    #14.) Create a database of articles for research

    Think of this like a swipe file for deeper citation. Where a swipe file is fantastic for inspiration and planning, a well-organized database of articles will allow you to quickly and efficiently cite your research. This’ll cut down on research and writing time.

    #15.) Read what your audience reads

    Taking on a project outside of your regular niche / focus? The best way to get a feel for what an audience is thinking and feeling is to read the top publications in their field. Where do they hang out online? Which YouTubers do they follow? Start consuming the same content and you’ll be able to think more effectively.

    #16.) Read what your audience reads

    Taking on a project outside of your regular niche / focus? The best way to get a feel for what an audience is thinking and feeling is to read the top publications in their field. Where do they hang out online? Which YouTubers do they follow? Start consuming the same content and you’ll be able to think more effectively.

    #17.) Use Google suggestions

    Your early research probably involves a whole bunch of Googling. You can expand and adapt your searches by scrolling down to the bottom of the results page and - voila! Google suggests a list of relevant searches you might want to check out.

    #18.) Accountability groups are great for ideas

    Staying on top of your industry’s content is great - but it’s a one-way street. It’s also valuable to bounce ideas around with other copywriters or industry pros. Join (or create) an accountability group - it’s like organized, scheduled brainstorming!

    #19.) Keep a pocket notebook (or use a note app)

    Inspiration strikes at the weirdest times. If you don’t actively capture a great idea, though, it may be lost forever. That’s why it’s a great idea to keep a pocket notebook handy - or just use a note-taking app on your phone (I love Google Keep).

    #20.) Save your brainstorming notes to a dedicated folder (or notebook)

    Most people treat a brainstorming session like a one-off activity. You come up with 20 ideas, choose one to write about, and then toss the other 19 aside. That’s a waste! If you organize your brainstorming notes in one place (like a dedicated Google Drive folder), you’ll have a great database of ideas to work from.

    #21.) Draw it out

    Ever start building out a piece and then realize you’ve drifted away from your original argument or purpose? To keep yourself in check, try drawing out what you’re trying to say. It’ll simplify and organize your thinking, making your writing easier and more compelling.

    #22.) Think about your piece….then get out! Take a walk!

    Creativity is a funny thing - sometimes trying just makes it harder to come up with the right words. If you stop trying and start doing other things, it’ll give your subconscious a chance to play around with your problem. A walk can be a great chance to stretch your legs - and your mind!

    #23.) Talk out ideas with your editor

    Some writers only let editors in during the final stages of a piece. This is a huge mistake! A brief chat with your editor will put you both on the same page, set clear expectations, and probably generate some great ideas to write about.

    #24.) What’s the value you’re adding with your piece?

    Why are you writing this piece? If you’re just repeating the same thing as a dozen major blogs or sites, are you really helping anyone? If you want your writing to stand out and connect with people, you’ve got to know exactly what you’re adding the wider conversation.

    #25.) Where does your piece fit with what’s already out there?

    Sometimes finding a unique angle is easier if you know what’s already out there. Position your piece to complement or oppose existing content and you’ll immediately join a conversation, instead of having to start one from scratch.

    #26.) Use prompts

    Stuck? Use short prompts to nudge your brain into action. Questions are great ways to focus your mind, get specific, and start producing. Who’s this piece for? Why should they care? What if ____?

    #27.) How can I make this SUPER SIMPLE instead of complicated?

    K.I.S.S.; simple and direct always trumps complicated and ambiguous. You can do this by simplifying your language, cutting down on extra words, and generally getting to your point more efficiently.

    #28.) What if I remove 2 steps from this process?

    Adding steps to a process is easy. Removing them, though, is a lot tougher. Keep stripping down the number of jumps you’re making until you’re left with a bare-bones outline. That’s the core concept to build your piece around.

    #29.) What if I only have 2 options?

    Analysis paralysis is a real thing. Give your readers too many options and it’s like giving them nothing. If you cut things down to binary choices, though, a reader can clearly and confidently follow your thinking.

    #30.) What’s the STUPIDEST way to solve this problem?

    The best answer is also usually the simplest. If you’re trying to get a reader from A to B….take them on a direct journey, not a winding route.

    #31.) Write like you speak

    Want to connect with your readers? Write conversationally, break some grammar rules, and you’ll immediately create more engaging copy.

     

     

    Writing Tips:

    #32.) Try reading short pieces out loud

    What does your writing “sound” like in your readers’ heads? Is it too choppy? Does it flow smoothly? If you’re trying to be funny….is it working? Try reading short pieces out loud. Some style issues are easier heard than seen.

    #33.) Try voice-to-text dictation

    Have you ever tried dictating your draft? Voice-to-text apps let you “write” from anywhere - even while you’re out for a walk. They’re especially great for early drafts when you just need to get ideas out of your head.

    #34.) Active voice vs passive voice

    Want to make your writing punchy and engaging? Here’s a general rule of thumb - use active voice. It’s closer to the way we speak, making it more appropriate for conversational, “natural” writing.

    #35.) Don’t justify yourself needlessly

    If you’re trying to make a point….just make it! Some writers write like they’re prepping a debate team, trying to preempt opposing arguments and using super technical jargon. There is no debate team. There’s just your reader, who wants you to get to the point clearly and directly.

    #36.) Use a pomodoro timer for productivity

    Creative work like writing is best done in a series of short sprints rather than one long marathon. Pomodoro timers are built for that - 25 minute work sessions spaced out by short (5 minute) and long (10 minute) breaks. You’ll stay fresh - and so will your writing.

    #37.) Use earplugs for focus

    Alright, I stole this one directly for Neville. Pop in a pair of earplugs and you’ll be surprised how effectively the total silence will hone your focus.

    #38.) Try writing from different locations

    If you’re feeling stuck, try writing from a different place in your house. Even better, get out of the house entirely and try writing from a cafe or a coworking space. Different atmospheres will trigger your creativity - and sometimes having strangers who can see what you’re doing will keep you from browsing the web instead of working.

    #39.) Don’t be afraid to change your routines

    Schedules and consistency are great. But routines can also get stale. If you’re feeling stuck, change things up and try a different writing time. Just make it a planned thing, not a random action.

    #40.) Use a writers group for accountability check-ins

    The quickest way to develop as a writer is to surround yourself with other writers who are able and willing to give you constructive feedback. But instead of a one-off conversation or a sporadic relationship, try joining (or creating) a writers group. A weekly conversation with a structured agenda will create big results.

    #41.) Create “writing time” with other writers

    Working around other people working can be motivating and incredibly productive. Try rounding up your writers group just to write. No chit chat, just work!

    #42.) Share your work with other writers

    Some people are shy about sharing their work - don’t be one of them! The more eyes - especially professional eyes - you can get on your writing, the better. Ask for constructive feedback and take it on board.

    #43.) Break down tough pieces into drafts

    Complex topics and big projects can feel overwhelming. The best way to get past that feeling is to break everything down into smaller, more achievable drafts. Give yourself deadlines for those small goals and you’ll find yourself blasting through obstacles with ease.

    #44.) Clarity > Cleverness

    Ever read something that’s meant to be funny, but just falls flat? It’s awkward and very distracting. If you start by building a clean, clear core of an idea, you can always add cute little add ons later - but you can’t do the reverse.

    #45.) Quality > Quantity

    Every SEO professional out there knows that search engines reward quality, not quantity. Google number one priority is to find content that effectively answers user queries. Are you doing that for your audience?

    #46.) Benefits, not features!

    Features are easy to list and boring to read. Why should I care about this brand’s products? Benefits, on the other hand, are much more engaging because they explain what a user will get out of a product.

    #47.) Use your editor

    Editors are great at every stage of the writing process. If you’re stuck with an idea or you want to talk out an argument, get in touch with your editor. You’ll probably get more out of a focused 10 minute talk with your editor than you would in a couple hours banging your head against the wall, alone.

    #48.) Create a consistent writing schedule

    Writing and thinking about writing is sort of like a muscle. The more you practice, the easier the process becomes. Set aside a dedicated time each day to write and work out that muscle.

    #49.) Write for scannability

    We’re surrounded by distractions. If you want to get your point across to your reader, you’ve got to make your writing interesting and easy to read. Use short paragraphs and clearly organized headers. If you want to draw attention to specific points, use highlights and bold font.

    #50.) Follow your outline’s structure, but don’t go more than 2 bullets deep

    Nested bullet points are great for outlining. You can organize ideas within ideas within ideas - but that structure doesn’t transfer well to long form content. The more sub-steps you have, the more difficult the reading experience. Keep things simple and limit your headers to H2’s and H3’s at most.

    #51.) Get away from the computer (again) -- after it’s written, let it sit before you edit

    Breaks are great for productivity at every stage of the writing process. Once you’re done with a draft, get away from it for a day or two. When you come back to it, you’ll be able to read it with a fresh perspective.

    #52.) Keep layout + format in mind while writing

    Copy isn’t just a bunch of words on a page, especially when it comes to short attention spans online. You’ve got to understand white space, readability, and basic UX design to really maximize a reader’s experience.

    #53.) Use templates for reliable structure / layout

    Presentation can be just as important as writing style. When you’re studying great copy (or looking through your swipe file), try and absorb how the text is presented.

    #54.) Use wireframes for layouts (pro move)

    If you really want to level up, try drawing out your favorite pages as wireframe diagrams. This’ll help you learn how to structure your copy, how to stack your arguments, and write powerfully.

    #55.) Use images to improve text

    Images are a great way to attract attention, break up long boring blocks of text, and keep your copy fresh and engaging. You can use images to entertain, educate, or just hammer home a point you want to make. Here's why images are better than text.

    #56.) Use images to replace text

    Can you use an image instead of text here? Instead of just complementing your words, images can also just replace them. This’ll help strip down your text, making stronger and more efficient messaging.

    #57.) Use visual / emotive language

    Get in your readers’ heads with stories, especially ones in which they can picture themselves. Don’t just talk about things - make your readers imagine what it’d feel like to use your products.

    #58.) Match your audience’s language + self-identifiers

    All the style and structure in the world goes out the window if you use the wrong words. You’ve got to speak your readers’ language, use their terms, and show that you’re in on their inside jokes. Use their tone of voice.

    #59.) Try out apps like Grammarly and Hemmingway

    Writing apps go way beyond just spell checking. Grammarly and Hemmingway are two popular tools that can help analyze your style and suggest specific nuances to improve your writing.

    #60.) Make your writing engaging...literally.

    Transform your readers into action-takers. Use quizzes, calculators, and other engagement tools to encourage your readers to apply the concepts they’re reading about.

    #61.) Update old content

    Keep your content up to date by regularly overhauling old articles. It’s a relatively easy step that will keep you relevant and Google happy.

    #62.) Upgrade existing content with….content upgrades

    You can also upgrade old articles with add ons like content upgrades. For example, create a download that complements a specific article and add it to the piece.

    #63.) Write with a different voice

    Writers can get stuck in their ways. If you want to stay flexible, get out of your comfort zone. Try writing as someone totally different - can you do it effectively? This’ll come in handy anytime you’re writing to a new audience and need to adapt.

    #64.) Write an opposing opinion

    If you think style’s tough, try writing from an opposing point of view. You might hate it, but it’ll force you to focus on structure, message, and all the fundamental elements of a strong point of view.

    #65.) What if I just remove 50% of the words?

    Anyone can write for length - but nobody really cares about how many words you can stuff into an article. Be ruthless when you’re editing and remove as much non-essential text as possible. It’ll strengthen your message and create a stronger, more memorable connection with readers.

     

     

    Become a better writer:

    #66.) Use a swipe file...but don’t just copy, analyze

    We mentioned swipe files earlier in this list. If you want to get to the next level, set aside time to really study the material you’ve saved. Why do you like it? What caught your eye? Don’t just use your swipe file for inspiration - use it for learning. Here's a free & public swipe file.

    #67.) Set big goals…

    What are you trying to achieve as a writer? What are a few of the crazy big goals you want to reach? If you’re struggling through a tough project or questioning your path, review your goals and re-energize yourself.

    #68.) ...and break them down into small wins

    Huge goals are great for motivation….but they can be meaningless in the short term. If you have a big goal you want to achieve in 10 years, work backwards and set milestone targets. If you goal is to write for a major publication, what are the stepping stone projects that will get you there?

    #69.) Create a monthly check in on your small wins

    Monthly reviews are a great way to gauge your development. Are you on track with your small goals? Do you need to adapt your strategy or reach out to bigger clients? Reviews keep you focused and productive while still allowing you to pursue the big dream.

    #70.) Keep a database of your weak points...and fix them.

    What are your weak points? Identify them, then attack them one by one. Get specific and measure yourself.

    #71.) Regularly analyze why you like certain writers

    Who are the writers that get the most emotion out of you? The type that have you laughing out loud or welling up with tears. Break down how they do it. Can you apply similar techniques in your copy? Do "Copy Work" for inspiration from other writers.

    #72.) How can I make this one page instead of more

    If you had to, could you distill your argument into a single page? This is a great exercise to cut down on needless fluff and focus on your core message.

    #73.) Reach out to other writers

    The more you connect with other writers, the more you’ll learn about writing, editing, project management, and career growth. Writing can feel like a lonely profession, but you should make it a priority to surround yourself with other professional writers.

    #74.) Edit other writers’ pieces

    Editing is a great chance to learn. You’ll get to see other writers’ style, approach, and thought process. If you edit others’ writing regularly, you’ll quickly see positive effects on your own writing.

    #75.) Am I spending way too damn long on this?

    Every stage of the writing process can throw up a unique set of problems. Whatever it is you’re facing, though, you can’t let it eat up your precious time. Get it done, get it out, and then worry about improving it later.

    “If you’re not embarrassed by your first version, you spent too long on it.” -Reid Hoffman

    #76.) Dig into your audience’s business

    Copywriters need to understand exactly how their clients’ businesses operate. The more you learn about your target audience’s industry, the more effectively you’ll write about the challenges your clients face.

    #77.) Review your past work for style and growth

    Regularly read your past work to get an idea of how you’ve developed. How would you improve an article from last year? How about homepage copy from a few years ago?

    #78.) Review your past work for readership stats

    Are you reaching the right people? Are you growing your audience? The only way to tell is to track and analyze your site’s analytics. What are your most popular articles? This should give you a barometer for your performance and also guide your content strategy.

    #79.) Ask for access to analytics

    If you’re working for a client, ask for access to their analytics. Copywriting is a results-based craft, and it’s important to get your hands on the data that measure those results.

    #80.) How did your project do? Ask for feedback

    Your job isn’t done when a final draft is handed in. Ask your client for feedback, testimonials, and even a case study when appropriate. This will give you a chance to make concrete improvements and connect more deeply with the client.

    #81.) Can you turn a project into more value?

    Treat every new project like a potential foot-in-the-door. Where else can you help the client? How can you connect your current project to one in the future?

    #82.) Become a full stack writer

    Copywriting is so much more than just text. Nowadays copywriters need to understand UX concepts, design, and SEO. The more complementary skills you can add to your arsenal, the more effective your writing will become. Become a full stack writer.

    #83.) Make 3 versions: Crappy, Good, Excellent

    Give yourself three drafts to produce great work. Make the first one crappy, the next one good, and the final one excellent. This’ll keep your writing efficient and clear, and you won’t get lost in a series of random drafts.

    #84.) Make 3 versions: Short, Medium, Long

    What’s the most effective way to make your point? What sort of format do your readers connect with the most? Playing around with length is a way to ask these questions while producing content.

    #85.) How can I make this more fun?

    Is your writing really that engaging? How can you spice things up and make the reader’s experience more fun? Play around with your style, break some grammar rules, use GIFs, and maybe even try swearing a little. Get loose and experiment!

    #86.) How can I make this more hilarious?

    Writing funny isn’t easy. If you can figure it out, though, you’ll create attention-grabbing content people will eat up. Study your favorite funny writers from other genres - what can you adapt and apply to your writing?

    #87.) Constraints Create Creativity

    Limits can be great for productivity and creativity. Instead of writing generalist blog posts whenever you feel like it, give yourself structure to think and create.

    #88.) Constrain the amount of TIME you have

    Imagine you only have one hour to write this piece. How will you get it done? How much quicker will you dive into your writing? What will it do for your focus?

    #89.) Constrain the amount of SPACE you have

    Imagine you only have one page to write on. What will you say? What can you drop?

    #90.) Constrain the amount of WORDS you have

    What would happen if you cut your word count in half? Could you still get your point across? Could you replace text with images where needed?

    #91.) Constrain the amount of SCREEN you have

    Imagine finding out your audience was reading your material almost exclusively from small mobile devices. How would that affect your layout and format? Would you structure your message any differently?

    #92.) Constrain the amount of READ TIME you have

    Imagine your reader only has 30 seconds to skim your content. What would you highlight? How would you direct attention to specific points?

     

     

    (extras -- freelancers and consultants):

    #93.) Niche down

    The more you can specialize by field or by service (or both), the quicker you’ll build authority and attract better clients.

    #94.) Productize your service(s)

    Let prospective clients know what you can do for them. By offering packages and productized services, you can simultaneously control what you offer and give your clients options to choose from.

    #95.) Showcase your work - write your own case studies

    Past projects are often your best selling points for future work. Follow up with clients after a project is done and ask for concrete feedback and change metrics. They’ll appreciate your concern, you’ll get powerful marketing material, and maybe even more work with the client. Make your own case study.

    #96.) Translate your work into measurable value for clients’ businesses

    Do you know how much you’re worth to a client? If you want to be paid $1,000, you’d better be able to prove that the client will make a return on their investment in you.

    #97.) Teardowns are great for content

    Want to build authority and demonstrate expertise? If you don’t have an impressive portfolio (yet), run through a mock project and write about it. Take screenshots and explain exactly how and why you’d change certain things. Practical teardowns are much more effective than writing about general theory.

    #98.) Plug into your clients’ community + use their language

    Are you hanging out where your customers hangout online? Do you understand industry jargon and common practices? A great way to sell clients, is to be able to understand their needs and talk like them.

    #99.) Translate everything into specific business benefits

    If you’re offering a service, how will it affect a client’s business? Sales? Leads? Better conversion rates? Whatever it is, get specific and give examples that clients can relate to and actually want.

    #100.) Create an outreach schedule

    How often are you pitching jobs or connecting with other writers? Outreach is the most important element of a new writer’s business. Prioritize it and create a schedule for your outbound marketing. You can even make a Command Center for this.

    #101.) Use a CRM to manage your contacts and leads

    If you reach out to a couple dozen people each week, how are you going to keep tabs on each conversation? CRMs are great because they help organize your contacts and track developments.

    #102.) Create a regular job listing search

    Trawling through job boards can be frustrating. Instead of randomly searching different boards, use a service like Feedbin to aggregate RSS feeds and create a single source of relevant listings.

    #103.) Become a great interviewer

    Great copywriters tend to be strong interviewers. In order to create compelling copy, you’ve got to understand your audience, their issues, and their deep dark feelings. The best way to uncover all that is through interviews.

     

    Hope you find these copywriting tips helpful!
    Sincerely,

    Copywriting Course, Neville Medhora, Dan McDermott

    How To Build A Weekly Newsletter

     

    🎤 Listen to this email here:

     

    Hi I'm Neville, I run a company called Copywriting Course, and every week I send out a weekly newsletter on Friday's called "The S.T.U.P.I.D. Email."

    It's an email with 5 sections and looks like this:

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    This email keeps our subscribers engaged, and we occasionally sell products through it. Here's some stats:

    ⇨ 50,000 people have opted in.
    ⇨ 28% to 32% open rates.
    ⇨ 600 to 3,000 clicks per email.
    ⇨ 30 min to 2 hours creation time per week.
    ⇨ 7am on Friday's send time.

    I'm going to show you how I make it every week using an email sending service called ConvertKit.

    Whether you're TheHustle, The Skimm, or AppSumo....this is how you will create and send a newsletter.
    Here's the whole process in a nutshell:

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    Step 1.) I Collect & Create Content

    If you want to send out a weekly newsletter full of tips and tricks and cool stuff for your audiences, you're going to constantly be on the lookout for stuff to send.

    I have tons of sources I compile this information from:
    ⇨ My personal Swipe File of ideas
    ⇨ While scrolling social media
    ⇨ Creating my own drawings or content
    ⇨ My personal photo roll on my phone
    ⇨ While watching YouTube
    ⇨ Browsing Instagram
    ⇨ Cool things I read in books
    Reddit, Digg, Twitter
    ⇨ My blog archives

    These are all sources I'll peruse on the regular, and if I spot something interesting I'll jot it down in Apple Notes or take a screenshot. 

    For example, here's a bunch of raw screenshots and ideas that I had collected in my phone and notes over the week: 

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    Out of all this raw information I'll pick & choose which to put into the newsletter in the next step...

     

    Step 2.) I compile the newsletter

    Since I send out my S.T.U.P.I.D. Email on Friday mornings, my job for Thursday is to fill out a template I have loaded up in ConvertKit that looks like this:

    Swipe: A "swipe file" from my archive.
    Thought: A fun thought or something I discovered.
    Uplifting: Something uplifting.
    Interesting: Something interesting I found.
    Drawing: A drawing from my archives.

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    Now all I have to do is sift through my notes, social media, and screenshots to fill in each section! 

    If I do a great job during the week searching & saving cool stuff, this process goes by very quickly. 

    If I have very little to put in the email, this can take hours.

     

    My newsletters are usually very image heavy, but thankfully ConvertKit has extremely easy image editing and markup. 
    Let's say I have an old ad like this I want to share with my newsletter audience:

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    ...I can quickly highlight specific parts of the ad right from the ConvertKit Editor, like drawing attention to a headline. Without ever leaving ConvertKit for a photo editing program I can do callouts like this:

    noodles-ad-convertkit-editor-callouts.jpg

    As a person who includes up to 20 images per email, I can’t tell you how much time this saves!

    In fact it makes my emails BETTER because I can spend more time marking up images for the audience, and less time boringly copy/pasting files back-n-forth from different photo editing programs.

     

    Step 3.) I schedule it for Friday

    I auto-schedule my Friday S.T.U.P.I.D. Email for around 7am. So when I finish the email on Thursday evening, I go into ConvertKit and schedule it for the next morning:

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    I hate waking up early....so while I'm fast asleep at 7am on Friday morning....

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    ….ConvertKit is diligently sending out my email to 50,000 people!

     

    Here’s the results from weekly emails:

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    Recipients: ~50,000
    Open Rate: Between 28% and 32% every week
    Clicks: .5% to 2% (sometimes not many links to click on)
    Unsubscribes: 60 to 95 per email

    A HUGE benefit of doing a weekly email is getting sponsorships and making sales of your own products. 

    I've accepted sponsorship money in exchange for a blurb about a company in the email, and also have sold my own products through there. 

     

    Growing the email list:

    So before you can send out your newsletter you have to have an audience.

    The way I've built The S.T.U.P.I.D. Email newsletter is by attaching a ConvertKit email signup at the bottom of my blog posts, like this:

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    When someone enters their email address it automatically signs them up for the weekly newsletter.


    I also have a page called CopywritingCourse.com/newsletter where people can signup for my full email list.
    That page looks like this:

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    It's just an embedded ConvertKit signup form, and it even has this cool GIF graphic on it 😂

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    Creating an email newsletter steps:

    Here's the quick breakdown of how a weekly newsletter is created every single week:

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    Create A Newsletter Q&A:

    Q: Patricia - @Shewrites
    Please include a sneak peek into the research process for newsletter + The content breakdown strategy

    A: Basically I try to post to Twitter throughout the week, and use Reddit, Digg, Twitter, SwipeFile.com, our members area and more as places to look for cool things. Also if I see a cool billboard out on the street I'll snap a pic, or get an interesting piece of mail.


    Q: Bastian W. Harbo - @autotrader87
    Say you have 10 ideas for your next weekly edition.

    How do you select which to include, and how, if ever, do you portion out the ones that didn't make this week, over the next editions.

    A: Knowing this is my job as a content curator. Sometimes I will drop 10 items into the newsletter, and just start scratching off items that are "Ok but not great."


    Q: Nick Moussoulis - @nikmoussou
    How do you hold yourself accountable every on doing it every week? That's my biggest struggle 🙂

    A: This is a huge problem! I mention to someone at my company to make sure I have the STUPID email ready by Thursday evening, and that helps keep me accountable. There's been more than a few times I'll get a Slack message at 10pm on Thursday saying "is it done?" and I'll realized I've totally forgot to write it!


    Q: Div Sharma - @itsdivsharma
    How do you grow your list when you’re just starting out? What’s the best way?

    A: This part will take some time and dedication:
    0-100 members: Post on your own social media to friends/fam, and also any groups you're part of.
    100 - 1,000 members: Consistently pushing our great emails and promoting snippets of content on social. Being part of groups.
    1,000 - 10,000 members: Posting on your own website. Have an email signup form.


    Q: Rohit Kumar - @rohitkumar_co
    Why choose a weekly newsletter and not bi-weekly or monthly?

    A: Weekly newsletters are the most popular and easy to understand "Oh every Friday I'll look for it!" However you must be able to fill a full newsletter every week. I chose weekly because in a week I generally find enough cool stuff on the internet or post enough on social media to fill an entire newsletter. Some weeks are harder than others for sure, but generally once a week I can find around 5 cool things to send out. So weekly is my email cadence!


    Q: Mauro Paravano - @maurorpv
    I wonder, have you done any research on paid/subscription based newsletters? Are they still a thing? I guess is kinda weird since it’s also hard to prevent someone from forwarding that content; anyway just figured to ask you.

    A: Yes! Stuff like Trends.co is a paid newsletter, but generally you must first have an audience to create a paid newsletter. SubStack is exactly this, and many of the people who start a newsletter quit after 3 months, realizing creating extremely good content consistently that people will pay for is difficult.


    Q: Matthew Q. Nguyen - @Mqnguyen004
    Do you recommend starting through things like MailChimp? Or would you suggest someone going all in and hopefully get enough to monetize a little?

    A: Any email service is fine to start off with, they all have their quirks, but by far the easiest to use with the fewest quirks is ConvertKit. I would start off small with a free trial on ConvertKit, then move up the pricing scale if your newsletter takes off.


    Q: Jesse Brede - @jessebrede
    What’s your preferred ESP and why? If you could go back and do it all over, what’s something you would change? Was there any inflection points? Is it week by week or do you do batches? How long does it generally take you?

    A: ConvertKit! I've been through every damn email service out there, and was on InfusionSoft for years, but have never been happier with one than ConvertKit. Sometimes things that should be simple on mail services like creating an autoresponder are unnecessarily hard...ConvertKit just makes it dead simple and that's what I like.


    Q: Shreya Sparkles - @shreyabadonia
    Would like to know how much time you spend on planning, writing and in drawing.

    A: I basically screw around reading the internet, posting on social media, and browsing my own interests all week, then spend between 30 minutes and 2 hours creating the STUPID email.


    Q: John Small Mountain - @johnsmallmtn
    How do I remove the feeling of feeling like I need a format to start?

    A: Take your last 10 social media posts, dump them into an email or blog posts, and see if you can find a certain trend or common thread through them. Mine interests happen to be old ads, marketing tactics, copy etc....so that became the format for my emails.


    Q: Topher Hammond - @topher_hammond
    What are some of the systems that you have in place now that have exponentially released the amount of time you need to invest in putting the newsletter together each week?

    A: Having a template and format help big time! Since I know the format is:
    Swipe
    Thought
    Uplifting
    Interesting
    Drawing
    ....I can work backwards throughout the week to look for content that fits that template.


    Q: Matt Boyce - @Boyceterous40
    Do you do any segmentation or personalization? Or just 1 big newsletter to everyone? Also, I would love your tech stack.

    A: 1 big newsletter. Unless you have 100,000+ people on your list you generally don't need to segment much (obviously some exceptions). But if you start segmenting, you are now managing multiple lists. A better method is to tag people as necessary, then if you need to target specific people, you can email by their tags, not a whole different list.

     

    Sincerely, 
    Neville Medhora

     

    P.S. What are the newsletters that you regularly read??
    Lemme know in the comments!

    The Giant List of Power & Trigger Words for Sales

    Wouldn't it be cool to have a giant list of trigger & power words to jog your brain when writing copy?

    Wait....someone already made one and it's posted right below here??  Cool!

    Just skim through this list when writing copy, it'll give you ideas....

    #1.) Make them want to belong

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    People like to feel they belong. Like they're part of an elite group. Like being in First Class. These are some power & trigger words to incite that feeling.

    Members only.

    VIP access required.

    Login required.

    For VIP membership level only.

    Ask for an invite.

    Platinum members only.

    Limited seats available.

    Limited number of First Class seats.

    Balcony for Platinum sponsors only.

    Artists Lounge for bands only.

    Membership now closed.

    Exclusive offers.

    Become an insider.

    Be the first to hear about it.

    Get it before everybody else.

    Only available to subscribers.

    VIP section only.

    Join The $100,000/year Club if you qualify.

    For CEO's only.

    This membership is invite only.

    #2.) Make it urgent

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    These are some power words for driving sales by making people feel a sense of urgency.

    17 hours left.

    17 hours left on this special deal.

    17 hours left on this one-time-only deal.

    17 hours before this deal expires.

    17 hours before this goes away forever.

    17 hours left before this deal goes to Deal Heaven forever.

    3 units left in stock.

    3 of these are left.  After that, they're gone forever.

    Only 3 spots are open.

    Only 3 spots are left.

    Only 3 seats are available for this one-time event.

    Only 3 tickets left, and a lot of interest in them.

    I hate to say this, but we're about 4 minutes from being sold out.

    First come, First serve.

    This is one a first-come-first-serve basis.

    Hurry up, it's almost over.

    If you want to start this month, you have to buy today.

    This won't happen again for another 6 months.

    Buy it now or forever hold your peace.

    Have fun paying full price after this deal is over.

    50% off for just today.

    50% off this holiday season only.

    50% while we're overstocked.

    50% off the full price for today only.

    $120 off the full price.

    Prices go up tomorrow.

    Due to demand, prices go up tomorrow.

    Don't wait till tomorrow, this deal will be gone.

    If you like paying more for the same item, then wait till tomorrow.

    This is a great deal.  Grab it now while it lasts.

    This promo is almost over.

    You won't see this price for another 12 months.

    It's going to be hard to beat this deal.

    Limited time only.

    5...4...3...2...1...this deal is almost over.

    A stupidly-low price for just a little while longer.

    This kind of deal only happens when we're over stocked.

    This doesn't happen often, so grab it now.

    For a short while you get the product, but also ALL these bonuses.

    Keep this private....but we're closing out the month and I need to meet a quota, so if you buy now I'll knock 30% off the cost.

    There are big shortages in the supply chain, so once this batch is sold out the price will increase.

    We had a great year, so we're giving everyone 20% off for our birthday.

    Here's a $25 coupon you can use for this month.

    #3.) Make it free

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    Making something free is the lowest-friction way to get someone to take an offer. Here's some "Free Phrases" to entice them.

    Totally free for you.

    100% free for you.

    100% free today.

    100% free for the first 12 months.

    $0 down.

    You pay $0 today.

    $0.00 is all it costs.

    Today only: $0.00.

    Best sale ever: $0.00.

    Zero.  Zilch.  Nada.

    The cost to you: Exactly zero dollars and zero cents.

    You pay Zilch.

    You pay NOTHING.

    This is our free gift to you.

    Don't worry about the price.....it's zero.

    The most affordable price ever: ZERO

    Low on money?  Good.  Because the price is zero.

    One cent?  That's too high.  Let's make it zero.

    Hahah....other people pay MONEY for this stuff.

    5 years ago I paid $3,000 for this....you're getting it free.

    $1,000?  $500?  $250?  $75?  $10?  How about $0?

    Pick your price: A.) $1,000   |   B.) $200  |  C.) $0.00

    You + Me = FREE.

    My favorite price in the world: Free.

    Give me $0 and I'll send you all my products.

    Give me $0 and I'll hook you up for a month.

    Give me $0 and I'll give you a free month of service.

    Zero is my favorite number.  That's also the cost.

    I know you'll like it so much, that I'll give it to you for $0 the first month.

    Move in now and pay $0 the first month.

    Walk out of the store paying $0.

    #4.) Give them different options to choose

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    People have different needs and different budgets. It can help to offer a few different options.

    1 for $20. 2 for $25

    Basic package: $30/month. Pro Package: $50/month. Advanced Package: $80/month.

    Buy now full price. ...or pay monthly for $25/month.

    $99/month for 12 months. Or pay in full now and get 20% off.

    The more you buy, the more you save! 1 for $20 2 for $35 3 for $45 4 for $40

    Get 1 coaching session for $600. Or buy 4 sessions for $1,600 and save $800.

    Buy 1 shirt for $15. Buy 2 shirts for $25 + a free pair of flip flops.

    Get 1 gig of storage for $5 Get 10 gigs of storage for $30 Get 100 gigs of storage for only $45

    The total is $140. Or signup for our rewards program and get 20% off right now.

    Small soup: $4 Large soup: $6

    Burger and fries: $4.50 Burger and fries AND drink: $4.99

    You can buy the basic package. Or get the basic package + weekly hangouts for only $50 more per month.

    Know what's better than getting 1 for $20? Getting 2 for just $25.

    Basic: 5 page website. Advanced: 15 page website + SEO Tools

    Professional: 30 page Website + SEO Tools + Content Creation

    Bronze Gold Platinum

    Level 1 Level 2 VIP Members

    Golden Members Platinum Members Private Coaching Members

    $35 for full carwash today .....or $25/month for unlimited car washes.

    Hourly Rate: $55/hour Full Package: $1,200 Premium Package: $3,999

    Starter Plan Advanced Plan Professional Plan

    #5.) Show what an amazing value it is

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    People understand by analogy. So compare how great a value something is compared to a familiar item.

    You're getting this entire bodybuilders meal plan for less than the price of a protein shake.

    This costs less than the price of a large pizza.

    This cruise vacation will cost you less per day than going to Disney Land.

    8 out of my last 10 clients have quit their jobs.....all because they signed up.

    The whole product costs less than a ticket and popcorn at the movies.

    Only $3.99 for an app that can teach your child a different language.

    Only $0.99 for an app that you will use every single day.

    It's only $1.95 per day.

    You probably spend more on Starbucks every month than this entire coffee maker costs.

    It's only $10 more than the competition, yet will last 5x longer.

    Buying from us is like buying from Nordstrom vs. Wal-Mart.

    Some people buy TV's with their tax return.  Some people buy investments in their future.

    Costs less per day than your daily coffee.

    Only $2.99/day to invest in your future.

    A college computer science class costs $6,000.  This course costs only $69 total.

    This entire course costs less than one college computer science book.

    Upgrading your website to Professional Level costs less than $0.25/day.

    It's weird how people will spend $60 on drinks at a bar, but won't buy a $39 book that can change their life.

    For the price of a dirty martini you can buy this book that'll change your life.

    You can spend the next 3 months reading random blog posts and watching

    YouTube videos, or you can spend $197 to have it professionally explained for you.

    $97/month gets you private access to me.  Normally it costs $597/hour to speak with me.

    Why spend $900 on a new TV, when you can spend $900 for a once-in-a-lifetime experience?

    I know your weekends are fun, but if you come to our seminar, you'll spend only $600 for the whole weekend, and learn a new skill you can use to advance your career.

    Pay just $100 more now to buy Nakamoto tires, and they'll each last you 10,000 miles longer.  That's like saving over $1,100!

    #6.) Get them to take action

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    When someone has decided to buy, you need to tell them specifically what actions to take.

    Press "Buy This" to buy the CopywritingCourse.

    Fill out this short form and I will contact you with pricing.

    PayPal $20 to NevMed@gmail.com to get started.

    Fill out your email address below.

    Enter your email address, and I will immediately send you the PDF.

    Enter your email address, and I will send your customized logins.

    Enclose a check for $49 and send it to 123 Fake Street.

    Fill out this survey and we will send you a gift card to your shipping address.

    Go to this URL on your computer and download the PDF.

    Go to this URL on your computer and look at my daily rates. If you're interested, buy a session.

    If you think my price is fair, and the timing is right for you to start learning

    Photoshop....then click "Buy Now" to start my online course.

    Go to Amazon and search "Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy" and purchase the book.

    Once you've downloaded the app from iTunes, connect your speaker via bluetooth and you're ready to jam!

    Enter your phone number and a sales rep will call you within 10 minutes.

    Submit your resume and LinkedIn profile to NevMed@gmail.com to apply for a job.

    Call 888-555-2222 for our customer service department.

    Tap the button on your screen to order.

    Go to the website --> Add to Cart --> Checkout.

    Enter a dollar bill and then push the drink you want.

    Call 111-222-3333 and ask for Laurie.....she'll give you the quote.

    Answer 4 questions on this form and we'll send you an insurance quote.

    Stop reading this email right now, and try playing this guitar lick on the E string: 3-5-3-8-3

    After you're done installing the program, press CTRL + ALT + DEL and restart your computer.

    Enter your website URL and email address, and I'll send your customized

    SEO report to your email.  It will take about 20 minutes to prepare.

    #7.) Tell them a personal story

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    People often learn through analogy. So tell them a story to educate them.

    "When I was in college and posting on a blog, I never in a million years thought I could make money from it...."

    "The best decision I ever made in my life was learning how to write copy...."

    "When I was fat I just always assumed I would be fat, because that was my entire identity.....then a friend dragged me to a yoga class and it all changed."

    "I'd probably still be working at McDonald's if I never sought out to find a mentor...."

    "The scariest thing I ever did (and keep in mind I've given birth to 6 kids) was quit my job of 15 years...."

    "Before taking that class I never in a million years thought I could start my own business.  I didn't even know anyone who'd ever started a business...."

    "I was lucky and started my first business in high school where I learned that you can CREATE money by giving people stuff they want and need."

    "It's weird how my journey to becoming a millionaire started.  It all began when I threw a penny down a magical wishing well...."

    "The first time I bought a car I didn't know what I was doing and got ripped off badly.  I regretted the purchase for years.  Then I discovered the art of negotiation.  I just walked out of the dealership paying 20% less than everyone else."

    "Before I learned how to negotiate I would accept any price someone told me.  That was until I did The Coffee Challenge. That showed me that ALL prices are negotiable."

    "I really hated accounting.  That's why I forced myself to take a class on it.  It's one of the best decisions I ever made.  I could notice holes in my revenue I never saw before."

    "I've been to defensive driving classes 4 times.  The first three were so incredibly mind-numbing.  I was happy to discover going to COMEDY Defensive Driving with Jim was 6 hours of fun!"

    "The first real business I started was just purely out of curiosity to see if I could build it.  I never actually expected it to make money, but it did!"

    "Taking a class on copywriting immediately improved my cold email skills.  I closed 3 new clients the next day as a result of cold emails (in the past I NEVER closed deals through cold emails)!"

    #8.) Give a Before/After case study or testimonial

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    Showing pictures or telling examples about the changes people made after your product can be very inspiring.

    "Casey was 245 pounds and depressed when he came to me.  After a year of training at my camp, he was down to 180 and full of confidence.

    "Before Matt's training, I was hitting about 3 out of 10 pitches.  After Matt's training, I was hitting 9 out of 10."

    "My car used to do 0-60 in 9 seconds....after I took it to Ronaldo's High Performance they had it doing 0-60 in 4 seconds."

    "My car used to get so hot in the summer the leather would burn my legs.  After going to Mother's Window Tint the car stays nice and cool."

    Mike's trading account balance before me: $15,000 Mike's trading account balance after me: $700,000

    Before my class: Robert was $3,000 in debt. After my class: Robert had $5,000 in savings.

    "I was always nervous and scared to talk with new people, but after Jordan's bootcamp I can easily make new friends at any event I go to."

    "In the past I would constantly yo-yo diet and gain the weight back.  It wasn't until I used MyBodyTutor that I could finally keep the weight off permanently."

    "Before this business mastery class I couldn't even use Excel.  It was embarrassing at work to take longer than everyone else to finish my assignments.  After the class I'm actually helping my boss with her Excel questions!"

    "It's amazing how much I've changed since joining Matt's Gym.  When friends who I haven't seen in six months see me, they can't believe I'm the same person.  They always knew me as a big guy, but now I'm a ripped guy!"

    "There used to be NO WAY I'd wake up in the morning before 8:30am.  After downloading the Wakeful app, it's actually a pleasure waking up!"

    "One of the craziest transformations I've ever seen was this guy named George who simply couldn't look people in the eye and talk to them.  After the bootcamp he was mingling, making friends, and being the life of the party with no problem."

    "The best part about the results I got was the change of my mindset about food. Before I used to view food as something to stuff in my mouth when bored.  Now I view it as fuel."

    Jeff was always fighting with his family members.  Yet after my class, his entire family suddenly stopped fighting with him.  What Jeff realized was the tools he learned in this seminar changed HIM, not his family.

    "Before everyone thought I dressed like a bum.  After a style consult with Jennifer I'm getting compliments everyday on my new outfits!"

    "Before I learned the art of copywriting I didn't research products before I built them.  After I started THINKING LIKE A COPYWRITER I began to realize I could sell a product before it's ever built, and test if it works."

    "The fact is I could have never gotten out of my student debt without Rick's help.  He got me on an affordable plan and got me debt free in 2 years."
    Before: 312 pounds After: 189 pounds

    "Before I was all saggy and wrinkly on my face.  After going to The Med Spa I look 15 years younger."

    "Before I was always chained to a desk.  I liked my job, but only got 14 days off a year.  After becoming a copywriter I started getting gigs that I could finish from anywhere in the world."

    #9.) Tell them a surprising fact

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    Tell them some things about the product that are really cool and unique.

    This iPhone case is made out of the same stuff as the windows on the space shuttle.

    This climbing rope is meant for one person, but can actually take 7,000 pounds of force before breaking.

    The Tesla Model S is actually the safest car that's EVER been tested by the Department of Transportation.

    The Tesla Model S is so strong, it actually BROKE THE MACHINE used to test lateral impact.

    This pen uses the same pressurized cartridges the astronauts on the International Space Station use.

    We've had 14 people become millionaires this year alone by using my system.

    These wet suits are made from synthetic shark skin so you can swim faster.

    This tape uses the same principle to stick to any surface as a gecko's feet does.

    This carbon fiber is 5 times stronger than steel, and 10 times lighter.

    This car has the highest power-to-weight ratio of any street-legal car.

    This Tesla electric car gets more torque off the starting line than a McLaren.

    This automated tractor can till 30 acres in just one hour....without a driver!

    This knife is so sharp it can actually cut through a penny.

    This knife is so sharp you can slice a tomato with one hand.

    This protein bar has more protein-per-ounce than any other bar on the market.

    This martini is sprinkled with actual 24K gold flakes.

    This diamond ring once was actually worn by Queen Victoria.

    This is the house they filmed the first John Connor scenes in Terminator 2.

    This kobe beef is made from cows who are fed well and massaged in sake everyday.

    Our cloud service is really scalable, in fact 80% of Fortune 500 companies use us.

    This iPhone case is so strong you can over your phone with a semi-truck and it won't break.

    #10.) Get them curious

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    Curiosity gets people to want to experience your product.

    See what it's like to be in a room where everyone makes more than $1,000,000/year.

    I have a gift I want to send you.....but I can't describe it here.

    Inside the members area you'll get 26 videos plus 3 amazing bonuses that get physically delivered to your door.

    Every order comes with a mystery bottle of wine.  Some prize bottles are worth $10, and some are work $800.

    You have to see through these polarized lenses to believe it.

    Until you hear what a Bose system sounds like in person....there's no way to describe it.

    Our nightclub has the most expensive sound system in history.  You must feel it to believe it.

    The Tesla Model S is so fast to accelerate, most people have never experienced that many G-forces on their body.

    These sheets are 1,800 thread count.  You've never felt anything so soft before.

    These Night & Day contacts are super-breathable, so your eyes don't even feel them.

    Our shirts are made of a special poly-blend we closely guard.  Most people can't believe how smooth they feel.

    Old Spice deodorant works so well.....just try it on before a workout and see if you can feel the difference.

    These advanced bearings make your skateboard ride so smooth, you have to try them to believe it.

    Until you pick up a Trek Speed Bike with one finger, you'll never understand just how light it is.

    It doesn't matter what super car you've been in.....our Tesla will launch you (silently) to 60 MPH faster than any of them.  You've never felt anything quite like it. Come test drive one to experience it.

    There's no way to describe what it feels like to wear this underwear.
    It's difficult to describe virtual reality headsets because it's unlike anything you've ever experienced.  Like you're ACTUALLY there.

    See the movie in IMAX quality, you can't understand how much richer the experience is until you've sat in that chair.

    We could describe how good this massage chair feels, but it's simply impossible till you've tried it.

    I could tell you our seminars "change people's lives", but you'll never experience it without being in this city, in this room, with these people.

    You've seen all my free content, now just imaging how good my paid content is.

    One of the things I'm proudest of is when people walk out of the room saying, "Oh my god....that was so much better than I ever possibly expected."

    Burning Man is one of those experiences where you can see pictures, watch movies, and read reviews....but you can never know what it's like till you go.

    Being in The Vortex in Sedona is a magical experience for some people. Come see if you feel it's energy.

    The new MacBook is so light that it kind of confuses your brain, because you've never picked up anything that size that weighs so little.
    Using the Retina display on a Mac makes it look like real life, not just a screen.

    On your first aircraft carrier takeoff you'll experience G forces like nothing else you can even compare to.

    #11.) Tell them alternate uses for the same product

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    A lot of times customers won't even know a product can do multiple things. So tell them:

    This blender acts as four devices: A blender, a chopper, a drink maker, a soup maker.

    This course is going to be your Mentor, your Spiritual Guide, and your Accountability Buddy.

    This Dyson fan acts as a work of art....and also a fan.

    This pocket knife has all the tools you'd expect, and even an emergency radio signal.

    This Mercedes is a great car.....but also a status symbol.

    This TV also connects directly to the internet so you can watch Hulu and Netflix.

    This Dyson vacuum also has a "wet jet" setting to steam your hardwood floors.

    My membership area has all my videos about how to become a consultant, and also comes a whole "Template Section" that you can copy/paste to your own clients.

    This book about coffee tables also TURNS INTO a coffee table.  (Seinfeld joke) 😉

    This simple notebook can act as your daily diary, your to-do list, or your trust book for taking class notes.

    This drawing app not only lets you draw, but also professionally edit large batches of photos.

    Our Google Docs product started as just a Word-like editor, but now has a suite of other products like spreadsheets, presentation, and forms.

     

     

    Sincerely,
    Neville Medhora CopywritingCourse.com

    Free Email Copywriting Course (Full Videos and Examples)

    #1.) Build A Weekly Email Newsletter

    One of the most commonly asked questions we get asked right now is about building out email newsletters. 

    In this training video I go over how you can build a weekly newsletter yourself, including how to:

    - Come up with a name for your newsletter.
    - How to find content for your newsletter.
    - How often to send your newsletter.
    - How to structure your newsletter.

    You can read more in depth about creating your own newsletter here.

    #2.) Live Writing Emails to 100,000 People, In 1 Hour, Got $10,878.77 Revenue

    We did a fun experiment with selling through email:

    In 1 hour, write 2 emails (one short, one long), and send it out to 100,000 people. Turns out it made $10,878.77 Revenue.

    Watch what we did, and try implementing this on your own business or product.

    You can see the full emails here.

    #3.) Built a 1.7million reader email list with Sam Parr of The Hustle

    We sit down to interview Sam Parr, who sold his email list The Hustle to HubSpot. 

    We dig in to see how he built the email list with it's humble beginnings as an email list to notify people of his live conference events. Eventually they realized the email list itself was more valuable than the live events!

    #4.) Email Marketing Is Still King, How To Write Sales Emails People Love

    Peter Keller of Fringe Sport sells millions of dollars of gym equipment through his brand, and much of it is over email. 

    "Every email we send out generates sales."

    Peter says 30% of the company revenue comes from when they send out an email blast. 

    He describes how they "think" about emails before they send them, so they send emails people love reading.

    #5.) AppSumo's 1,000,000+ Person Email Marketing Strategy with AppSumo's CEO Ayman Al-Abdullah

    Ayman took AppSumo from $3m in revenue to well over $80m in revenue, and it's built off the back of email. 

    50% or more of that $80m in revenue came from email 🤯

    #6.) Why are emails so powerful? How cold emails change over the years

    Sujan Patel knows emails are incredibly powerful, so much that he started MailShake to automate sending sales email sequences.

    #7.) Noah Kagan's Best Marketing Channel? "Email and YouTube are the only ones."

    Noah Kagan talks about how email and YouTube are the only two channels he pays attention to.

    #8.) Which Email Software To Use?

    Since I help clients with email all the time, I use almost all email softwares out there. For my personal use, I choose ConvertKit because it does everything the easiest.

    Here's why I like it so much compared to other software.

    #9.) What to look for in an email editor?

    I go through all the things I look for in an email software. I personally use ConvertKit for my own businesses, but a lot of these others can work as well. 

    I've used 10+ different systems, and here's how I would think about finding the correct email service. 

    #10.) Short Email Copywriting Tips (watch the playlist)!

    Some rapid-fire email tips!

    You can follow along these short tips by following here:

    Hope you liked this free email writing course, and picked up some helpful knowledge along the way! 

    If you want professional copywriters to help re-writer your emails, consider joining the Copywriting Course

    Not only do we have much more in-depth video training inside, but we have professional copywriters go over all your emails in our 24/7 forum, or on our weekly Office Hours calls! 

    Also make sure to signup for our email newsletter here:

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    Sincerely, 
    Neville Medhora - Copywriter and Email Marketer

    Business Questions to Ask Yourself

    These are helpful business questions to ask yourself or your partners. 

    Each of these are designed as thought-provoking questions that will help your business get more clear on what you offer and how to grow.

     

    #1.) Why did you decide to start this business?

    This pokes at your true motivation for starting your business. 

    Examples:

    • I wanted to make money.
    • I wasn't sure what else to do
    • I wanted to solve X problem.

    #2.) Can you describe your product in one sentence?

    Often times if you can't describe your product easily, you might not have nailed down exactly what you sell. 

    Examples:

    • I sell propane and propane accessories. 
    • Copywriting Course is a set of tools, exercises, and community to help optimize every piece of marketing and copy you send out. 
    • I sell car tires in the Greater Chicago Area.

    #3.) What main benefit does someone get if they buy your product?

    You're not selling specific features of a product, but rather what that product does for the end user. 

    Examples:

    • They save time doing ____.
    • They make more sales by using ____.
    • Turnaround time goes from 5 days to 5 minutes.

    #4.) What is the best method you’ve found to sell your product?

    You probably know what your best ways of getting sales is, can you do more of that? Can you make that a process?

    Examples:

    • Getting on other people's podcasts or newsletters.
    • SEO and Content Marketing. 
    • Interacting with groups on social media.

    #5.) Why did you start a business in this specific industry?

    Why did you pick your specific industry? Can you offer the same service to a different industry that will value your product more? 

    Some website agencies charge $1,000 for a full website to solopreneurs, but another website agency might charge $150,000 to a financial company. 

    Same product, different price. 

    Examples:

    • I wanted to solve my own problem. 
    • I wanted a tool like this, and nothing existed. 
    • I wanted to make money and live a great lifestyle.

    #6.) What would you do if you had to start this business again from scratch?

    Sometimes we keep chugging along on a business out of momentum....but what if you had to start over? Would you do thing the same, or change something up?

    Examples:

    • I would only serve higher priced customers.
    • I wouldn't sell my service so cheap. 
    • I would niche down into a different industry.
    • Instead of a website I'd just do social media first.

    #7.) Do you have a 1 year plan? 5 year plan? 10 year plan?

    A ship with a destination will likely reach it. But what if you have no destination? You might squander your time. 

    Having some roughly yearly plans can help guide you to where you want to go.

    Examples:

    • 1 year plan: Hit 5 sales per day.
    • 5 year plan: Remove myself from the business.
    • 10 year plan: Sell the business to a larger company.

    #8.) Do you want to run this business forever, or eventually sell it?

    This is helpful to think about, so you have a longterm and short term plan.

    • I would like to run it for as long as it's fun, then sell. 
    • I have an exit plan in mind already. 
    • I'm just winging it for now and will re-visit the idea.

    #9.) If someone gave you $10million to grow your business, how would you use it?

    This is helpful, as it will show you where your growth channels would be.

    • Get new email subscribers at $X/each, because I know each subscriber is worth $Y/each.
    • Buying FB, Instagram, TikTok, and Google Ads.
    • I don't know 🤔

    #10.) Who are my competitors?

    This is a fun thing to outline, so you can monitor, get inspired by, or get fired up by their competition.

    • Look for people who rank for similar SEO terms.
    • Look for people more visible on social media. 
    • Maybe someone in a different industry is doing something similar. 
    • Can you see what other companies are doing well? 
    • What offerings do competitors have that you don't?
    • Don't just copy, but just take stock of these things and analyze.

    #11.) Who in my industry would I most like to be? What specific aspects of their company do you like?

    You may not want to be exactly like someone, or exactly like another company, but instead 

    • I would like to be kind of like ____.
    • ____'s marketing is great, and I would like to do more of that.
    • I like how ____ structures their pricing.

    #12.) Which channel brings in the most customers? Can you double down on that?

    It's sooo easy to get sucked into a million different social platforms, so figuring out which one is the most effective 

    • My Twitter account helps me meet the most people. 
    • Email sells the most. 
    • YouTube channel keeps brining in new customers.

    #13.) What’s my company's value proposition?

    Being able to say this in one sentence is important.

    • We sell car tires for the best prices, and fastest installation. 
    • We train people to become top copywriters.
    • We sell shoes that help you run faster.

    A helpful formula could be:

    For $X we will send you PRODUCT in two weeks.

    #14.) Have similar companies to mine been sold for a lot of money?

    Knowing this can tell you roughly what you could sell a similar company for.

    • A company similar to mine in the ____ industry sold for $50m.
    • A company doing similar stuff sold for a 10x revenue multiple.
    • No company like mine has ever sold.

    #15.) What can this company realistically grow to?

    What can you grow to? Are you too niche?

    • Similar companies have grown to $20m/yr.
    • The total market size for knitted hats of GI Joe toys is under $40,000/yr.
    • Similar accounting SaaS companies have become public companies.

    #16.) How are my prices compared to my competitors?

    Are your prices lower, higher, or similar to your competitors? 

    Generally higher priced products are preferable because you can do more for each customer. Lower pricing helps in retailing, but in software or informational products is not as good as high priced.

    • Is my product good enough that I can charge more than my competitors?
    • Do I have Three Tiered Pricing setup for capturing low end customers AND high end customers?
    • Should I do flat pricing, or Value Based Pricing?

    #17.) What if I 5x my pricing? Could I serve my best customers better?

    Believe it or not people respect higher prices more. Let's say there's a course for sale that's $5.00, and one for $5,000. 

    The one for $5,000 seems higher value. There's countless times through history where a company raises prices, and ironically sales go up. 

    • What would happen if I just 5X'd pricing....maybe less clients sign up, but income goes up. 
    • Many agencies have done this: 5X'd or 10X'd pricing, but then accepted fewer clients. These higher priced clients are better.
    • Can I offered Tiered Pricing to still offer my product at the same price, but offer a higher valued package for 5X to 10X the price?

    #18.) What bigger company would want to buy me? Why?

    This is a great question to ask, because it can show you WHY a company would want to buy you. 

    For example, TheHustle was acquired by HubSpot because TheHustle had 1m+ email users who read their daily tech updated. HubSpot wanted those extra 1m+ subscribers to promote their software. 

    • Figure out which companies would potentially buy you. 
    • Figure out which specific asset of yours they'd want to buy (email list, proprietary technology, customer info etc..)
    • Figure out if there's other industries that would want to acquire your company

    #19.) What’s a bottleneck in your company? Is there a way to clear that?

    I bet there's a bottleneck in your company, and it might be YOU 😬

    • Is there a way to give employees permission to bypass you and put things out?
    • Can you insert software that will get rid of this bottleneck? 
    • Can you release some control so others can be free to output work without your approval?

    #20.) If you were to disappear for a week, which process in your company would break first?

    I love this question, because you probably know the answer already.

    • Is there a way to outsource these tasks to someone else?
    • Is there software which will remove this problem?
    • Can you do a monthly session where you pre-work on the stuff that breaks, so you can be out of commission for a long time without things breaking?

    #21.) Is your income one-time or recurring? Is there a way to make it more steady?

    Recurring income is usually the holy grail, because you get regularly scheduled income every month or every year. Insurance companies, mortgage companies, software companies all work like this. 

    #22.) If you were starting over, would you start this business again?

    This is a great question. Are you doing your current business simply out of momentum, or would it be a great business to start again? 

    • Some people just keep doing whatever job or business they are in because that's what they have been doing for years. It's helpful to re-think if it's still a good fit after a few years. 
    • Maybe if you were to re-start this business again today you'd be doing something different? What would you do different? Can you implement that change? 
    • How could you change or create something in the business that would give you the same passion as when you started?

    #23.) Which book influenced you? Can you re-read it and implement strategies?

    Re-reading a great book can be better than reading a new book that kind of sucks. 

    • Write down some of the ideas you picked up originally but haven't implemented. 
    • Implement those ideas into your business. 
    • See if there's any cool tips or strategies you can use.

    #24.) Which person in your company could you NOT get rid of? What are their good qualities?

    I bet you have some people in your company you think are crucial. What qualities do you like of them that are important? 

    • Can you find more people like this? 
    • Can you have those good people work on other stuff you need help with? 
    • Are you doing everything you can to make their work easier and better?

    #25.) Which person in your company can you get rid of? Can you divert their pay into something/someone more useful?

    There might be people at your company who you continually think are underperforming. This can drain your bank account AND morale.

    • Can you have a talk with them about under performing, and give them a chance to improve?
    • If they can't perform well, just get rid of them. Not worth having the dead weight hanging out sucking resources and money. 
    • Keeping bad people around infects the rest of your company culture. 

    #26.) What would _____ do with your company?

    This is a helpful question: "What would _____ do with your company?" 

    Think about the different approaches each person would take with your company, maybe it'll prod you into thinking of some interesting products to offer or directions to take your company.

    • What would Elon Musk do with your company?
    • What would Warren Buffet do with your company?
    • What would Oprah do with your company?
    • What would Sergey Brin do with your company?
    • What would Mark Zuckerberg do with your company?

    #27.) What natural advantage do you have over others? Can you double down on that?

    I bet there's something YOU IN PARTICULAR are very good at, that you should maybe double down on. 

    • Are you very good at podcast interviews? Can you do more of them?
    • Are you very good at creating blog content? Can you do more of them?
    • Are you very good at managing people? Can you do more of that?

    #28.) What are YOU truly good at that few others can do? Can you double down on that talent?

    Sometimes the world will tell you what you're good at by paying you for it, or people asking you to help them with it. 

    • It's good to find what you're great at, and be able to offer it at scale. 
    • It's helpful to find these talents and double down on them. 
    • It's helpful to find these talents and train others how to do them. 

    #29.) Which industry could you make more money doing what you do now?

    Some industries will pay 100X more for a similar service. 

    • If you do web design for startups, maybe a larger company will pay 10X more for a similar product. 
    • Moving up the value chain is important for getting higher priced clients. 
    • If your service solves a bigger and bigger problem you can command more money. 
    • A massage therapist that does massages can make $80/hour. A massage therapist that focuses on high end clients or medical-grade massage can make $300/hour.

    #30.) You only get to keep ONE customer…who would it be? What about them makes them ideal? Can you find more like them?

    Fire all your bad clients, and keep all your good ones.

    • It's likely you already make A LOT of money from a certain set of customers, and VERY LITTLE from others. 
    • Figure out the similarities of the good customers, and find more of those types. 
    • Or you can just focus on a small set of customers for a higher price, rather than dealing with a lot of customers for a low price. 
    • See what kind of prices you can get with this Pricing Calculator.
    • You can make $1m/yr by selling 10,000 products $100. 
      -or-
      You can make $1m/yr by selling 10 products for $100,000.

    #31.) Where do you think your industry will be in 5 years? 10 years?

    Where's your industry headed, and you can get ahead of that curve?

    • Will certain software change the way your industry operates?
    • Are more people digitizing an old process, and can help implement these changes through the industry? 
    • Is there a topic you could become a thought-leader on?
    • Is your industry shrinking or growing?

    #32.) If you wanted to sell your company today, would you be able to do it? What’s holding you back?

    This is a great question, as most business owners have no idea how to sell their company, or how to get it into a place where it can be sold.

    • Are YOU crucial to the business? Can it operate without? If not, it'll be hard to sell. 
    • What would someone acquiring your business really buy it for? The SEO value? The email list? The people? The tech? 
    • What can you start doing to make your business a sellable asset at some point? 
    • You should think of how to make your business sellable MUCH BEFORE you want to sell it.

    #33.) Do you track all your numbers properly? Do you review them?

    "What gets measured, gets managed."

    • If you're not tracking your numbers, you may want to set aside a time every month to review them. 
    • Just seeing if things are trending up or down is extremely helpful. 
    • By tracking your numbers and occasionally monitoring them you can often spot activities that bring you lots of money or lose you lots of money, and can optimize from there.

    #34.) You only have 1 hour a week to grow your business….what would you do during that hour for most impact?

    I bet you know the answer to this already. 

    • I've found that reaching out to new audiences for video or podcast collaborations to be a great source of quickly driving new business. 
    • Some of the activities you do probably have more bang-for-the-buck than others, can you double down on those? 
    • Is there a system you can put in place to make sure these high-value activities happen every week?

    #35.) What makes customers smile when they buy your product?

    Ultimately you sell to customers, and want to make them happy. Are there certain activities that impress your customers the most? 

    • Can you do more of that?
    • Can you make this a separate service?
    • Can you call your last 10 customers to see what they love or hate about your product?

    #36.) Do your customers tell their friends about you? What do they say?

    Word of mouth referrals are the most powerful promotion you can get. 

    • Are your customers ever talking about you? That's GREAT!
    • What do they say about you? Can you write these down somewhere and keep track of these?
    • Maybe you can put all these kind words into a testimonials page?

    #37.) Define your ideal customer in one word….

    Who is your ideal customer?

    • "Business owner"
    • "Fortune 500 company"
    • "A mother"
    • "A solopreneur"

    #38.) What outcome do you want in 2 years from this business?

    This is an important question and time frame. One year might be too little to get big results, and 10 years might be too far out to predict. 

    • In 2 years where do you want your income level to be from this business?
    • In 2 years what other side benefits do you want? Larger social accounts? More friends in the industry?
    • In 2 years what size could this realistically grow to?

    #39.) What about your company are you proud of?

    There must be something you do well that you're proud of.

    • Can you do more of that?
    • Is it something you can monetize on more?
    • Is it something that'll differentiate you from competitors?

    #40.) What about your company are you embarrassed of?

    I bet there's something you're NOT proud of about your company. Can you improve on it?

    • We don't take of customers all that great. 
    • We don't post good stuff on social media. 
    • Our website is not optimized at all.

    #41.) What’s an example of a customer success story?

    Who experiences success with your product?

    • Do you keep a file with all of these stories?
    • Do you share these stories with others to show them the value of your product?
    • Can you figure out how to replicate those results for 1,000's more people?

    #42.) What’s been your most popular piece of content so far? Can you do more like that?

    If a piece of content you've made really hit, can you make more like that?

    • Repeating similar stuff may not hit every time, but content is a numbers game. 
    • What about that content really hit home with people?
    • Just remember you might post 50 things, only one might hit it big, a few will be OK, and many will stink. Keep publishing!

    #43.) What specific pain point are you solving? Is there a demand for that solution?

    Sometimes businesses can flounder for a long time if they are not solving a specific problem.

    • Is your company actually solving a real pain point, or just something that would be "nice to have?" 
    • Is there actual demand for this solution? 
    • Are there other companies selling similar stuff? That's usually a good sign. If no one is selling something similar, it could be there's no demand.
    • You can sell high quality sweaters for squirrels, but there might not be enough demand to make it a full time business.
    • There might be thousands of insurance agents out there already selling insurance, but that indicates there's lots of demand.

    #44.) What background do you have that increases your credibility for this business?

    Why should people listen to YOU specifically in an industry? 

    • Is there a way to post more of your social proof?
    • Is there something you can do (write a book, be on specific podcasts, write for specific publications) that will give you more street cred in your industry? 
    • Can you DO THE THING you talk about the most? For example if you talk about creating business is a lot, what if you create a big business and talk about that?

    #45.) Who does something similar to your company, but in a different industry?

    Think about others who do the same service as you, but in a different industry.

    • How is their service different than yours?
    • Could you shift into that industry also?
    • What if you borrowed ideas from how they sell?

    #46.) How are you different from competitors?

    What makes you stand out from your competitors?

    • Larger social media following?
    • Are good at video and they are not?
    • More credibility in your industry?

    #47.) In 3 months what could be the biggest change you make to your business that would get more (or better) customers.

    This question is good because it gives you enough time to implement almost any change. 

    • In 3 months what if you had a proper podcast outreach program going that gets you in front of other audiences? 
    • What if you build out a way to publish consistent content on your most effective social platform? 
    • Can you start regularly participating (or planning meetups) in the places where your ideal customer hangs out?

    #48.) Would you want to work at your own company as an employee?

    Is your company a good place to work? Would YOU work there?

    • How could you make it more fun to work at?
    • How could you align your employees personal goals with your goal?
    • Can you create a win/win/win for yourself, your employees, and your customers?

    #49.) If you didn’t own the company, would you buy your product? How much would you pay?

    How could you make your product or service a complete no-brainer?

    • Really think if you would buy your own product/service. 
    • Would you specifically buy it from YOU, or are other alternatives better?
    • What would tip your offering into "no-brainer" territory?

    #50.) What do you think customers secretly think about your product, but don’t tell you to your face?

    We all wonder what other people say about us behind our backs. And our business is no different.

    • Ask for honest feedback from past customers.
    • Put yourself in their shoes and come up with potential issues they have.
    • Be your own harshest critic.
       

    #51.) What accomplishment or number would make you “feel awesome?”

    So much of what you strive for is that awesome feeling. 

    • Is it a certain revenue number?
    • How many paying customers would you like to have?
    • Can you create that feeling inside before you actually achieve it?
       

    #52.) When you daydream, what do you envision your company as?

    Daydreaming can actually be a really useful activity when used effectively.

    • Imagine every detail (big and small) of your ideal work day. How do you make this your reality?
    • Who would be your dream customers you get to serve?
    • Is it a lifestyle business? Or do you want to be a publicly traded company?
       

    #53.) How do customers find your company?

    How could you make it as easy as possible to be discovered?

    • Do customers interact with each other and mention you?
    • Do you rank high on Google?
    • Are you running social media ads?
       

    #54.) Who has been the biggest advocate and seller of your product?

    Who loves what you do so much that they just have to talk about it?

    • A champion at a Fortune 500 company.
    • An influencer who tweets about you.
    • How can you incentivize them to spread the word?
       

    #55.) What features of your product do customers use the most?

    Do an 80-20 analysis on your product to find out

    • Customers will naturally gravitate to a handful of use cases
    • Ask customers which features they find most helpful
    • Discover those and dedicate more attention to improving them
       

    #56.) If you could change one thing about your business, what would that be?

    In your dream world what would change about your company?

    • Bigger social media following?
    • Larger email list?
    • More SEO traffic?
    • More attention from a specific industry? 

    Figure out what exactly you want changed, and then start working towards that.

     

    #57.) What marketing tactic brings in the most amount of sales?

    Believe it or not, the simplest advice I can give you: Do more of what WORKS, and less of what DOESN'T WORK. Many time people will do amazing promotions or tactics that work well in their company, then never do it again.

    • It's OK to repeat a tactic again.
    • It's OK to re-try a tactic that worked well in the past. 
    • Try things that work again and again, until they don't work anymore.

    #58.) Which time of the year do you make the most sales?

    I bet there's a clear time of the year when you make a ton of money. When I ran a rave company, Burning Man (usually at the end of September) was always my biggest time of the year, even bigger than the holiday season.

    • Identity when you usually make the most income.
    • Start planning your promotions 3 months ahead of that time so you can be prepared. 
    • Do a lot of the work before-hand so during your busy time you're not drowning in work.

    #59.) What is the slowest time of the year for your business? Are there ways to improve that?

    You probably know the best time for your business, but what about the slowest times? 

    • Is there some big holiday you can use to do extra promotion?
    • Is there a challenge or contest you can run during this time?
    • Is this a good time to try fun experiments?

    #60.) What started your interest in this industry?

    There must've been some impetus for you to get into your specific industry.

    • Can you re-evaluate if you should still be in this business?
    • Is there a way to re-ignite your initial interest in this business?
    • Are you serving the same customers or are they different now?

    #61.) What other services do your customers pay for in your industry?

    It's important to know what else people are paying for, because maybe you can offer something like that also.

    • There might be many adjacent products you can also offer your customers. 
    • What other products would make your customers money, or save them money. 
    • Most big companies you know of offer MANY products and services, not just one.

    #62.) Can you go through your checkout process as a new customer….what parts can be improved?

    As business owners we see out websites all the time, but never interact with them as a TOTAL NEWBIE would.

    • Every week go through your own checkout process. See what issues you can find. 
    • Try to ask others to go through it for the first time, and watch where they stumble. 
    • Iron out all the hiccups you see in the checkout process that could cost you a sale.

    #63.) How long does the average customer stay with your company?

    The LTV (life time value) of a customer is important to know.

    • Can you extend the average customers LTV?
    • Are you in a business where once a customer purchases, they leave forever? Any way to make this recurring?
    • Can you add some sort of recurring revenue aspect?

    #64.) What end result does your customer want from your company?

    We often sell the product/service itself, but maybe we can focus on the end result your customer wants?

    • We sell Carpet Cleaning -VS- We sell a clean home you're proud of.
    • We sell a Copywriting Course -VS- We train you in a skill that can up-level your life.
    • We sell a Journal -VS- We help build your daily habits so you can build the life you dream of.

    #65.) What challenge is your customer REALLY trying to solve?

    Let's focus on the reason your customer is buying something. The REAL reason. This can shed light on why people buy. 

    • They buy a Copywriting Course -VS- They buy a training course so they can create their own career and be in charge, rather than be like their dad who had lots of problems paying the rent.
    • They are buying a water bottle because it's something in their life they can control to improve their health immediately. 
    • They buy into a monthly challenge group to prove to themselves they can stop drinking for a month.

    #66.) Do you have a list of audiences you would like to reach?

    At AppSumo we keep a file of all the people and groups we know that might want to co-promote a deal. When we have a deal about Wordpress, we'll reach out to everyone who does Wordpress related stuff.

    • Keep a spreadsheet of all the different audiences related to your product. 
    • It doesn't have to be stuff in the same industry, in fact having groups/people who could use your product OUTSIDE of your industry is important. 
    • When you need to get the word out about a post, video, or new product, you know where to look by having this list ready.

    #67.) How often do you make goals for your business? Every month? Every year?

    Keeping your goals updated is important. You should probably be keeping track of different sets of goals:

    #68.) What is something your competitor does better than you?

    I bet you can improve your business a bunch by just looking at what some competitors do better than you.

    • Are they putting out more content?
    • Are they more consistent?
    • Are they more inspirational? 

    What lessons can you learn from them? Don't hate on your competitors, be glad they exist so they keep you on your toes, and outwork or outsmart them!

    #69.) What is something you do way better than competitors? Does that activity bring in sales?

    I bet there's things that you do better than your competitors also, but step back for a second and see if those things ultimately bring in sales.

    • Maybe you post more on Instagram, but it barely reaches any audience. Is it worth it?
    • Maybe you put more small blog posts out, but it doesn't reach many people. Is it worth it?
    • Maybe you have a prettier website, but it doesn't change the outcome if people buy or not. Is it worth it?

    #70.) What’s something that brings in sales….but you hate doing? Can you have someone else do it….or make it more fun for yourself?

    I bet there's certain sales activities you know bring in sales, but it's hard or boring or you just hate doing it. 

    • Can you find a way to have someone else do it?
    • Is there software that can speed up the process?
    • Is there a service out there that'll do it for you?
    • Can you make the process more fun for yourself?

    #71.) Do you regularly call your customers on the phone and speak with them?

    Calling people up and just asking a few questions can go a lonnnnggg way.

    • Ask them why they originally bought. 
    • Ask what they wish was better about the products. 
    • Ask them what competitors they like. 
    • Ask them if they would buy again.

    #72.) How often do you interact with your paying customers?

    Your currently paying customers might know some ways to improve your product.

    • Ask them how to improve your product. 
    • Ask them what features a competitor has that they like. 
    • Ask them what specific problem they are trying to solve, and figure out how to solve that faster.

    #73.) Let’s say you had only one customer, how would you serve them versus what they get now?

    Imagine you just had one REALLY HIGH PAYING CUSTOMER. What would be the difference?

    • Are there more services you could offer this customer?
    • Is there more personalized service you would do for them?
    • What process could you help them with to improve their business futher?

    Figuring out what you would change could maybe put you in a position only to serve a few high end customers, instead of many lower end customers.

    #74.) Is there a different industry that would appreciate your services more? That would pay you more?

    If you are making websites for beginner freelancers, they may not be able to pay you all that much. But if you were making websites for large financial institutions they might pay you up to $100,000 each. Can you focus on larger industries?

    • Try to see if you can focus on industries where your product directly makes them money, or saves them money.
    • It's an easier sale if your product is an "income generator" rather than a liability.
    • What people doing similar work make more money in other industries?

    #75.) Is there something in your business you could outsource to someone on UpWork or Fiverr?

    Many business owners want to do things themselves, but there's 1,000's of people who can do similar tasks as you. 

    • Look to UpWork or Fiverr to find help on tasks you can outsource. 
    • Maybe someone else handling some tasks can free you up to drum up more business. 
    • Perhaps others are even BETTER at some of the tasks you handle!

    #76.) What item do you want to buy from the money you make from this business? Can you make that motivate you?

    Some people aren't motivated by a money goal, but rather what that money goal represents. For example:

    • If I make $100,000 more I can buy a brand new Tesla.
    • If I make $100,000 more I can buy a pool.
    • If I make $100,000 more I can buy my parents a new car.

    #77.) How much money would it take to “level up your life” right now? How can you make your business hit that number?

    Think about what leveling up your life would include. 

    • To level up my life: I need to be able to afford a $3,000/mo apartment and $5,000/mo in expenses. 
    • To level up my life: I want a house twice the size with a pool. 
    • To level up my life: I need a podcast studio in my home.

    #78.) Which social network brings you the most customers?

    Instead of trying to half-ass all the social networks, what if you were to spend all your time dominating one?

    • Different platforms appeal to different industries. Find yours. 
    • Pinterest is great for visual stuff, food, fashion etc. 
    • Twitter is great for investing, tech, humor etc.
    • Instagram is great for health, fashion etc. 
    • Figure out the social platform you like best, have a natural advantage at, and can create "Cascading Content" from.

    #79.) If you could build an audience on any platform, which would it be? Are you willing to spend 1 to 3 years of time on that platform?

    Many people get sidetracked by all the new social platforms coming out. While I'm not saying you shouldn't jump on just to test them out, by picking a specific platform to dominate you have a better chance. 

    • Figure out which social platform you like the most, and go hard on that one. 
    • For me personally I enjoy Twitter and YouTube, all the rest I only auto-update through Buffer, but don't spend time on. 
    • Ironically if you get lots of traction on one platform, you can much easier parlay that audience into another platform....this is better than half-assing multiple platforms at a time.

    #80.) How big is your email list, and how are you growing it?

    Off all the marketing channels, almost every company would opt to grow their email list over any other channel. It's because you control this channel fully, and own the interaction with the customer. 

    #81.) What’s an untapped market for your services?

    Sometimes the people you think need your services might not be the best fit. 

    • I've seen web designers that create webpages for people who pay $100, but then see web designers who only focus on financial companies who need similar websites but they will pay over $100,000 for it. The industry you cater to matters. 
    • Can you go "upstream" with your services? 
    • Who pays the most money for services like yours? I realized early when I was doing SEO work that some clients would pay $500 for a projects, and others would pay $5,000+ for the same project. This taught me to look for higher paying customers and go for those. 

    #82.) What’s a weird way a customer uses your product?

    Sometimes these weird edge cases become your biggest sellers of products, and can help you branch out into different industries. Here's three examples from my first eCommerce company that sold rave equipment and light up and glow things:

    • A plumbing company bought 50+ packages of "finger lights" used by ravers. I called them up to ask why and they said, "Our plumbers have to climb under sinks and cabinets and sometimes can't see, so they put these finger lights on their finger to light things up." 
    • I used to think 16 year old ravers were my target audience, but they rarely could afford more than $20 on an order. However 35 year old moms buying light up stuff for their child's birthday would routinely spend $200 to $300 per order. So I started catering more to this crowd.
    • I would get $1,000+ orders from wedding planners and party planners, so I started advertising to that group of people. I never thought running a RAVE COMPANY would morph into a party planner company.
    • In Copywriting Course I sold a course, and would do a monthly Office Hours to help people re-write their copy. This feature was more popular than the courses, so we created an entire community just to re-write people's copy.

    #83.) Is it possible to double your business this year? What would you have to do for that?

    I bet you know how to double your business, but haven't done the steps required. 

    • Maybe figure out the top 1 to 3 activities that make you the most money, and do more of these. 
    • Sometimes just getting in front of other people's audiences can be the answer. Can you go on a podcasting or guest-posting tour?
    • How has someone else in your industry grown a bunch? What did they do? 

    #84.) Is there a small company or tool you can buy to expand?

    Sometimes taking over someone else's small project can be a good fit. Have you looked around to see if you can acquire a small business or website, apply your own magic to it, then grow it?

    • Flippa, Empire Flippers, and Micro Acquire are all places you can browse.
    • You can also search Product Hunt or others to find small tools to buy from developers who created the tool as a side project, but don't dedicate time to it.
    • Figure out what you're good at.....maybe Ads or Copywriting, and see if you can apply your magic to the project.

    #85.) Do you have any sources of low-maintenance passive income? Can you create any? A book, a course, a digital product?

    One thing that takes the pressure of your business is having an income that doesn't depend on your main businesses. Having income redundancy is a huge weight off your shoulders.

    • Let's say your main website goes down for a full month, do you have other sources of income? 
    • Can you create some small products like a self published book, a small digital product, or an online course to supplement your main income?

    #86.) Is there a process you do right now that could be automated?

    Humans are good at critical thinking and making decisions. Computers are good at doing exact commands at certain times. Maybe there's some tech you can put in place to replace a process you manually do?

    • If you have trouble scheduling posts, perhaps getting software to auto-schedule for you would be a great fit. 
    • I used so spend so much time just scheduling meetings with people, but then implemented Calendly and bypassed all that frustration. 
    • I bet there's 1-3 process you do right now that can be nearly 100% automated with cheap or free software tools out there.
    • When I ran HouseOfRave I would manually copy-and-paste orders from my website to the fulfilment warehouse. This took me 1-2 hours a day. There were all sorts of weird issues that would happen needing my attention, so I thought it was impossible to outsource to a computer. I found a cheap plugin that did the exact thing, and it went from an hour a day to 1 minute.

     

    Sincerely, 
    Neville Medhora - Copywriting Course

     

    P.S. Do you have any helpful questions you ask yourself to improve your business? List them in the comments.

    P.P.S. We have a "Business Question Generator" that will pull up one of these questions for you to answer at a time, it's super helpful!

     

     

     

     

    Tone of Voice in Copywriting & Your Brand (w/ Examples)

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    In copywriting it’s super helpful to first find the tone of your voice.

    Why?

    • If you do it right, people will WANT to read your stuff.
    • Everyone who interacts with your writing will react to it’s style. (or worse…NOT react).
    • You have to write like this all day, so it’s best to at least enjoy doing it!

    The good part is, you don’t have to stick with one tone of voice forever.

    There are MANY different tone’s of voice you can use in your writing.

    I don’t care if you run a small blog…..
    I don’t care if you own a dental practice…..
    I don’t care if you are a Fortune 500 Company salesperson…..

     

    The tone you use in your writing is interchangeable for different situations.  

    Take my hand ::eww don’t really touch my hand:: and let’s look at some tone of voice examples together:

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    Omg…..if you’re a SaaS company (Software As A Service), you often have the easiest job of all. Because all you have to do is SHOW YOUR PRODUCT WORKING!!!

    Member Mouse does a fantastic job on their landing page just SHOWING with video the product works:

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    Why bother with tons of text when you can just SHOW something in a quick screen-capture video?

    Another thing they do well is list a bunch of features:

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    Most of the people coming to Member Mouse ALREADY KNOW they are shopping for a membership website plugin…..so they don’t need to extensively explain each feature.

    And they actually have videos in the support section showing the features in action, so there’s not much need to use tons of text here.

    As you’ll notice, they had to have very little “Tone” because people aren’t coming to this site for the “TONE”…..they’re coming for a working piece of SOFTWARE.

    Just show the damn thing in action!

    Also what works well……GIF’s.

    Here’s an example from Gif Cam that shows how easy it is to add text on their software:

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    Why bother WRITING about how great it is….when you can just SHOW it?

    The “SaaS Company” Tone of Voice:

    • Calm and cool.
    • List lots of  benefits.
    • Show the product in action.
       

     

     

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    The “Super Vulnerable” Tone is best deployed for a story that actually feels difficult or “vulnerable” to share.

    For example, in this Prey Project copy from AppSumo I wrote years ago…..

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    It was the first time we’d used “vulnerable” copy on AppSumo and it worked spectacularly.

    I had actually been robbed a few months before…..and the feeling was extremely violating.  I would literally fantasize about what I would do to the bastards that robbed me if I found them.

    …..now that’s kind of messed up thinking right?

    Well I knew I couldn’t be the only one that felt like this.  And to my surprise, I got a bomb-explosion of emails in my inbox that day about that email.  Even from people who are already great copywriters:
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    Like I said in the beginning of this article, you can use all these different styles at different times.

    For that particular deal, telling a hard-hitting-emotional story was the best way I could get people to use Prey.

    The “Super Vulnerable” Tone of Voice:

    • Emotional and heartfelt.
    • The reader should feel your pain.
    • It should be slightly uncomfortable to publish.

     

     

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    Want to find out the kinds of tone your industry likes??  JUST STEAL IT!!!

    It’s super easy to figure out what kind of tone gets the broadest range of people:

    1. Just go to Amazon.com/books and enter your industry or keyword.
    2. Sort by “Most Relevant”.
    3. Either buy the top 10 books and read them.  Or read the free previews.  Or read the top comments on the books.

    You’ll very quickly get a sense of how people are writing in this industry!

    Now…..this “Steal It” method is dangerous, because generally people who just try to copy everyone else without any uniqueness tend to fade into the background.  However, it can give you some seriously-amazing insight into the broad mindset of your audience.

    Here’s some examples:

    Let’s say you wanna figure out what your Tone of Voice should be for a dog training website.

    Well, just follow 3 steps above….

    Here’s the results for the Top 10 “Dog Training” books on Amazon:

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    Notice just from their covers and titles everything is “Happy” and “Natural” and “Friendly” and “Best Friendy.”

    So naturally we can see people like this “Friendly and Happy” tone of voice.

    So if I came in with a crazy book title and tone…..while it could POSSIBLY draw a lot of attention, it doesn’t seem like the type of book that most people are actually paying money for.

    So I wouldn’t hit the dog training market with a CRAZY AND WILD title like this:
     

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    That title isn’t very consistent with what the paying public is buying.
     
    Now let’s do another “Steal It” experiment….this time on:  Stock Analysis

    What should the tone be if we want to write about Stock Analysis?

     Well here’s the top 10 books on Amazon:
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    Notice the covers and titles are pretty serious.

    There’s a lot of language like “security analysis” and “guide to financial markets” and “technical analysis” talk.  You don’t see a bunch of wacky or super-casual style copy in these best sellers eh?

    So if we wanted to write a Stock Analysis site, it seems the best respected books are more serious.  This means I WOULD NOT write super goofy and wacky like this:

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    As hilarious as this might be (and who knows, it might even work!)……we can ascertain from looking at all the top sellers that the tone of voice for this Stock Analysis niche is going to be more “professional.

    This is likely a function of:

    • The people in the industry are relatively professional.
    • The people who write these kind of books are quite professional.
    • The people buying these books want to learn from a “professional” source.

    So if I were to write “Stock Analysis” articles, I would adopt the tone of the most popular material.  That doesn’t mean I’d strip out all personality, it just means I probably would want to avoid looking crazy and goofy.
     

     

     

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    The B2B Copywriting Tone of Voice is the most confusing for people.  Most people in the B2B (Business To Business) sales industry think they have to be SUPER FORMAL which in their mind means “boring”….but it’s not totally true.

    • You don’t have to act formal, you jut have to be “Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding.”
    • Just write like you talk in the office or in a sales meeting.
    • Don’t sound like a robot because you think it’s “more professional.”  This hurts the chances of your email being read.
    • Do NOT “just pitch them.”  You need to offer some value to the other person.

    When I tell people these rules for B2B emails, they always end up saying this:
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    No.  They.  Do Not.  

    No one wants to read boring-ass emails!!  Especially when they get 100+ of them everyday!

    They want emails that either:

    • Show them something awesome.
    • –or–
    • Show them something that can make their lives better/easier.

    Let’s look at an example.  Checkout these B2B email copywriting templates from Yelp:

    Here’s a sample of a “Boring Formal B2B” email they would send to businesses:

    Yelp Template B2B Email Results (Boring Formal Sounding):
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    Here are the results from this “Boring Formal” email:
    50 Sent
    33 Opened
    1 Response
    3.33% response rate 😞


    This email is too boring and formal, and business owners get requests like this emails by the hundreds.

    The important thing is to either be REALLY HELPFUL, or STAND OUT to get people’s attention.  Even a little personality can go an extremely long way.

    Yelp “Personality Injected” B2B Email Results (Professional Yet Human Sounding):
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    Notice how this email is still professional, yet speaks like a HUMAN, not a boring robot.  It also offers the person some real VALUE.  Not just a sales pitch.

    Here are the result of this “Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding” email:
    50 Sent
    35 Opened
    4 Responses back
    11.43 % response rate 🙂

    So……what do you think now?

    Imagine sending 1,000 emails over the course of a month.  At the response rates above, you would get:

    • Boring Formal Email: 33 responses.  
    • Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding Email: 114 responses!

    For the same amount of work Alicia is now getting more than 3x the responses by using a “Professional-Yet-Human-Sounding” tone of voice.  

    Maybe try to inject just a little value and a little personality into your B2B emails.  It can make a huge improvement.

    The “B2B Company” Tone of Voice:

    • Informative and helpful.
    • Write words like you talk.
    • Try not to sound so formal that you turn into a Boring Robot.

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    The Fatass Sumo Tone is a tone of voice I developed when we were in the big growth phase of AppSumo and I was writing all the copy.  Here he is:

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    Since there was already this great Sumo logo, I decided to give him a personality.  And since he is fictitious, I felt like I could get away with waaaayyyy more that I usually could.

    So the Fatass Sumo character is like this:

    • He’s brash.
    • He’s super fat (512 lbs ….because “512” is the Austin area code)
    • He’s kinda sexist sometimes.
    • He’s kinda racist sometimes.
    • He eats a lot.
    • He “kidnaps” people to convince them to give a better deal to the “Sumo-lings”.
    • Here’s some (super old) examples of “The Fatass Sumo Tone”:  Kernest, Hiring,  Sumo Business Blueprint,  Blueprint 2

    This made for some HILARIOUS pieces of copy that would get away with crazy amounts of Asian jokes, fat jokes, “you throw like a woman” jokes.

    I could also make totally outrageous selling points that other wise wouldn’t fly like:

    “I currently have Drew Houston of Dropbox tied up in the trunk of my car…..and won’t let him out till he gives the Sumo-lings 85% off a year subscription to DropBox.”

    “This Fatass Sumo needs to get my daily 40 burritos for lunch, so I need money fast.  That’s why I’m willing to let this deal go for only $29/piece.”

    Were these kind lines stupid?  Probably.

    But did a certain percentage of people pay attention and buy? YES!

    The “Fatass Sumo” Tone of Voice:

    • Adopt the persona of the character.
    • You get extra leeway to be “crazier” with this tone.
    • First keep the emails informational, then you can insert some humor.
       

     

     

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    Are you super funny?   Then write funny!  Other funny people will like it!

    Are you boring as hell??  Then write boring!  Other boring people will like it!

    Hi.  I’m Neville.  I’m sort of cheesy.  I’m kinda informal.  And that’s totally ok.  

    • Look at my drawings on my What Is Copywriting page, they’re cheesy.
    • Look at my style of writing throughout this blog, or my videos, or my personal blog.
    • Scroll to the bottom of this blog post, even my “All Rights Reserved” is kinda cheesy.

    I’m cheesy and so that’s how I should try to write my personal content.  

    It’s the unique thing my writing brings to this industry.

    The biggest mistake in copywriting is trying to write for the middle of the road.

    Think about how these people got famous:

    • Howard Stern.
    • Rush Limbaugh.
    • Kanye West.
    • Donald Trump.
    • Marilyn Manson.
    • Dr. Dre.
    • Paris Hilton.

    They are all polarizing. Kind of like Kim Kardashian:

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    There will be a certain group of people who hate her.

    There will be a certain group of people who love her.

    People like this make you agree, or vehemently disagree.  The thing about them is:

    They keep the crowd awake.

    So don’t try to be so middle-of-the-road just because one weirdo says he doesn’t like your writing style.

    The “Write Like You Act” Tone of Voice:

    • Writing like YOU is the easiest person to write as.
    • Sometime’s you’re sad.  So write in a sad tone.
    • Sometime’s you’re happy.  So write in a happy tone.
    • Sometime’s you’re angry about a subject.  So write in an angry tone.
    • Being YOU is easy.
       

     

     

     

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    You see, I think I’m hilarious.  I know it’s not true as I’d like it to be…..but it’s what I go for.  In the end, writing like MYSELF is the easiest thing in the world to do.

    But since I can remember, I’ve enjoyed reading stuff that’s informative yet has a “unique flair” to it.  Gary Halbert or Felix Dennis are both examples who have hilariously funny copy, yet backed with super-informative material.

    It’s almost like this combination of “informative and funny” is the best of both worlds:

    • Laughter
    • &
    • Learning

    So this is the type of copy I prefer to write.  Other people who like Informative-Yet-Kinda-Funny articles will like me. People who are staunchy and not funny…..won’t.

     
    “Ok Neville, I have a super boring life AND boring writing….am I doomed to failure??”

    You’re at a disadvantage for sure.  If you’re not very interesting or have new ideas, it’s hard to get a large audience to follow you.

    BUT…..you can (possibly) make up for it in other ways like this:

    Having really insider information:

    • No one thinks Ben Bernanke is a wild-n-crazy guy…..but when he sets the interest rates that govern all the worlds banks……that makes him REALLY interesting and important to listen to.

    Being damn good with math and numbers and analyzing the results:

    • I follow this guy Max Roser on Twitter.  It’s not because he’s “such a hoot” to follow……but he creates graphs from data he scrapes, and the results are SUPER interesting, often times I’ve never seen that information presented anywhere but his graphs.

    Doing unbelievable work:  

    • You may be dry writer on your graphics design website, but if you’re work is just STUNNING then people will pay attention to that.

    Don’t shy away from your boringness:

    • If you have a boring tone…..then other boring people may enjoy your boring tone!  It’s best to write like yourself, and not try to be someone else.  It nearly always comes through as phony.

     

     

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    My favorite test when reading copy is “The Caveman Test.”

    It’s basically where you use a Caveman voice to determine if something sucks or not.

    You act and talk like a dumb caveman, and instantly things become clearer.  Like with this boring copy on the left, and the caveman’s instant reaction:

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    If The Caveman reads a sentence and don’t INSTANTLY know what it means……You have failed.

    This is a deviously simple-yet-effective way to tell if your copy is boring people, or keeping them glued to the page.

    The Caveman Test:

    • Pretend you’re a dumb and short-attention-span caveman.
    • Start reading the copy and if it loses your attention, the copy sucks.
    • Re-write or totally remove sentences/paragraphs that lose your attention.

     

    Some quick tips to find your own Copywriting Tone of Voice:

    • Stay caffeinated.  That always puts your brain in a playful mood.
    • Make sure you’re not tired or grumpy when writing (unless that’s the tone you’re going for).
    • Have a SINGLE purpose of the copy.  (example: Get them to click the buy button).
    • Use some of the “angles” from the Problem Solving Checklist to re-look at your copy.
    • Signup to my newsletter to get more tips directly to your inbox.

    Hope your learned something about the Tone of Voice to use in your copywriting today.

     

    Please share with friends if you enjoyed. Thank you!
     

     

    18 Copywriting Formulas (Plus Examples of Each)

    #1.) AIDA: Attention, Interest, Desire, Action

    This formula is widely used in advertising and sales copy. It starts by grabbing attention, generating interest, creating desire, and finally, prompting action from the reader or viewer.

    Attention: Hey do you workout?

    Interest: If you drink 1 liter of water before working out, you increase muscle production by 30%.

    Desire: So if you drank more water before working out, you could see bigger gains for the same work.

    Action: Grab a bottle of water and chug it before working out!

    Read more about the AIDA Formula → 

    #2.) PAS: Problem, Agitate, Solution

    This formula addresses the reader's problem, agitates their pain points, and presents a solution to alleviate their issues.

    Problem: Do you try to find meeting times over email, but it ends up being 5+ back-n-forth emails?

    Agitate: I bet you do this all the time and it's made you miss out on huge deals because you didn't respond to some emails quick enough.

    Solution: Use Calendly instead, and it'll show your availability to the other person, and they can just pick a time to meet!

    #3.) PASCA: Problem Agitate Solution Call to Action

    Building upon the PAS formula, PASCA adds a Call to Action (CTA) at the end to prompt the reader to take a specific action, such as making a purchase or signing up for a service.

    Problem: Do you try to find meeting times over email, but it ends up being 5+ back-n-forth emails?

    Agitate: I bet you do this all the time and it's made you miss out on huge deals because you didn't respond to some emails quick enough.

    Solution: Use Calendly instead, and it'll show your availability to the other person, and they can just pick a time to meet!

    Call To Action: Click here to signup for Calendly, and use coupon code MEOWMEOW for 20% off. 

     

    #4.) 4 Ps: Promise, Picture, Proof, Push

    This formula starts with a promise or benefit, creates a vivid picture of the desired outcome, provides proof or testimonials to back up the claims, and ends with a push to take action.

    Promise: Do you want a suit that fits perfectly, so you don't look all frumpy and lame?

    Picture: Like this:
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    Proof: We only create suits with tapered cuts, so you don't look like a little boy wearing his dads coat.

    Push: Go to our website and select your normal suit size and we'll send you a well-tailored suit.

    #5.) FAB: Features, Advantages, Benefits

    FAB formula highlights the features of a product or service, explains their advantages, and ultimately communicates the benefits to the customer.

    Features: The Copywriting Course transforms you from a mediocre & scared writer, to confident and high-output writer who knows how to sell.

    Advantages: Learning the skill of copywriting can make you better at:
    - Writing cold emails
    - Writing on social media
    - Selling people on ideas or products
    - Knowing how to communicate with high-level people

    Benefits: My amping up your copywriting muscle, you'll be able to communicate at least 50% to 200% better on every piece of marketing material you help create, or every communication you have with other humans! 

    #6.) The Before-After-Bridge

    This describes the customer's current situation (Before), paints a vivid picture of how their life could be improved (After), and bridges the gap by explaining how the product or service can make that transformation happen.

    Does your house look like it was built in the 1920's and has been growing moss ever since?

    Let us powerwash your house and make it look brand new!

    Power washing is quick, affordable, and makes a huge transformation on your home!

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    #7.) 5W’s and H: Who, What, Where, When, Why, How

    This formula involves answering the essential questions to provide a complete picture of the product or service.

    Who? Santa and his Reindeers.

    What? Are hosting a webinar on building toys.

    Where? Live broadcast on Zoom from The North Pole.

    When? December 31st at 1pm

    Why? To show you how to make your own toys.

    How? Click this link to register your spot.

     

     

    #8.) Tell A Story

    This formula uses storytelling techniques to engage the reader, create an emotional connection, and present the product or service as the solution to the protagonist's problem.

    There was a boy named Neville, he ran businesses for years but didn't understand the importance of "writing good copy" on emails. 

    He would send out an email newsletter every week and make zero sales 😞

    Then he read some copywriting books like The Gary Halbert Letters, and overnight started understanding some principles of great copy! 

    He went on to create many treasure chests full of loot after learning copywriting! You can learn too here →

    #9.) PAPA: Problem, Agitation, Provide, Action

    PAPA formula addresses the problem, agitates it to increase the pain, provides a solution, and prompts the reader to take action.

    Problem: Do you try to find meeting times over email, but it ends up being 5+ back-n-forth emails?

    Agitatation: I bet you do this all the time and it's made you miss out on huge deals because you didn't respond to some emails quick enough.

    Provide: Use Calendly instead, and it'll show your availability to the other person, and they can just pick a time to meet!

    Action: Click here to signup for Calendly, and use coupon code MEOWMEOW for 20% off. 

    #10.) The 7 Steps

    This formula consists of seven steps: Attention, Problem, Solution, Benefits, Proof, Credibility, and Action. It follows a logical flow to capture attention, address the problem, present the solution and its benefits, offer proof and credibility, and conclude with a call to action. This is great for sales pages.

    Attention: Clean your house without getting tired.

    Problem: Most vacuums are heavy, have a big cord, and make a lot of noise.

    Solution: The Dyson Digital Slim Vacuum is lightweight, cordless, and you can still listen to a podcast because it's so quiet.

    Benefits: It can clean your whole house on one charge, and be lifted or taken anywhere unlike traditional heavy vacuums.

    Proof: Anyone can lift this vacuum with no problem. Try THAT on a traditional vacuum!
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    Credibility: We have 10,000+ ️ ratings on Amazon.

    Action: Go to Amazon and buy the Dyson Digital Slim Vacuum 

     

    #11.) 4U's: Urgent, Unique, Ultra-specific, Useful

    This formula emphasizes crafting copy that conveys a sense of urgency, highlights unique selling points, provides specific details, and offers useful information to the reader.

    Urgent: Our Black Friday Sale ends TONIGHT at 11:59pm.

    Unique: We're giving you 75% off the best selling rug in the world.

    Ultra-specific: If you buy our Abstract Woven Rug today, you'll get 75% off. 
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    Useful: This is the best selling rug we've ever had, and also the most durable. Just throw it in the washer and it comes out like brand new. Buy it now at an insane 75% off discount, only a few hours left!

    #12.) APP Formula: Agree, Promise, Preview

    This formula aims to establish agreement with the reader, make a promise or offer a benefit, and then provide a preview of what they can expect or experience.

    #13.) FOMO: Fear of Missing Out

    This technique leverages the fear of missing out on something valuable or exclusive. It emphasizes limited-time offers, scarcity, or unique opportunities to compel readers to take immediate action.

    It's Thanksgiving, and we're thankful for YOU, so for one-day only enjoy 40% off our entire site. 

    Any Category.
    Any Product.
    Any Item.

    It's ALL 40% off for the new few hours.

    This deal expires tonight, so hop on this deal immediately, this offer will not come back:
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    Don't miss this deal!

    #14.) PSR: Problem, Solution, Result

    This formula begins by identifying a problem the reader faces, presents a solution that solves the problem, and highlights the positive results or outcomes they can achieve by using the product or service.

    Problem: Your wallet is a big fat cow bulking up the back of your pants.

    Solution: Get a slim wallet.

    Result: Less junk in the trunk to carry, quick access, looks great.
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    #15.) 4 Ps of Persuasion

    This formula focuses on four key elements: Problem, Promise, Proof, and Push. It addresses the reader's problem, makes a compelling promise, offers proof or evidence to support the claims, and concludes with a strong push to take action.

    Problem: Do your suits fit like a crappy Halloween costume that's way too big?

    Promise: We can make you an awesome suit that fits perfectly and make you look awesome, like this:
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    Proof: Checkout our 10,000+ before/after pics on our site of guys going from baggy-to-braggy with our suits.

    Push: Go to our website and select your normal suit size and we'll send you a well-tailored suit.

     

    #16.) STAR: Situation, Task, Action, Result

    This formula is often used in case studies or testimonials. It presents the situation or problem, describes the task or challenge, explains the action taken to overcome it, and highlights the positive result achieved.

    Situation: You have no idea what to get your kid as a gift this year.

    Task: You can search around random social media list ideas if you want.

    Action: But the answer to your kids prayers this year is a big ole' box of Crayons!
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    Result: Your kid will be so happy with this box of Crayons, and will be able to unleash their imagination and develop their motor skills on the page!

     

    #17.) PASTOR Formula: Pain, Agitate, Solution, Testimonial, Offer, Response

    This formula starts by addressing the reader's pain points, agitates the problem to increase its significance, provides a solution, includes a testimonial or social proof, presents an offer, and encourages a response or action.

    Pain: Do you login to 7 different social networks and have to manage each?

    Agitate: All you want to do is market your business, but now you have to be on Instagram, TikTok and YouTube all day to manage interactions.

    Solution: Try HeroPost instead, and manage all your social media from one place.
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    Testimonial: "We login to ONE place to answer comments across all 7 social media platforms we manage."

    Offer: Get a Lifetime Plan right now for $197 only. Offer expires tomorrow.

    Response: Respond "YES" to this email if you want us to send you the offer.

    #18.) FAPE: Feature, Advantage, Proof, Evidence

    This formula breaks down the copy into four parts. It starts by highlighting the features of the product or service, explains the advantages or benefits derived from those features, provides proof or evidence to back up the claims, and supports it with further evidence.

    Feature: One of the cheapest ways to transform your brick house to a modern look is painting White with Black trim around windows.

    Advantage: This updates your house to a "modern" style popular in new custom houses.

    Proof: We've painted hundreds of houses with lasting results.

    Evidence: You can see hundreds of happy customer results here:
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    #19.) Download all these formulas



    • Keep them in your own files. • Share with your colleagues. • Download PDF, Word, Doc.

    Hope you enjoyed and learned from this post!
    Sincerely,
    Neville Medhora

     

    This Book Will Teach You How To Write Better

    A copywriting guide to leave by your desk.

    The information in this book has turned keystrokes from my fingers into millions of dollars in sales.

    This is an incredibly short book (about 54 pages) that you can read in one sitting. If this book gives you even one tip that increases the performance of your writing....(and keep in mind, writing is a skill you will keep your whole life)....then this will be a fantastic investment for yourself.

    I invite you to spend 45 minutes with me reading this book.

    STEP 1.) Grab a beverage of your choice. I prefer a beer or tea when reading.
     
    STEP 2.) Grab a notepad and pen before starting (for notes)

    STEP 3.) Find a very comfortable place to sit and read this book.

    STEP 4.) Begin absorbing these mind-hacks and formulas laid out in the book....and apply them to your own writing.

    STEP 5.)

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    Running An 8-Income Stream Copywriting Business (How I do it)

    Watch the video: 

     

    Listen Here: 

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    I get a lot of questions (especially from non-techie people) on how I make money from what I do, specifically copywriting stuff.

    The good part about making money from the internet is there’s multiple ways to monetize something. 

    For example here's how Copywriting Course brings in income:

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    Many people think all the income comes from selling a subscription to The Copywriting Course, my training program for writers, but there’s actually 8 different income streams surrounding my copywriting content.

    Here’s the way each revenue steam works:

    #1.) Copywriting Course Subscriptions:

    It sells a training course that teaches people to become better writers with a focus on selling. Small businesses buy this to learn how to write better copy, and companies buy it for their employees to teach them to write better copy.

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    If people want help on their copy, they post it here, and myself and writers go through it and change it up for them. Then on Thursdays we get on an Office Hours call and take up to 8 questions from members, and re-do copy or talk strategy live on the call.

    So the Copywriting Course is a combination training and community…and we sell monthly and yearly subscriptions to it. 

    #2.) Swipe File:

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    A swipe file is a collection of good marketing materials you like or can learn from. Years ago I started building my own swipe file on a desktop folder. Also a phone folder. But then when I wanted to recall something like Pricing structures, I’d have to sift through the whole damn thing.

    So I created SwipeFile.com, where the whole world could access my private swipe file. I wanted to SwipeFile to be an independent site, and not necessarily related to Copywriting Course. The way it makes money is it has Google Adsense ads on it, and when someone clicks an ad, I get a portion of that revenue.

    Swipe File makes money and pays for itself, but the main goal of it is to build the worlds best swipe file.

    #3.) Selling A Book:

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    I self published a book called This Book Will Teach You To Write Better. it sells on Amazon. I originally tried to make it free, but with Amazon I have to charge some money. I made it $5, and it was designed to be a readable-in-30 minutes crash course on writing copy. Till this day it still sells and has hundreds of reviews.

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    I will say, of any form of income I make from the copywriting world, this book is the most “PASSIVE” of them all. I published it a few years ago, and have done NOTHING since. It just naturally sells on the Amazon platform, and still keeps going to this day. Honestly if I wanted to boost my passive income, I’d re-do this book and boost the price to $20/pop.

    #4.) 1-on-1 Consulting (aka, actually doing copywriting)!

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    Before I started copywriting course people would ask for help with their email newsletters, and I’d charge them by the hour, sometimes by the project depending on the client.

    I would help people re-write things on the spot, which is honestly very rewarding in many ways: I got to see insider numbers of different companies, hear what methods work and don’t work for them, get to meet really cool people, and they pay me money. All around it’s pretty awesome.

    If all I did was consult, that would make a pretty good living. I think the reason most people find other income streams though is if you ONLY consult, your time becomes quite in demand, and your business can’t function without you. In fact, YOU are the business. This is why finding other streams of income outside of just consulting is good.

    #5.) YouTube Channel:

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    I post videos about copywriting, people subscribe, and I get paid in two ways:

    1.) People decide to buy our copywriting course training. So they signup for a subscription.

    -and-

    2.) I get a percentage of ad revenue. Whenever people watch my videos, YouTube will show advertisements, and you get to share in a percentage of those. 

    You can see all my YouTube stats at CopywritingCourse.com/stats

    #6.) Amazon Affiliate:

    When people click links (like these book links), and buy a book, I get a small percentage of that. This usually isn’t HUGE revenue, but if you make a few hundred bucks a month like this, it’s usually very passive. 

    For example I wrote a post about how I setup my home office camera setup and lighting. When it started ranking in the search results, people would often buy the cameras I recommended, and if I get 4% of an $900 purchase that’s $36 I didn’t have to work too hard for.

    So this isn’t full time income, but it adds up to a nice little nugget!

    #7.) Email Sponsorships:

    Sometimes people sponsor my Friday SWIPES email and pay me for it. This email goes out to just shy of 60,000 people every week, and sponsors can promote their product in a small section of the email.

    I’m even testing out a self-serve method at copywritingcourse.com/sponsor

    #8.) Advising Companies:

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    Sometimes medium to large companies will bring me on as an adviser. This means I get equity in the company, and a certain amount of advising fees. I often help the companies develop their email newsletters out, much like with TheHustle or AppSumo, and if there’s a sale or acquisition, I might see piece of that upside too.

    So if you’ve ever wondered how someone likes me “makes money on the internet”....with respect to my copywriting activities this where the income comes from!

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    So to re-cap the 8 revenue streams are:
    #1.)
    Copywriting Course subscriptions
    #2.) SwipeFile.com ad revenue
    #3.) Book
    #4.) 1-on-1 Consulting
    #5.) YouTube Channel
    #6.) Amazon Affiliate
    #7.) Email Sponsorships
    #8.) Advising Companies


    Most of the money comes from Copywriting Course and consulting, but I would like to make the advertising income higher, including the Friday email ads, YouTube ads, and SwipeFile.com ads etc...

    Then outside of strict income streams…..the other cool thing about publishing on the internet is the OTHER opportunities it brings. For example, greater access and reach.

    Let’s say I’d like to start podcasting more, and want to invite high profile guests. Well if I have a large platform on the internet, guests are far more likely to say yes to an interview. Then I could start monetizing that method.

    Hope this sheds some light on how someone like myself makes money online. This has been a common question I get from people, and this should clear it up. 

    Maybe you could even learn a thing or two from this and start making income online on your own!

    Sincerely,
    Neville Medhora
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    P.S. Do you have any questions about these income streams? I'm happy to help! 

    How To Write A Follow Up Email That Gets Results (Plus Free Templates)

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    Most people don't realize that follow-up emails are the most important part of a sales process. Almost everyone ignores your first attempt at reaching out. The key to getting a response is a good follow-up email.

    A follow up email is super important after several events:

    • Following up after a sales call
    • Following up after a job interview
    • Following up after a client meeting
    • Following up after getting no response (but still being courteous about it)

    Below we've included templates for each which you can copy/paste for your own follow up emails!

    #1.) Follow Up Email After Getting No Response

    This is a polite reminder email that acknowledges someone is busy, and asks them to followup at a specific time.

    Subject 1: (Your company name) following up
    Subject 2: Quick follow up
    Subject 3: Checking in
    Subject 4: Bump

    Hi (first name),

    This is (your name) from (your company name) again. I am sure you are busy so I wanted to make sure my previous note didn’t get buried!

    I understand you have tremendous demands on your time. But I wanted to quickly follow up. Because I think we can help you with (x).

    I would love to hop on a quick call next week to share what I have in mind for you. How does next Thursday at 2pm sound?

    Thanks,
    (your name)

     

    #2.) Follow Up Saying "We Work With Top Competitors"

    This email template gives the person an idea that you're working with some of their top competitors, so it might be helpful to take another look at your offering. 

    This is slightly more aggressive, but works well. This template has scored deals with Fortune 500 companies.

    Subject 1: [Just reply to initial email, no new subject line]

    Hey (first name),

    I am sure you get hundreds of emails a day but I wanted to follow up. Because I think (your company name) can help (their company name) in some interesting ways.

    We already work with some of your top competitors (x,y,z). And I think we could do something similar for you.

    Do you have a few minutes to chat next week?

    If not, no response needed.
    Best,
    (your name)

     

    #3.) Send them useful tools discussed on the call.

    Subject Line 1: Stuff from call
    Subject Line 2: The links you wanted
    Subject Line 3: Call notes
    Subject Line 4: All the links you liked

    Awesome meeting today.  We talked about a few tools that might help, here they are.

    • Sumo - Add email collection to your site like we talked about.
    • SwipeFile - A publicly updated swipe file so you don't have to keep one.
    • Copywriting Course - That training program for the marketing team to go through.

    Talk again soon!
    [Name] - 555.555.5555

     

    #4.) Send them materials they can share around the office

    If you're selling to large companies, often times you'll have one person who will be your "product champion" within the company. Arm this person with some helpful materials they can show their colleagues to convince them to use your product. This template gives them "ammo" to share around the office.

    Subject 1: Slide deck to print
    Subject 2: Slides for the office
    Subject 3: SEO report for [Website]
    Subject 4: Analysis of [Website] complete (results attached)

    Hey Jill,

    It was great meeting this afternoon.

    1.) Here's some handy Meeting Request Email Templates you can print and send to anyone in the department.

    2.) I've attached the full slide deck in a PowerPoint to this email.

    3.) I've also attached the full custom SEO report on your website. Feel free to share this around the team.

    Talk soon,
    [Name] - 555.555.5555

     

    #5.) Follow up after a phone call to check in

    Subject 1: Quick check in
    Subject 2: Can I answer any questions?
    Subject 3: Setting up a call
    Subject 4: Any secondary Q’s?

    Hi [Name],

    Just wanted to check in with you - it’s been 2 weeks since our phone call about _____. Do you have any questions or concerns I can help with?

    Feel free to reply to this email or call my personal number: [Phone].

    Looking forward to hearing back from you!
    Best regards,
    [Name]

     

    #6.) Follow up email to book a call after a free trial

    Subject 1: Are you enjoying your free trial with [Company]?
    Subject 2: Can I answer any questions?
    Subject 3: Setting up a call
    Subject 4: Can I help you with your goals?

    Hey [First Name],

    Thanks again for signing up for a free trial with [Company].

    Do you have 15 minutes to chat about your goals?

    Here's a link to my calendar so you can find a time that works best for you: https://calendly.com/your-link

    Looking forward to connecting!
    [Name], [Company]

    P.S. On the call I'm happy to answer any questions you have about the program, and maybe even further guide you to more resources.

     

    #7.) Follow-up email after online quiz but didn't book a call

    Subject 1: Feedback after your ____ quiz?
    Subject 2: Can I answer any questions?
    Subject 3: I'd love to help
    Subject 4: Quick quiz on ____?

    Hi [Name],

    I noticed that you took our ____ quiz but then didn't follow up with a free call from our rep.

    Mind if I ask why you didn't want the call?

    Can I answer any specific questions for you here via email instead?
    Sincerely,
    Neville Medhora

     

    #8.) Show you are right for the job with an outline

    Go above-and-beyond by sending them a custom outline of what you can help with. This shows you were paying attention and know your stuff.

    Subject Line 1: Outline of [Company] improvements
    Subject Line 2: [Company] improvements I can make
    Subject Line 3: Things I can fix ASAP
    Subject Line 4: Things to improve on [Company]

    Hey [First Name], it was great meeting!

    I've included a small one-page document outlining the immediate problems I saw. I would love to help the team fix all of these!

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    Sincerely,
    [Name] - 555.555.5555

     

    #9.) Let them know you are interested and ready

    Subject Line 1: Great interview!
    Subject Line 2: Would love to join the team
    Subject Line 3: [Company] + [Name] = ❤️
    Subject Line 4: Would be honored to join

    This is just a quick followup email that can help solidify what happened in your interview. It also lets them know you're interested and ready to move on the opportunity.

    Hi Linda,

    It was fantastic interviewing yesterday! Would love to join the awesome team, and have a bunch of great ideas and work to contribute.

    If there are any updates on the hiring process, please let me know. Look forward to speaking with you soon!

    Sincerely,
    Neville Medhora
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    #10.) Give a quick re-cap of what (and when) the next things are happening

    Subject Line 1: Quick re-cap for you
    Subject Line 2: Re-cap of [Date] meeting
    Subject Line 3: Meeting Outline
    Subject Line 4: Outline of [Meeting Name]

    Hey Bill, awesome meeting today. Just a quick re-cap of what's happening next:

    • July 20th: I'll send you the full set of image deliverables.
    • July 25th: Get back to me with any changes your team has.
    • July 31st: We'll have the final revisions done.

    If you need anything before then just let me know. Otherwise I'll see you and the team at the all-hands-on-deck meeting in August!

    [Name] - [Phone]

     

    #11.) Share the meeting file assets

    Another thing you can do is send a helpful set of notes from the meeting, or share any materials that were involved. Make sure to write "No response needed" so they don't feel obligated to reply.

    Subject Line 1: Meeting assets
    Subject Line 2: Meeting slides, reports, and PDF
    Subject Line 3: PDF & Slides from [Meeting Name]
    Subject Line 4: Attached: Meeting assets

    Hey Growth Hacker Team,

    Here's all the notes and goodies that were on the call:

    - The slides: [link]
    - The July SEO report: [link]
    - PDF version of the notes Aaron took: [link]

    I've also attached these all in our Slack channel so we can access them later. No response needed.

    Sincerely,
    [Name]

     

    #12.) Follow up on a quote they requested

    Subject 1: Quote you requested
    Subject 2: Quote for [Project]
    Subject 3: Can’t wait to work with you
    Subject 4: Touching base on the quote you asked for

    Hi [NAME],

    I just wanted to make sure that you received the quote I sent last week. Let me know that you got it and if you had any questions.

    I look forward to working with you,
    [NAME]

    P.S. I’ve reattached the quote in this email.

     

    #13.) Tell them what you need as a follow up after a call

    Subject 1: I need a few things to get started
    Subject 2: What I need from you
    Subject 3: Re-cap of items needed to start
    Subject 4: A few things missing before I can get started

    Hey [Name],

    We got a lot done in yesterday’s meeting.

    Just a reminder that here are a few things that I will need from you to get started on your project:

    - Your logo
    - PMS color scheme numbers
    - Images of your team
    - Deposit of $3,000. Pay here [link].

    Once I have everything I’ll have a first draft back to you in 3 days.

    I’m really excited about this project and thing you are going to love what I come up with.

    Talk to you soon,

    [Name]

     

    #14.) Follow Up Email Template after a consulting session

    Subject 1: Nice meeting you
    Subject 2: Great session today!
    Subject 3: Feedback on session today?
    Subject 4: Review of our session

    Hey [Name],

    It was nice meeting with you yesterday! Hope what we discussed was helpful as you move forward.

    Linked here is a 1-question feedback form. Any feedback you'd like to share is much appreciated, even if negative!

    Sincerely,
    Your Name

    P.S. If you want to book additional sessions, there's a discount code waiting for you after you complete the form. Would love to work with you again.

     

    #15.) Cut straight to the point and ask the next step

    Let's say you do a couple of calls with a person/company, and they ghost on you.  Here's a simple email to get their attention and cuts straight to the point.

    This should only be used as a last resort, as this email is a bit passive aggressive!

    Subject Line 1: Quick followup?
    Subject Line 2: Next step to take?
    Subject Line 3: Let me know
    Subject Line 4: Hey [Name], next step?

    Hey Erica, quick followup.

    I'm not sure what our next step is. Let me know course of action makes sense (if any).

    Thanks for your response.
    [Name] - [Phone]

     

    #16.) "Closing Account" follow up email

    Here's a classic email for following up after getting no response from a client. It says you're closing their account and you need their permission. This one works great!

    Subject Lines 1: Closing your file?
    Subject Lines 2: Your file will be closed.
    Subject Lines 3: Closing your account.
    Subject Lines 4: Close out this account?

    Hey Niles,

    We are in the process of closing files for the month. Typically when I haven’t heard back from someone it means they’re either really busy or aren’t interested.

    If you aren’t interested, do I have your permission to close your file?

    If you’re still interested, what do you recommend as a next step?

    Thanks for your help.
    [Name]

     

    #17.) Ask for a one word reply to indicate interest

    This is a low-commitment email that just allows them to respond back with one word. I've seen in B2B that sometimes ultra-short and informal emails will get a reply quickly.

    Hey Ryan, can you reply back to this email with a quick "yay" or "nay" on moving forward with this?

    Either is great, just wanted to be sure!
    [Name]

     

    #18.) Following up if the client didn't do something yet

    Subject 1: Checkin' up
    Subject 2: Reminder [item They Need To Send You]
    Subject 3: Bump!
    Subject 4: 👉🏼 Reminder 👈🏼

    Hey [First Name], can you bump this over to me real quick?

    [Item They Need To Send You]
    Thank you!!
    [Name]

     

    #19.) Following up on prospective client after ghosting

    Subject 1: Checking in about [Project]
    Subject 2: Are we still on?
    Subject 3: Do you still want [Prospect Goal]?
    Subject 4: Can we get started?

    Hey [Ghoster],

    Last week we chatted about how I could help you [Main Goal They Wanted To Accomplish] so that you could [Main Benefit They Were Looking To Achieve].

    I haven’t heard back from you, and my schedule is filling up for [Month].

    Is this still something you'd like done?
    [Name]

     

    #20.) Following up on client after getting ghosted using scarcity

    Subject 1: Can I schedule you in?
    Subject 2: Still looking?
    Subject 3: Last step!
    Subject 4: Almost done here 🙂

    Hey [Ghoster],

    Are you still looking to [Prospect’s Main Goal]?

    I only have one open slot left in my schedule this month. Do you want it?

    Let me know if and we can get started.
    Thanks!
    [NAME]

     

    #21.) Get a hard yes/no on a lead that's gone cold

    Subject 1: ___ project - still interested?
    Subject 2: Came across these, thought they'd help
    Subject 3: Resources + a quick win for you
    Subject 4: Yes / No ?

    Hi [Name],

    I’ve been thinking about our conversation, especially the issues around ______.

    I put together a couple of resources that might help you with the project, if/when you decide to move forward with it.

    (Links to 2 relevant articles about the issue)

    With that in mind, I think your quickest win would be to start with ____.

    If you’d still like to work on this project together, reply to this email and we can work out the details as discussed.

    If not - that’s totally fine, but please let me know. I only take on a few clients per month and I’m saving you a slot.

    Thanks!
    [Name]

     

    #22.) Follow up on a proposal you sent in and ask for constructive criticism.

    Subject 1: Any feedback?
    Subject 2: Are you still interested?
    Subject 3: Is [project] still a go?
    Subject 4: Do you need anything else?

    Hi [Name],

    I just submitted a proposal for [PROJECT], and I figured this was a great time to reach out and connect with you.

    If you’ve got time for a quick 15-20 minute call, I’d like to learn a little more about your side of the process, especially:

    2-3 points that take a good proposal and make it a great one;

    Any red flags you look for that might immediately disqualify a proposal;

    Any specific extras I can send to improve my proposal. I’ve got case studies, presentations, and other research/resources I can forward to you if you’d like.

    I’m sure your department has just been hit with a wave of submissions, so I understand if you’re busy - I just want to put together the best package possible.

    If you have the time, here’s a link to my scheduler: [LINK]

    Many thanks!
    [Name]

     

    #23.) Feedback as to why they didn't buy

    Subject 1: Can I get your feedback?
    Subject 2: You forgot something in your cart.
    Subject 3: Is our site working properly
    Subject 4: Why didn't you buy?

    Hi [Name],

    I noticed you added ___ to your cart but ended up not buying it.

    That's totally fine, but would you mind telling me what made you change your mind? Of if there was some sort of technical glitch?

    I really believe in what I've made here and I want to make sure the site is working properly!

    Thanks!
    [Name]

     

    #24.) Abandoned cart follow-up email for course

    Subject 1: Any questions about our program?
    Subject 2: Any questions about our course?
    Subject 3: Want me to give you a call?
    Subject 4: Can I call you?

    Hi [Name]

    I noticed you added our course to your cart but didn't purchase.

    Can I help answer any questions?

    If you're still on the fence, I might be able to help you figure out if this is the right choice for you - just reply to this email with your phone number and I'll give you a call.

    Regards,
    [Name]

     

    #25.) This is an email designed to get a customer to upgrade to a higher plan

    Subject 1: upgrade?
    Subject 2: New plan for right now?
    Subject 3: Hey ____, can we bump you up plans?
    Subject 3: Upgrading your account?

    Hi [Name]

    I'm aware you're wrapping up the program on Friday, but then you'll have to wait 2 weeks until the 12-week program starts.

    I REALLY want you to maintain your momentum, so...

    I'd like to offer you personal training for those 2 weeks. This is something I'd usually charge $xxxx for, but it'd be 100% free for you.

    Can I upgrade your plan?
    [Name]

     

    #26.) This email was written to follow up with trade show contacts that signed up for a free sample product.

    Subject 1: Your free tape sample
    Subject 2: Nice meeting you at the trade show
    Subject 3: The free floor marking tape you requested
    Subject 4: Where should I send your free sample?

    Hi [Name]!

    Great talking with you at our booth. We discussed sending you a sample box of our ______, could you send over the shipping address?

    This box will include:
    • [item 1]
    • [item 2]
    • [item 3]

    This is 100% no charge, and our way of proving our stuff is the best.

    Just reply with your shipping address and I'll send it over!
    Sincerely,
    [Name]

     

    #27.) Checking in with past clients close to their warranty expiring

    Subject 1: Check your _____ before the warranty expires
    Subject 2: Have you checked your _____ warranty?
    Subject 3: Your warranty is ending soon
    Subject 4: Warranty expiring 4/23

    Hi [Name]!

    [Name] here from _______ - we're the guys who did _____ work for you back in [Date].

    I'm sending this to you because according to our records, you've got part of your __________'s warranty ending this year.

    It's a good idea to inspect the _____ and make sure that *if* anything's wrong with it, you take care of the problem while the warranty is still valid. Waiting until after it expires could mean thousands of dollars in extra costs that you can easily avoid.

    If you'd like us to come out and inspect your ______, just hit reply and let me know. It's a 2 hour process and we can be out there as early as next week.

    All the best!
    [Name]

     

    #28.) Follow Up To "No Response" With a "Refresher" Link"

    Subject 1: quick follow up
    Subject 2: quick check in
    Subject 3: Did you see my last note?
    Subject 4: following up on my previous message

    This is a great way to "refresh" someone's mind about what you had initially emailed them. This templates has worked well in B2B sales many times.

    Hey (first name),

    Curious to hear your thoughts on the email I sent you on Monday?

    I reached out because I am confident that we can work together on (x).

    Here is a quick refresher on what we do (link to your website).

    Mind if I send over a calendar invite for this Friday at 11:00am?

    Hope to chat soon,
    (your name)

     

    Above are a ton of follow up templates for you to use, here's some elements 

     

    A.) Acknowledge how busy they are (even if they aren’t busy)

    Show an understanding of how extremely busy these individuals are. They probably don’t even remember the first email you sent them. Here's an example:

    Hey Jim, 

    I am sure you are extremely busy so I wanted to make sure my previous email didn’t get overlooked.

     

    B.) Make it super easy to reply

    List out a number of likely responses for them and ask them to just reply with the number that resonates most. Here's an example:

    Hi Jill,

    Checking in here again. Curious if?:

    1. You are not interested
    2. You are interested but not right now
    3. You are not the right person to connect with
    4. Something else?

     

    C.) Use Specific Facts:

    By quoting actual numbers, one of them might capture the attention. Here's an example:

    Hey Aaron, still debating if we're worth it?

    • 22,374 project managers around the world using us everyday.
    • 2,300 job applications get filled per day.
    • 98.5% of our customers re-use us when they need new hires.

    Hopefully we get a new PM on board named Aaron!

     

    D.) Use "Scarcity" in your email

    Make them think the deal is going away, or they are missing out. Show them what they'll miss out on. Example:

    Hey Reena,

    We've got 10 engineers ready to go this quarter, but if we don't close this deal by next week the company is allocating them to another project. Let me know by Friday if this is a solid go, or we'll pass for now and contact you next year.

     

    E.) Show some extreme honesty and compromise:

    Show some real vulnerability and honesty and compromise a little.

    Hey Laura, being completely honest here: We're willing to go low as $125,000/yr, but lower than that is not profitable for us.

    Let me know this week and I can lock in that price, otherwise the PM told me we're closing out this account.

     

    F.) Question Their Power 😬:

    I do not condone using this except in rare situations! This method might burn bridges, so beware. Here's an example:

    Hey Jim, seems like we might be asking the wrong department about this, can you forward me to the person/department who can make this happen?

     

    G.) Realize they still may not respond:

    End your follow up email mentioning that you know there is a chance they still won’t respond. And you will be surprised by how just simply mentioning this will increase your response rates.

    Hey Beth,

    I understand you have tremendous demands on your time. So if you are too busy to respond, no problem. But even if you could reply with a sentence or two, it would mean a lot to me.

     

    Sincerely,
    Neville Medhora - Email Copywriter

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    P.S. If you need your follow up emails reviewed, join Copywriting Course and have them improved by professional writers. 

     

    I posted "shorts" videos for a month straight, here's what happened

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    I started doing those short form clip videos across different social platforms:
    Instagram Reels 
    YouTube Shorts
    TikTok
    LinkedIn

    I wrote this post just to see if this is worth continuing. 

    Here's the results of each platform after 1 month:

    #1.) Instagram Reels

    Instagram has seemingly been the best performing platform so far. 

    Here's some stats:

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    Overall my biggest "hits" from this experiment were on Instagram. Some of the videos really popped off, the top one getting 600,000+ views.

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    #2.) YouTube Shorts

    I believe of all the social platforms, YouTube view counts are probably the most honest.

    YouTube Shorts definitely boosted view numbers on my channel:image.png

     

    ...however my lack of posting long form video hindered subscriber growth 😞image.png

     

    Overall I'd say the YouTube Shorts videos have helped the channel get more views and activity but not subscriber growth without long form content being added:

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    #3.) TikTok Videos

    TikTok has been "meh" performing so far, although definitely doing something. 

    I started with almost no followers, now have almost 2,000....so that's something. 

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    #4.) LinkedIn

    LinkedIn was kind of a long shot here because it's not known as a video platform, but it's doing decent.

    One benefit of LinkedIn is that it brings in a totally different audience than other social platforms. 

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    Overall in 1 month the Shorts videos reaches 1m+ accounts, so overall that seems like a win.

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    So...are these short form clips worth it??

    I think if you're gonna make it a regular part of your content strategy, then yes. 

    I notice myself consuming A LOT of these short form videos in my everyday life, and sometimes even preferring them over long form. 

    I think the simple winning strategy is this:
    Make a ton of long-form content, then have someone chop it up into short-form content.

    Sincerely, 
    Neville Medhora: InstagramYouTubeTikTokLinkedIn

     

    P.S.
    Did YOU watch any of these videos?
    Did you like them?
    Let me know!

    Introduction Email Templates (Introduce Two People Over Email)

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    Let's say you're trying to introduce some folks over email. Here's some helpful templates and examples you can copy.  Jump to the end for even more lines to introduce people.

     

    #1.) Introducing two people who can work with each other:

    Subject 1: [PERSON 1] + [PERSON 2] Introduction Request
    Subject 2: [PERSON 1] meet [PERSON 2]
    Subject 3: You two should meet!

    Hey [PERSON 1] and [PERSON 2], You two should definitely meet and talk about stuff. You're a perfect fit:

    [PERSON 1]: Is amazing with SEO and anything website related. Phone: 222-222-2222 | Email: person1@person1.com

    [PERSON 2]: Is looking for someone who is amazing at SEO! Phone number: 555-555-5555 | Email: person2@person2.com

    I'll let you two take it from here!

    Sincerely,
    [Your Name]

    #2.) This is a casual introduction for two friends who may get along:

    Subject 1: Hey [PERSON 1], meet [PERSON 2]
    Subject 2: In town....meet up?
    Subject 3: [PERSON 1] & [PERSON 2] sittin' in a tree.....

    Hey you two goofballs!

    [PERSON 1] is going to be in San Francisco this weekend, and he runs an awesome company.

    [PERSON 2] is my go-to person in San Francisco that organizes all the tech events. He knows everyone, and am pretty sure he's throwing an event this week.

    [PERSON 1] you should join!! I'll let you two take over from here.

    [PERSON 1]: email@email.com, 333-333-3333, Facebook Profile. [PERSON 2]: email@email.com, 666-666-6666, Facebook Profile.

    Hope you two have fun 🙂
    [Your Name]

    #3.) This is a formal introduction for work acquaintances:

    Subject 1: Introduction to [PERSON 1] and [PERSON 2]
    Subject 2: Job search meeting.
    Subject 3: [PERSON 1] & [PERSON 2] sittin' in a tree.....

    Hi [PERSON 1],

    Thanks so much for agreeing to talk to [PERSON 2] about her job search and what it's like to be in your field. I've copied her on this email so you can connect directly for short phone call.

    [PERSON 2], as I mentioned, [PERSON 1] is the best lawyer I know, and is a true expert in the industry. [PERSON 1] will tell you what the work life really is like.

    I’ll let you two take it from here.

    Best,
    [Your Name]

    #4.) This is a fun introduction that combines personal and business:

    Subject 1: [PERSON 2] has the cutest dog!
    Subject 2: [PERSON 1] <--> [PERSON 2]
    Subject 3: [PERSON 1] + [PERSON 2] = Best Buds!

    Dear [PERSON 1], [PERSON 2] has the cutest dog ever....check him out!

    Donnie Dog

    That's Donnie. He's awesome.

    [PERSON 1], [PERSON 2], and Donnie should meet up for a quick coffee this weekend. You all live in Hayes Valley, and can discuss working together on the new project!

    CONTACT INFO:
    [PERSON 1]: email@email.com, 333-333-3333, Facebook Profile.

    [PERSON 2]: email@email.com, 666-666-6666, Facebook Profile.

    Donnie The Dog: bark@puppies.com.

    Sincerely,
    [Your Name]

    #5.) This is a real email that was sent to introduce Susan to Ralph.

    Subject: Susan, Meet Ralph; Ralph, Meet Susan

    I am introducing you two because I think you would enjoy meeting and sharing your knowledge.

    Susan, Ralph is an archivist in our San Francisco office. He moved there from Seattle four years ago and can share lots of insights about the SF team and the city. He is a foodie and a baseball junkie.

    Ralph, Susan moves from Portland to SF next month. She has been with us seven years as a database expert. I bet she can share wisdom to help with your project. Susan is excited about her move into the big leagues of the company and baseball. Go Giants!

    You now have each other’s addresses.

    You can take it from here.
    [Your Name]

    #6.) This is an email sent to introduce Marta and Jeff:

    Subject: Introducing You Two for Networking

    Hi, Marta and Jeff. I’m delighted to introduce you.

    Marta, I met Jeff about a year ago and was struck by his passion for collaboration, mediation, and leadership; his wide breadth of knowledge for a young man, and his engaging demeanor. Jeff is a delight to get to know. Jeff, I have known Marta for many years. She is a gifted collaborator, an incisive thinker, and a wonderful person who is passionate and active in social justice issues.

    Much of her work experience has involved mediating on environmental issues. I believe meeting would be a rich experience for you both, and I hope you will connect soon.

    [Your Name]

    #7.) This is a real email that was sent to introduce Bob and Janice:

    Subject: Bob, Meet Janice. 

    Dear Bob,

    I'm writing to introduce you to Janice.

    I know Janice through the Brandon Theater Group, where, as you know, I am the technical director. Janice and I have worked together on several local theater projects. She is a terrific stage manager with over 10 years of experience.

    Janice is interested in relocating to the San Francisco area in the near future and would appreciate any recommendations you could offer her for conducting a job search for a theater position and any help you can provide with the logistics of relocating to California.

    I've attached her resume for your review and you can contact her at janicedolan@email.com or 555-555-5555. Thank you in advance for any assistance you can provide.

    Sincerely,
    [Your Name]

    #8.) Super Short And To The Point:

    Subject 1: You two are awesome
    Subject 2: Hey [Person 1] and [Person 2]!
    Subject 3: Ya’ll should meet
    Subject 4: [Person 1] + [Person 2]

    Hey [Person 1] and [Person 2],

    I really think you both should meet! [Person 1]: Chip designer for Apple.

    [Person 2]: Doing super interesting research in semiconductors.

    I’ll let ya’ll take it from here!

    Sincerely,
    [Name]

    #9.) Funny And Lighthearted Email Introduction:

    Subject 1: [Person 1] + [Person 2] = Awesome
    Subject 2: Hey you two lovebirds...
    Subject 3: Hey, I’m matching you two up!
    Subject 4: [Person 1] 😛 [Person 2]

    Hey [Person 1] and [Person 2] you two should definitely meet, but I’m too lazy to get ya’ll in the same room so we’re doing this over email!

    [Person 1]: [Cool fact about Person 1]. Phone: 333-333-3333
    [Person 2]: [Cool fact about Person 2]. Phone: 444-444-4444

    You can both setup a time to meet on your own (once again, I’m lazy) 😛

    Sincerely,
    [Name]

    #10.) "I Had A Dream" Intro:

    Subject 1: I had a dream about you last night
    Subject 2: The craziest thing happened in my dream
    Subject 3: We talked and it gave me a nightmare
    Subject 4: Dreamed about ya’ll!

    And you were both in it.

    I was having lunch with [Person 1] and they showed me [Problem Person #1 has] and I thought [Person 2] could help. That was when I realized that I have not introduced you two yet.

    Now that you have met in my dreams it is time for you two to connect in real life.

    Talk to you later,
    [Name]

    #11.) Re-Connecting Email:

    Subject 1: Re-introduction
    Subject 2: [Person 1] was asking about you
    Subject 3: Remember [Person 1]
    Subject 4: Intro!

    I was talking to [Person 1] the other day and they asked about you.

    Here is a quick email to help you two reconnect. Sincerely,

    [Name]
    P.S. Don’t reply with anything bad about [Person 1] I’ve CC’d them on this email so that you have each other’s contact 😛

    #12.) Collaboration For Work Introduction:

    Subject 1: Re-connecting, and more connecting
    Subject 2: Interesting project for ___ alumni
    Subject 3: Do you two know each other?
    Subject 4: Great opportunity for collab
    Subject 5: [Role 1] + [Role 2] project available

    Hey [Person 1] and [Person 2],

    Long time no talk - since the conference in 2018, to be precise.

    I’m not sure if the two of you connected back then, but I’ve just been offered a ____ project and immediately thought of both of you. I’m not going to be able to take the project on, but I wanted to refer it to someone (or someoneS) I know. I’ve seen both of you posting great stuff on ____(platform) and thought you’d be great collaborators.

    [Person 1], a custom Shopify theme and support would be fantastic here…

    [Person 2], I loved the copywriting I’ve seen from you. A little humor would be great for this client.

    Let me know what you both think - it’d be great for ___ (conference name) alumni to come together for this. (Plus the $’s not bad either) Looking forward to hearing back from you!

    Speak soon.
    [Name]

    #13.) Matchmaking Introduction Email:

    Subject 1: Matchmaking
    Subject 2: The intro I promised...
    Subject 3: You + You = hell yeah
    Subject 4: Y’all are perfect for each other

    Alright fellas,

    I’ve been talking to both of you about...both of you, for a while. I think it’s time to take the relationship to the next level and let you two actually connect.

    Ali, Bill already knows you’re the ____ of ___. He’s looking for _____. Bill, I already told Ali about your background as a _____. He’s looking for ___.

    So, you’re obviously a good fit for ____ project. Plus, you’re both Steelers fans 🙂

    I’m going to remove myself from the conversation but I’m interested to hear how you guys get along.

    Good luck!
    [Name]

    #14.) Casual And Personal Introduction:

    Subject 1: Hey Janice
    Subject 2: I have someone you should meet
    Subject 3: I have a cool connection for you
    Subject 4: Can I introduce you to a cool client of mine?

    Hey [Person 1],
    Long time, no talk!

    How’re the kiddos doing? Speaking of kiddos, I’m working with an interesting client I think you should meet. She’s s a daycare provider who [something cool she’s doing] and is looking for [something Janice does].

    Mind if I connect you two?

    Have a great weekend,

    [Name]

    P.S. Happy Mother’s Day!

    #15.) Casually Introducing Two Cool People:

    Subject 1: Unstoppable duo?
    Subject 2: You should meet this guy
    Subject 3: Got a connection for you (you’re welcome)
    Subject 4: Bill + Bob = the match made in heaven

    Hey Bill and Bob,

    You are both cool dudes, and I think you should meet.

    Bill, Bob is a ___ wizard. Bob,
    Bill is THE best ___ I’ve ever had the pleasure of meeting.
    Together, you’d be unstoppable.

    [Contact Info]

    Alrighty then, I’ll leave you two to it. Giterdone.
    [Name]

    #16.) Twitter Intro

    Build in Public is 🔥.

    Let's try Introduce in Public:
    @jayclouse and @nevmed: you should meet and talk about community. 

    @nevmed and @robfitz: you should meet and talk about useful book writing.
     
    @robfitz and @AdrienneNakohl: you should meet and talk about personas & journeys

    Full List Introduction Templates:

     

    Reasons to introduce people, and some helpful lines:

    • “You two should meet and discuss community”
    • “You two should connect on Bob’s Podcast”
    • “You two should chat about that new SaaS tool you were each raving about”
    • “You two should meet because you both love Copywriting”
    • “You two should connect since you both live in Portland”
    • “You two should chat over coffee since you will both be at the X Conference next week”
    • “Wanted to loop in Brian because he was just mentioning that he was interested in exploring X service. And that’s exactly what Suzanne (cc’ed) just reached out to me about”
    • “You two could form a great partnership since you are both in X industry”
    • “Adding Jeremy to this email. His area of expertise is X and I think he would love to hear more about your offer”
    • “You two should hop on a quick zoom call to see if you could refer some leads to each other”
     

    How to introduce Do’s:

    • Keep it super short and sweet.
    • Mention why you think they should meet.
    • Include what they could talk about.
    • Compliment each of them.
    • Be willing to join them on the first call/meet up if they want.
    • Show that you have done your homework on both of them.
    • Point out each person’s area of expertise.
    • Include their LinkedIn profile for additional context.
    • Call out a recent big win for one of the people you are introducing to peak the other person’s interest.
    • Give them an easy out if they are too busy.
     

    How to introduce Don’ts:

    • Decide that they have to work together. Let them make that decision after the meeting.
    • Schedule the actual call for them. They may not be ready to talk immediately.
    • Provide a full blueprint of the exact conversation they should have. Some conversations can go down a completely different path than you expected.
    • Guilt them into having a conversation if one of them isn’t interested.
    • Include all of their contact info. Let them share private contact info if they want to.
    • Make an intro just because you are doing someone a favor. Make sure it actually makes sense for them to connect.
    • Randomly introduce two people you don’t even know. Don’t act like you are doing them a favor if they don’t even know you.
    • Guarantee that they will hit it off. You don’t always know people as well as you think you do.
    • Force them to meet in person. Some people are much more comfortable emailing first.
    • Tell them they would hit it off just because they share one thing in common. Dig a little deeper to see if they have any personal similar interests.
    • Just give someone an email address and tell them to reach out. Help make a warm intro.

     

    More Email Templates & Guides:

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    B2B Cold Email Templates
    Cold Email Like A Boss
    Email List Ideas (and Generator)
    Cold Email Conversion Calculator
    Email Open Rate Examples

     

    Download all of the templates on this page:

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    Classic Volkswagen Beetle Ads

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    The Volkswagen Beetle was a remarkably weird car when it came out. 

    • It was slow.
    • It was small.
    • It was gas efficient.

    It was the total opposite of all major cars of the day!

    Since they couldn't advertise the car based on speed and cool-factor, they went the total opposite and showed how cheap and reliable it was.

    Let's go through some of these Classic Volkswagen "Bug" Ads:

    #1.) "Lemon" (1960)

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    This ad makes you do a double take thinking, "why would they call their own car a lemon??"

    Turns out they go into the rigorous process used to ensure your car is not a lemon, and sell the car that way.

    This was a very popular and talked-about ad in 1960.

     

    #2.) "It isn't so" (1961)

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    This was a funny thing some VW Bug owners would do: Make it look like the car was a wind-up toy!

    Volkswagen cleverly used this to show off the Beetle's high gas mileage and low cost. This was great "Marketing Judo" which turned around a funny jab at the car into a selling point.

    #3.) “Why are the wheels crooked?” (1962)

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    This amazing Volkswagen ad has a VERY catchy headline and image that make you want to read the finer copy!

    This is a perfect example of catching the readers idea, grabbing their attention, and sending them down the "Slippery Slope" of reading.

    #4.) "If You Run Out Of Gas It's Easy To Push" (1962)

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    This ad from 1962 shows the insane 32 mile per gallon efficiency of the VW Beetle, and also hilariously shows that if you do run out of gas, it's uniquely small size makes it easy to push. 

    It also "subtley sells" the car by showing how low maintenance it is, so that the driver might "forget about gas stations" since they visit them so infrequently!

    #5.) "A hole in the roof" (1963)

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    This VW Beetle ad harps on the fact the car has barely any expensive options, so for the list price of $1,595 you could get pretty much the entire package....no crazy expensive extra options needed!

    #6.) "Sooner or Later" (1964)

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    Oof....this ad will likely not hack it today, but it was meant to display how easily parts on the Volkswagen Beetle were able to be replaced.

    #7.) "It makes your house look bigger" (1964)

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    This Volkswagen Bug ad from 1964 has a catchy headline, but gets the reader to understand that the smallness of the car is it's major benefit....it uses less gas, lower maintenance bills, barely any upkeep costs.

    #8.) "Interchangeable Parts" (1965)

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    This is a 1965 Beetle ad that cleverly demonstrated a Volkswagen Beetle has extremely interchangeable parts.

    #9.) "Keeps the Dampness Out" (1967)

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    This clever ad talks about how a Volkswagen Beetle can actually FLOAT IN WATER!

    It goes on to brag about the tight seals on the car, and how it's nearly airtight so it doesn't get damp or let moisture in.

    #10.) "Every new one comes slightly used" (1968)

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    This ad shows how each Volkswagen Beetles undergoes 16,000 inspections, is driven 3 miles, and is broken in before delivering to it's new owner.

    #11.) "It's ugly but it gets you there" (1969)

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    Two weeks after the first lunar excursion modules landed on the Moon, Volkswagen promoted their notoriously "ugly" VW Beetle with this ad.

    It's great how much fun Volkswagen poked at themselves!

    Hope you enjoyed all these classic VW Beetle ads! 

    They are amazing pieces of advertising and imagery!

    Sincerely,
    Neville Medhora - Copywriting Course

     

     

     

    Experiment: I’m creating a Sub-Reddit Community to promote Sneaker Deals (Have 5,000 now)

    Hi my name is Steve. I’m a bit of a sneakerhead, and I wanted to build out an email list of people to send sneaker deals I find. Why not try to make money doing something I love & know alot about.

    I tried a couple of different platforms to build an audience first (Instagram, Twitter), but the one that caught the most steam is my own Sub-Reddit.

    So far I’ve been adding between 100 and 300 new subscribers per day.

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    I’m going to do an experiment where I try to hit 10,000 subscribers, and I will document my progress in the comments of this post.

     

    Follow me along the way!

    The S.W.I.P.E.S. Email (Friday January 13th, 2023)

    Swipe📁Wisdom🧠Interesting🧐Picture🖼 • Essay📄Sketch✎
    A fun email for Friday. I hope you enjoy!

    Edition: Friday, January 13th, 2023

    🎤 Listen to this email here:

    Swipe:

    I love the eye-grabbing image of this 1980 "boom box" ad, and how it focuses on one major feature of this stereo: The handle.

    It shows that by buying this stereo you can take your music anywhere (which in 1980 was pretty neat):

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    Wisdom:

    Every business in the world will completely change how they operate in the next 10 to 20 years.

    This is a huge opportunity to help them do it, or replace them.

    There's always a shiny new thing on the internet. In my lifetime:
    It used to be Digg
    It used to be Craigslist
    It used to be Del-icio-us
    It used to be Orkut
    It used to be MySpace
    It used to be Xanga
    It used to be Geocities
    It used to be Friendster
    It used to be Periscope
    It used to be Instagram Posts
    It used to be Instagram Stories
    It used to be Instagram TV
    It used to be YouTube
    It used to be Vine
    It used to be SnapChat
    It used to be Twitter
    It used to be Clubhouse
    It used to be TikTok
    It used to be Instagram Shorts
    It used to be YouTube Shorts
    It used to be BeReal It used to be........ ?

    There will always be "the next hot thing."

    The underlying commonality is all these platforms allowed to you connect with other people 🙂

    Ironically the one platform that still brings me the most sales, yet gets very little recognition: Email.

    Interesting:

    Whatever the very rich have, thanks to technology in 20 years it’s usually available to everyone.

    From 2001 to 2023:
    • Secretary → Calendly
    • Private Chauffeur → Uber
    • Vacation Homes → AirBnB
    • Consultants → UpWork → YouTube
    • Employees → Software Automation

    It'll be interesting to watch what's only available to the rich become commoditized and super cheap in 20 years:
    • Hair transplants
    • In vitro fertilization
    • Corrective vision surgery
    • Private jet access
    • Detailed medical testing
    • Virtual assistants

    What else??

    Picture:

    That's me, talking on the phone, to YOU:

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    Did you know every Wednesday and Friday I do 10 minute calls with people on my email list?

    It's my way of connecting to new people, seeing what they do, learning about them, and just chatting.

    If you want to setup a time, reply back to this email with "I WANNA CHAT!" and we'll setup a quick call.

    I started doing this sometime last year and have talked to 100+ people so far!

    Essay:

    You are judged and rewarded by your utility in life.

    This means without even thinking about it, people naturally judge you by:
    • Your looks
    • Your height
    • Your strength
    • Your intelligence
    • Your cleverness
    • Your entertainment value
    • Your loyalty
    • Your competence
    • Your wealth
    • Your social capital
    • Your manual labor
    • Your reliability
    • Your skills
    • Your experience

    Of course some of these qualities may be more/less valuable for men or women.

    (If) you are trying to move up in life, generally increasing one or more of these can help.

    Sketch:

    It's neat to see different AI trends popping in 2022:

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    For fun I ran these same charts with all Elon Musk related companies. It seems certain keywords like specific car models have stable demand through the year:

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    I thought this would be a cool graph but it turned out not to be that insightful:

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    I hope you enjoyed these Friday tid-bits!
    Sincerely, 
    Neville Medhora

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    Podcast Experiment

    Hi, my name's Josh Haroldson. As a kid I never liked school all that much. What I really liked was summer vacation. Because that's where you got to work on whatever you wanted. For example:

    • A couple summers I had a lawn service which taught me you could make money on your own by providing a useful service for people. I only bought enough money to buy a snowboard, but now, I'm a top-rated freelancer on Upwork.
    • Another summer I learned to use my camera while backpacking. And a few years later ended up as an Instagram suggested user doing paid work for companies like Vayner Media and Food+Wine.

    Dang. Turns out those summer projects can be pretty useful.

    So, now that I'm a stay-at-home dad I figured, "Hey, why not bring back the summer project?"

    Enter, the podcast. AKA my Copywriting Course Summer Jam.

    What I want to learn:

    • How to launch and edit a podcast.
    • How to regularly create small pieces of re-usable content.
    • How to promote a podcast to my first 1000 downloads.

    My Goal:

    • Have fun and create something I can share with my kid someday.
    • Get to 1,000 downloads. That might not seem like a lot in the social media world, but me talking to a room full of 1,000 people would be pretty neat.

    Link to the podcast:https://dadalwaystoldme.com/
    Link to my social:  | @joshharoldson on Twitter
    Link to the blog: 
    https://joshharoldson.co/journal/

    How I plan on promoting it: 

    Instagram

    Newsletter

    Word of Mouth

    Time Limit: Q3 of 2022. June 1st to Sept 1st

    I will update this thread every few days with numbers and progress. Follow along!

     

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    What do YOU think "Copywriting" means? (20+ people's opinion)

    The actual definition of copywriting is:

    "Writing for marketing or advertising purposes."

    But with new mediums of communication like the internet, images, video....the definition of "copywriting" has expanded. Watch:

     

    "Copywriting is transferring information from my brain to your brain in the best way possible."

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    - Neville Medhora - @NevMed

    "Writing with the intent to generate a particular response within the reader."

    "Writing to engage an audience into thought or action."

    "The art of creating emotional connections."

    "Copywriting is word money."

    "Use words to get people to do what you want them to do."

    "Communicating ideas or value proposition clearly."

    - @mfb83

    "Copywriting is the transference of ideas in the most succinct yet relatable way to your audience."

    - Trevor R.

    "Copywriting is identifying a private want on a public scale, and channeling that want to meet your product."

    - Aquallect

    "Copywriting is selling better online."

    - Mason

    "Copywriting is learning how to hotwire your product/service into your ideal customer’s heart strings."

    - Cathy

    "Copywriting is the art of persuading someone to to buy your product or service."

    - Serhat

    "Copywriting teaches you how to catch peoples attention and convince them to buy your product."

    - John

    "Copywriting is improving communication skills and learning how to influence people on a bigger scale than just one by one."

    - John H

    Copywriting = Applied psychology + Storytelling. Goal of copywriting is to communicate to the audience "I have the solution of what you are needing most right now and I am offering you the help."

    "Using words to persuade."

    "Copywriting is an aspect of writing that is action-driven . It is the part of writing that is focused on influencing the reader to take a desired action."

    - Tyrah

    "Copywriting is closing a sale using the written word. A means to persuade, influence and engage clients to make a sale."

    - Olumayowa

    "Copywriting is a slippery slope where the goal of each sentence is for the person to read the next sentence."

    - Yap

    "Copywriting is the art of persuading people using words."

    "Copywriting is (a) understanding your customer and (b) showing them you understand in the most clear way possible."

    "Copywriting is simply transferring a message about a product from one brain to others so that they can buy."

    "explaining fully in detail in an interesting manner also showcasing benefits and other beneficial information."

    - @Teeushar 

    "Engaging prospects to take action such as to buy or subscribe to a product or service."

    "Getting people emotionally engaged to take action...one sentence at a time. Using the words they use to describe their own problems."

    "Throwing words in the hope it gets people to throw money."

    "Copywriting is psychology in disguise. It helps you make your readers crave your product/service using words."

    "Writing words that create the action you want."

    "Copywriting is the art of writing stuff that makes people take action."

    - Piyush

    "Copywriting is a term for all the arts of persuasion that use humanity’s most versatile technology: text."

    "Copywriting is conveying a message in a way to entice the consumer to take action or make them want to know more."

    "Like its first cousin business storytelling, copywriting is the art and science of making things matter and moving people to act."

    "Copywriting is sales in written form."

    - Rad

    Hope this post helps clarify what copywriting is!
    Hop inside our community to learn more about it.
    Sincerely, 
    Neville Medhora - Copywriter
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